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口语 · 2026-01-21

张宇墨同学的课程学习报告

雅思口语 Part 1 高频话题即时回答、Part 2 北京地点题两分钟表达、Part 3 城市与旅游观点展开

学员:宇墨同学 老师:滕达老师 课型:正课 主题:雅思口语 Part 1 公共场所、拥挤场所、颜色、梦、睡眠;Part 2 北京旅行地点题;Part 3 城市、旅游与科技

课后复习模块

练过的材料

  • Part 1 话题:public places(公共场所)、crowded places(拥挤的地方)、colors(颜色)、dreams(梦)、sleep(睡眠)
  • Part 2 话题:Describe a city you have been to and would like to visit again;Describe a long journey you would like to take again
  • Part 3 话题:城市生活、旅游影响、科技改变旅行、政府如何减少景点拥堵、未来旅行

词汇和表达

  • Public places can promote the economy of the city.
  • Crowded places make me feel depressed and uncomfortable.
  • White shoes get dirty very easily.
  • If I don't sleep, I don't have the energy to complete my tasks.
  • Like I just mentioned, I go to parks, cinema and the shopping mall.
  • The last time I was in a crowded place was last week, and I went to a shopping mall.

纠错重点

  • economic 是形容词;这里需要名词 economy(经济)。;public places can improve the economic of the city;public places can promote the economy of the city
  • public places 是复数;recent years(近几年)前可用 in。;many of public places is rebuilt;many public places have been rebuilt in recent years
  • places 复数;make 保持原形;depressed / uncomfortable 更自然。;crowded place make me feel repressed;crowded places make me feel depressed and uncomfortable
  • listen 后面要加 to。;I usually listen a quiet music;I usually listen to quiet music
  • go to Beijing;one year ago 用单数 year。;I went Beijing one years ago;I went to Beijing one year ago
  • impression(印象)是名词。;what gave me the deepest impressed;what gave me the deepest impression

可回读产出

  • 本节课口语段子改进版:{"topic": "Part 1 - Public places", "text": "Yes, I often go to public places. I usually go to the cinema, the park, or the shopping mall. I think public places are important in cities because they can promote the economy of the city. Recently, many public places in my city have been rebuilt. I prefer outdoor public places because I like sports, and I like going to parks and basketball courts."};{"topic": "Part 1 - Crowded places", "text": "No, I don't like crowded places because they make me feel depressed and uncomfortable. The last time I was in a crowded place was last weekend, and I went to a cinema. When I am in a crowded place, I feel uncomfortable because there are a lot of people and it is noisy. I think there are more crowded places now because of the increase of population. So I would like to avoid crowded places."}

课后动作

  • 朗读本节课整理出的口语段子,重点练 public places、crowded places、colors、dreams、sleep 和 Beijing Part 2。
  • 复习本节课词汇:economy(经济)、depressed(压抑的)、uncomfortable(不舒服的)、get dirty easily(容易变脏)、energy(精力)、historical sites(历史景点)、landscapes(自然风景)、magnificent(壮观的)。
  • 练习 Part 2 北京题时注意慢慢说,用景点、美食、文化和再次想去的原因把时间撑满。

一、课堂推进时间轴

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Part 1 公共场所话题启动

课堂推进:课堂从 public places(公共场所)开始,老师先引导学生理解题目中的 often 是在问频率,并让学生列举常见公共场所。

老师处理:老师解释题目问法,确认学生能说出公园、电影院、商场,并示范一整句回答。

学生原始输出:嗯嗯,呃,公园、电影院、商场。

老师示范 / 修改方向:I go to public places on a daily basis, such as the shopping mall, the park, or the cinema.

复习抓手:often 是问频率;public places(公共场所)可以用 park, cinema, shopping mall 举例;Part 1 可以用一句完整回答,不需要展开太长

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Part 1 已提过内容的复用

课堂推进:老师讲解如果考试中遇到和前面相似的问题,可以用 Like I just mentioned(就像我刚才提到的)自然复用前面的答案。

老师处理:老师示范如何回答 What public places do you like to visit。

老师示范 / 修改方向:Like I just mentioned, I go to parks, cinema and the shopping mall.

复习抓手:遇到重复或相似问题可以说 Like I just mentioned;不要因为前面说过就完全不答;用简短自然的方式复用答案

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Part 1 公共场所重要性与 Part 3 区分

课堂推进:学生尝试说明公共场所对城市经济的作用。老师肯定思路,并提醒这类较长的解释更适合 Part 3,Part 1 只需要补一句原因即可。

老师处理:老师肯定学生关于促进经济的思路,同时指出 Part 1 不宜展开太长。

学生原始输出:because I think,呃,most of,呃,public places can improve the economic of the city。嗯,example like,呃,for,for example like,呃,cinema,嗯,cinema buy the movie about the movie makers and and he he he sells the movie,a,sell sell the movie for all the.residents of this city, so people to buy the tickets and it it promote the economic about city.

老师示范 / 修改方向:Yes, I think public places are important in cities because they can promote the economy of the city.

