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IELTS Speaking 模考与讲评:Part 1 生活话题、Part 2 人物/玩具长段表达、Part 3 抽象观点扩展

学员:宇墨同学 老师:滕达老师 课型:模考 主题:IELTS Speaking 模考与讲评:Part 1 日常话题、Part 2 描述帮助过自己的人和童年玩具、Part 3 帮助他人/玩具发展讨论

课后复习模块

练过的材料

  • IELTS Speaking Part 1 话题:home/apartment, taking photos, patience, food, shoes, spare time
  • IELTS Speaking Part 2 题目:describe a person who left a deep impression/helped you; describe a toy you liked in your childhood
  • IELTS Speaking Part 3 话题:helping others, children learning to help, companies and volunteer work, toys and child development

词汇和表达

  • apartment:I live in an apartment in Beijing.;公寓
  • hometown:老师提醒 home 题组里不一定是在问 hometown。;家乡
  • organized:keep my photos organized;整理好的/分类好的
  • patience:have patience when I study;耐心
  • I live in an apartment in Beijing.
  • My favorite part of my home is my bedroom because that's where I spend most of my time.

纠错重点

  • I live in apartment in Beijing.;I live in an apartment in Beijing.;apartment 前要加 an。
  • my favorite part of my home is the delicious food;My favorite part of my home is my bedroom.;which part of your home 指家里的物理区域。
  • I plan to live Beijing for a long time.;I plan to live in Beijing for a long time.;live in + 城市。
  • I think studying English need to pay a lot of patience.;I need to have patience when I study English.;have patience 表示有耐心;pay attention 表示集中注意力。
  • the people who give me the deepest impression;the person who left the deepest impression on me;单个人物题用 person;固定表达是 leave an impression on me。
  • He explains the question very patient;He can explain difficult concepts in an easy way. He is patient with me.;数学题可用 problem/concept;patient with me 表示对我有耐心。

可回读产出

  • 本节课口语段子改进版:{"part": "Part 2 - Describe a person who left a deep impression on you", "text": "Today I'd like to talk about the person who left the deepest impression on me. His name is Tom, and he was my classmate in high school. I have known him for about six years. We were in the same class, and even now, we still play basketball together on weekends. Tom is really good at math. When I had problems with math, he was always willing to help me. He was patient with me, and he could explain difficult concepts in an easy way. For example, when I did not understand a math problem, he did not just give me the answer. He explained the idea step by step and helped me practise. Because of his help, I got better scores in the exam. I think he is very helpful because he knows what other people really need. He also made me understand that helping others is a very good quality."};{"part": "Part 3 - Why do some people enjoy helping others?", "text": "I think some people enjoy helping others because they can get a sense of achievement. When they help other people solve problems, they feel happy and useful. Also, people who like helping others usually get respect from others. They may have more friends, and when they are in trouble, they may also get help from others in return."}

课后动作

  • 复习课堂改进版 Part 2 人物段子,重点练 person who left the deepest impression on me、be patient with me、explain difficult concepts in an easy way。
  • 复习 Part 3 扩展方法:先表态,再用例子、数字、古今对比或因果链展开。
  • 把 Lego 段子朗读到接近两分钟,注意语速放慢,不要急着说完。
  • 复习重点词:patience(耐心)、sense of achievement(成就感)、set a good example(树立榜样)、trustworthy(值得信任的)、instruction(说明书)、creativity(创造力)。

一、课堂推进时间轴

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第一次模考开场与 Part 1:home/apartment

课堂推进:课堂先按 IELTS Speaking 模考形式开始,老师询问住处、家里喜欢的区域、是否长期住在北京、家附近是否安静。学生能回答基本信息,但把 home 理解成 hometown,回答了食物,课后讲评中老师提醒要听清题目指的是家里的物理空间。

老师处理:老师用考试问答推进,并在讲评中解释 home 在这组题里通常指 apartment/house 里的房间或区域,不是 hometown。

学生原始输出:I live in apartment in Beijing. / I think, hmm my my favorite part of my home is the delicious food. / I plan to live Beijing for a long time. / there is a park nearby my my apartment.

老师示范 / 修改方向:I live in an apartment in Beijing. / My favorite part of my home is my bedroom because that's where I spend most of my time. It's comfortable and it's got everything I need. / I plan to live in Beijing and work in Beijing in the future. / There is a park near my apartment, which is really quiet.

复习抓手:apartment(公寓)前面要加 an:an apartment;home 在 apartment/house 题组里通常指家里的房间或区域,不是 hometown(家乡);which is really quiet 可以用来补充说明 park(公园)

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第一次模考 Part 1:taking photos

课堂推进:接着讨论拍照。学生说自己不喜欢拍照,但看到美丽风景会拍,也说明更喜欢用手机,因为方便分享。老师肯定了部分答案长度,同时提醒如果没听懂题目,可以请考官解释问题。

老师处理:老师追问和改写题目,讲评时示范如何把短答案补充成自然长度,并提醒使用 Could you please explain the question?

学生原始输出:No, I don't like taking photos. / I think, will I see a beautiful scenery? I usually take photos. / I like taking photos with my phone because it is very convenient and I can. Share the photos by which I very quickly. / No, because I don't have a lot of photos, so I I don't I don't use to organize and keep it.

老师示范 / 修改方向:Actually, when I see beautiful scenery, I usually take photos. / I like taking photos with my phone because it is very convenient. I can share the photos by WeChat very quickly. / No, I don't have a lot of photos, so I don't need to keep them organized. / Could you please explain the question?

复习抓手:scenery(风景)前面可说 beautiful scenery;share the photos by WeChat very quickly 可以表达“用微信快速分享照片”;organized(整理好的)可用于照片分类;没听清时可说 Could you please explain the question?

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第一次模考 Part 1:patience

课堂推进:随后话题转到 patience(耐心)。学生能表达自己是有耐心的人,也能联系学习英语需要耐心。老师讲评时纠正 have patience 和 pay attention 的区别,并建议用具体例子扩展答案。

老师处理:老师指出语法和词义问题,示范用例子说明自己有耐心,也提醒考试中短答案后最好主动举例。

学生原始输出:Yes, I'm patient person. / yes, I'm a patient. When I was young. / I think studying English need to pay a lot of patience. Because I need to read a lot of essay and I need to, write something. / I think it really need patience.

老师示范 / 修改方向:I'm a patient person. / I'm especially patient when I do the things that I like. / I need to have patience when I study. / Patience is super important, especially when you're learning new things.

复习抓手:patient(有耐心的)作形容词:I'm a patient person;patience(耐心)作名词:have patience;pay attention(集中注意力)和 have patience(有耐心)不要混用;Part 1 答案可以加 for example(例如)

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第一次模考 Part 2:描述留下深刻印象并帮助过自己的人

课堂推进:Part 2 中学生描述高中同学 Tom,说明他擅长数学,会耐心解释题目,并帮助自己取得更好成绩。讲评时老师重点修正 person、left the deepest impression on me、problem/concept、be patient with me 等表达,并建议用数字和具体事件扩充两分钟内容。

老师处理:老师先听完整段落,再逐句讲评关键词、语法和内容扩展方法,示范如何加入一次考试分数、持续辅导时间等具体细节。

学生原始输出:Today I would like to talk about, the people who, who give me the deepest impression. He's Tom, my classmate in high school, and I know him for, six years. / He explains the question very, uh, patient and he give me a very simple way to solve the.Question / So I get a good scores in the exam.

老师示范 / 修改方向:Today I'd like to talk about the person who left the deepest impression on me. / He can explain difficult concepts in an easy way. / He is patient with me. / For example, I once got 60 in a math exam. He spent two months helping me for two hours every weekend, and in the end I got 80.

复习抓手:person(一个人)比 people 更符合单数人物题;left the deepest impression on me(给我留下最深印象);problem(题目/难题)比 question 更适合数学题语境;concept(概念)可用于数学概念;Part 2 可以用具体数字和小故事把内容说满

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第一次模考 Part 3:帮助他人

课堂推进:Part 3 讨论为什么人们喜欢帮助别人、现在的人是否不如过去乐于助人、孩子如何学习帮助别人、公司是否应鼓励志愿服务。学生能表达基本立场,老师补充了 sense of achievement(成就感)、get respect(获得尊重)、in return(作为回报)和逻辑递进的答题方式。

老师处理:老师针对每道 Part 3 问题讲解如何把答案加长:先表态,再做今昔对比、举例或做因果链推导。

学生原始输出:Because people will happy when when he when they help other people to solve the question. / I think yes because someone in this society society likes to cheat. / parents can, uh, to give him a good example for the children. / this college may have a good reputation.

老师示范 / 修改方向:People get a sense of achievement when they help others. / In the past, people were more honest and they liked to help others. But now some people cheat people who like to help others. / Parents can set a good example. / If the company has a good reputation, they are more trustworthy in the eyes of consumers, and it can benefit the company in the end.

复习抓手:sense of achievement(成就感);set a good example(树立好榜样);trustworthy(值得信任的);Part 3 可以用“如果 A,就 B;如果 B,就 C”的逻辑链扩展;古今对比题可以先说过去怎样,再说现在怎样

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第一次模考讲评总结

课堂推进:第一次讲评最后,老师总结了几个主要复习点:Part 1 注意题目范围,Part 2 控制时间和语速,Part 3 要把答案说长,并通过数字、具体例子和逻辑递进补充内容。

老师处理:老师进行阶段性总结,指出 Part 2 要慢一点,Part 3 要更长,并给出可操作的扩展方法。

学生原始输出:那我肯定就是,那比如说先说,比如说我进步啥的。是啊。再说说这个什么,这是传统美德,我觉得这确实很有帮助,我就再多说一点,然后语速整体就慢一点呢。

老师示范 / 修改方向:Part Two,记住时间,两分钟,慢一点。然后 Part Three 就是答案长文。如果让答案再更多呢?给数字,给具体的例子,流水账。

复习抓手:Part 2 要控制两分钟并放慢语速;Part 3 需要比 Part 1 更充分;数字、例子、因果链都可以帮助扩展答案

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第二次模考 Part 1:food

课堂推进:第二次模考从食物话题开始。学生回答小时候喜欢汉堡,后来口味变化为更喜欢蔬菜,也能说明夏天吃沙拉和冰淇淋、冬天吃火锅。整体能围绕生活经历作答。

老师处理:老师按 IELTS Part 1 继续提问,并确认学生回答。

学生原始输出:When was child, uh I like to eat hamburger because it's very delicious and it have bread and meat. / When was when was child, and I like to eat meat and like hamburgers or beef, but not.But not I like to eat vegetable because it let me feel comfortable. / in summer I like to eat salad because it's cool.And I also eat ice cream in in summer, but in in winter I like to eat hot pot as it it make me feel warm.

复习抓手:food(食物)话题可以从 childhood(童年)、season(季节)、home-cooked food(家常菜)展开;原因可以用 because 连接;季节题可以用 summer/winter 做对比

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第二次模考 Part 1:home-cooked food, shoes, spare time

课堂推进:之后讨论家常菜、鞋子和空闲时间。学生表达更喜欢家常菜,平时穿篮球鞋,买鞋重视舒适度;在空闲时间会打篮球或和朋友吃饭,也认为现在大家都比较忙。

老师处理:老师持续以考试节奏推进 Part 1 多个生活话题,未在该段展开讲评。

学生原始输出:I think I like home cooked food.Although the restaurant food have more spice and spicy and it may it may it like it may have a good taste, but I think the the home cooked food is.Foucher than a restaurant. / I usually wear basketball shoes because I like to play basketball. / I think I like comfort. / I usually play basketball with my friend or go to restaurant to eat meal with my friend when I was in.Free time.

复习抓手:comfort(舒适度)可用于鞋子选择;basketball shoes(篮球鞋)可以和个人爱好连接;spare time/free time(空闲时间)题可以回答活动和原因

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第二次模考 Part 2:描述童年喜欢的玩具

课堂推进:Part 2 中学生描述童年喜欢的 Lego(乐高)。他说明这是父亲因考试奖励送的礼物,自己按照说明书完成了一个大机器人,并进行了创意改装。学生还提到这带来 sense of achievement(成就感),也训练了阅读说明和创造能力。

老师处理:老师给出题卡时间,学生完成两分钟作答,时间到时老师提醒并进入 Part 3。

学生原始输出:But today I would like to talk about my favorite toy.It is.Uh.Lego. / my father gave me for a.Uh.Reward about my exam / I read the notion about the Lego and I followed I followed the instruction to complete it. / I changed it weapon and I changed the color about the uh robots. / it gives me a lot of sense of achievement because I complete a very big.A big uh.Robots

复习抓手:Lego(乐高);reward(奖励);instruction(说明书);sense of achievement(成就感);creativity(创造力)

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第二次模考 Part 3:儿童玩具的变化与作用

课堂推进:Part 3 中老师追问玩具多年变化、电子玩具是否有益、玩具在儿童成长中的作用。学生尝试从材料变化、趣味性、乐高训练阅读和创造力等角度回答。

老师处理:老师继续提问较抽象的 Part 3 话题,考察学生延展观点的能力。

学生原始输出:I think.Uh, the material materials about toys changed in the past. / I think electronic toys often have more interesting.Uh for children and they can they can see the change of toy. / toys sometimes can, pay a very pay a pay a role of teacher about.Children's uh grow, a growing. / Lego is a good example.And this can train.Children how to read and how to create

复习抓手:materials(材料)可用于描述玩具变化;electronic toys(电子玩具);development(发展/成长)题需要说明玩具对孩子的具体帮助;Lego 可以作为例子支持观点

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第二次模考 Part 3:是否限制玩具数量

课堂推进:最后讨论父母是否应该限制孩子拥有的玩具数量。学生认为应该限制,并尝试把这一点和控制欲望、长大后管理金钱联系起来。

老师处理:老师提出最后一道 Part 3 问题,并在学生询问“天性”时给予词语确认。

学生原始输出:I think yes because, children like toys. / I think parents can.Limit the the numbers of toy to tell the children how to control the ambition in their life. / when the children growing up for adults and they have money for work, so I think they need to know how to control ambition and to how to use the money about himself.

复习抓手:limit(限制);ambition 在这里不完全等于“欲望”,复习时可换成 desire(欲望)或 wants(想要的东西);可以把玩具数量和 money management(金钱管理)联系起来

二、本节课亮点表现

本节课完成了两轮 IELTS Speaking 模考相关练习,话题包括 home、photos、patience、helping others、food、shoes、spare time 和 toys。

学生能持续完成 Part 1 和 Part 2 回答,并能在 Part 2 中围绕人物 Tom 和童年 Lego 展开叙述。

老师重点讲解了 Part 2 用数字和具体事件扩充内容,以及 Part 3 用对比、例子和因果链把答案说长。

课堂中特别提醒:公开复习时要保留学生原始表达,再对照老师给出的修正版学习。

三、本节课用了哪些材料

四、学生课堂输出

home

I live in apartment in Beijing.

home

I think, hmm my my favorite part of my home is the delicious food.

photos

I like taking photos with my phone because it is very convenient and I can. Share the photos by which I very quickly.

patience

I think studying English need to pay a lot of patience.

Part 2 person

Today I would like to talk about, the people who, who give me the deepest impression. He's Tom, my classmate in high school, and I know him for, six years.

Part 2 person

He explains the question very, uh, patient and he give me a very simple way to solve the.Question

Part 3 helping others

Because people will people will happy when when he when they help uh. Other people to solve the question.

Part 2 toy

But today I would like to talk about my favorite toy.It is.Uh.Lego.

Part 2 toy

I read the notion about the Lego and I followed I followed the instruction to complete it.

Part 3 toys

I think parents can.Limit the the numbers of toy to tell the children how to control the ambition in their life.

五、本节课口语段子改进版

以下是按课堂已讲方向整理的课后复习改进版,保留课堂中的 Tom、数学帮助、Lego、帮助他人、公司声誉等材料,不新增课堂外立场。

Today I'd like to talk about the person who left the deepest impression on me. His name is Tom, and he was my classmate in high school. I have known him for about six years. We were in the same class, and even now, we still play basketball together on weekends. Tom is really good at math. When I had problems with math, he was always willing to help me. He was patient with me, and he could explain difficult concepts in an easy way. For example, when I did not understand a math problem, he did not just give me the answer. He explained the idea step by step and helped me practise. Because of his help, I got better scores in the exam. I think he is very helpful because he knows what other people really need. He also made me understand that helping others is a very good quality.

I think some people enjoy helping others because they can get a sense of achievement. When they help other people solve problems, they feel happy and useful. Also, people who like helping others usually get respect from others. They may have more friends, and when they are in trouble, they may also get help from others in return.

Yes, I think people may be less helpful now than in the past. In the past, people lived in smaller communities, and many people knew each other well. So they were more likely to help each other. But nowadays, many people do not even know their neighbours. Also, some people may cheat others who try to help them, so people become more careful.

Yes, I think companies should encourage their employees to do volunteer work. If a company does this, it can gain a good reputation. If the company has a good reputation, it will be more trustworthy in the eyes of consumers. Then it may do more business, and in the end, this can also benefit the company.

Today I'd like to talk about my favorite toy in my childhood. It was a Lego set. I first received it when I was six years old in primary school. My father gave it to me as a reward for my exam. I thought it was very interesting. I read the instructions and followed them step by step. After about one month, I completed a big robot. Later, I also changed some parts of the robot with my own creativity. For example, I changed its weapon and its color. I really liked this toy because it gave me a strong sense of achievement. I completed a big robot by myself, and that made me very happy. Also, it trained my ability to read instructions and solve problems, so I think it was a very important toy for me.

I think toys can play an important role in a child's development. Some toys are not only fun, but also useful. For example, Lego can train children to read instructions and create new things. When children build something by themselves, they can also get a sense of achievement. So I think good toys can help children develop their reading ability, creativity, and problem-solving skills.

Yes, I think parents should limit the number of toys children have. Children may always want more toys, but they need to learn how to control their desires. If parents set some limits, children can understand that they cannot get everything they want. When they grow up and start to use their own money, this lesson may also help them manage money better.

六、本节课纠错

原句问题推荐表达记忆方法
I live in apartment in Beijing.I live in an apartment in Beijing.apartment 前要加 an。
my favorite part of my home is the delicious foodMy favorite part of my home is my bedroom.which part of your home 指家里的物理区域。
I plan to live Beijing for a long time.I plan to live in Beijing for a long time.live in + 城市。
I think studying English need to pay a lot of patience.I need to have patience when I study English.have patience 表示有耐心;pay attention 表示集中注意力。
the people who give me the deepest impressionthe person who left the deepest impression on me单个人物题用 person;固定表达是 leave an impression on me。
He explains the question very patientHe can explain difficult concepts in an easy way. He is patient with me.数学题可用 problem/concept;patient with me 表示对我有耐心。
parents can, uh, to give him a good exampleParents can set a good example for children.set a good example 是课堂示范表达。
the company can gain good reputationThe company can gain a good reputation.reputation 前可加 a good。

七、课后任务

八、方法和词汇

方法总结

  • Part 1:短答案后可以主动补一个例子,避免回答太短。
  • Part 2:用具体时间、分数、频率等数字扩充内容。
  • Part 2:语速放慢,围绕一个事件多讲细节。
  • Part 3:可以用古今对比回答社会变化类题目。
  • Part 3:可以用 if A, then B, then C 的因果链把答案拉长。

补充词汇

  • community:社区;People in the past lived in smaller communities.
  • neighbour:邻居;Nowadays, many people do not know their neighbours.
  • in return:作为回报;They may get help from others in return.
  • benefit:使受益/好处;This can benefit the company in the end.
  • desire:欲望/想要的东西;Children need to learn how to control their desires.
  • money management:金钱管理;This lesson can help children with money management.