复习抓手:promote the economy(促进经济)可用于公共场所重要性;Part 1 回答要短;Part 3 才更适合详细讲道理

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Part 1 公共场所变化与室内外偏好

课堂推进:学生练习回答城市公共场所是否变化,以及更喜欢室内还是室外公共场所。老师鼓励学生保持简短回答。

老师处理:老师追问最近变化和 indoor/outdoor(室内/室外)偏好,并反馈学生已经能想开且不再过度解释。

学生原始输出:I think yes, uh many uh many of uh public places is rebuilt in city.uh in recent years, I think. / I think I like uh outdoor public places because. 呃,I think I like sports啊,I I like to go to the park or basketball court.I think.

老师示范 / 修改方向:I prefer outdoor public places because I like sports, and I like going to parks or basketball courts.

复习抓手:recent years(近几年)可用于变化题;outdoor public places(室外公共场所)可以连接 sports;Part 1 不需要每题都长篇解释

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Part 1 拥挤场所话题

课堂推进:课堂进入 crowded places(拥挤的地方)。学生表达不喜欢拥挤场所,因为会感觉压抑、不舒服。老师帮助学生把表达修正为 depressed / uncomfortable。

老师处理:老师引导学生先回答喜欢或不喜欢,再补原因,并示范情绪表达。

学生原始输出:I think no。先答,是或不是啊?I don't like.Don't like public uh crowded place。很好,然后呢?为什么呢?Because,呃,I think it a public uh crowded place make me feel repressed.or.Okay.Comfortable.

老师示范 / 修改方向:I don't like crowded places because they make me feel depressed and uncomfortable.

复习抓手:crowded places(拥挤的地方)强调人多或噪音多;先直接回答 I don't like;depressed(压抑的)和 uncomfortable(不舒服的)可用于感受题

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Part 1 过去时间题与感受题

课堂推进:老师讲解 last time(上一次)这类过去时问题的答法,并让学生用一个时间点和地点补全答案。

老师处理:老师示范 The last time I was... was... 的句型,并提醒考试中可以编一个合理时间和地点。

学生原始输出:The last time.Last time I went, I went to the crowded place. / Was.Let's go用吧,这语法一个动词。

老师示范 / 修改方向:The last time I was in a crowded place was last week, and I went to a shopping mall.

复习抓手:last time 题目通常需要过去时;The last time I was in a crowded place was... 是可用句型;回答要合理即可

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Part 1 人口增加与避开拥挤场所

课堂推进:学生尝试说明现在拥挤场所更多的原因。老师把学生的意思整理成 because of the increase of population(因为人口增加)。

老师处理:老师纠正表达,把中文思路转成更自然的英文句子。

学生原始输出:because recent year the population of of China is increased seriously seriously. I think.All the place, all the uh.Uh, all the public place, uh, will more than people than before, have more people than people.

老师示范 / 修改方向:Because of the increase of population in China, there are more people in crowded places compared to the past.

复习抓手:increase of population(人口增加)可用于解释拥挤;compared to the past(和过去相比)适合比较题;avoid crowded places(避开拥挤场所)可和 depressed / nervous 连接

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Part 1 颜色话题

课堂推进:课堂转入 colors(颜色)话题,学生练习最喜欢的颜色、是否穿喜欢颜色的衣服、不喜欢的颜色、颜色是否影响心情和房间颜色。

老师处理:老师追问原因,并示范 white clothes or white shoes get dirty very easily 等表达。

学生原始输出:my favorite color is uh blue. / I I I don't like uh white. / the clo uh the clothes or the shoes are white is.Very easy to to be dirt too dirt uh too dirty and I don't I I don't like to wash them.

老师示范 / 修改方向:Because white shoes or white clothes get dirty very easily, and they're difficult to take care of. I don't like washing them.

复习抓手:get dirty very easily(很容易变脏);take care of(打理、照顾)可用于衣服鞋子;cool colors calm me down(冷色让我平静)

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考试报名与阶段性考试讨论

老师处理:老师询问学生是否报名考试,并说明真实考试和模考的区别;学生解释目前不想报考的原因。

学生原始输出:没有。要不要报一次啊?我觉得不用。不报吗?对,因为我非常清楚自己现在能拿多少分。我觉得报就是浪费钱太贵了,我觉得没没有意义。

老师示范 / 修改方向:模考毕竟不能取代真实的考试;老师尊重学生意见,也提醒阶段性真实考试有不同意义。

复习抓手:学生目前倾向先通过模考判断水平;老师提醒真实考试和模考功能不同;该内容属于内部跟进,不放入公开学习页

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Part 1 第一轮闭眼复盘

课堂推进:老师模拟考试方式,不让学生看题干,按公共场所、拥挤场所和颜色话题连续提问,训练即时反应。

老师处理:老师提醒 Part 1 考试时没有题干可看,并连续提问。

学生原始输出:I think yes.I usually go cinema. / I like to go shopping or go park. / I think yes because most of public places can promote the economic of the city. / I think no because it make me feel depressed.

老师示范 / 修改方向:考试中听题后直接回答,注意 go to the cinema / go to the park,以及 public places can promote the economy of the city.

复习抓手:Part 1 要训练听题即时答;go to the cinema / go to the park 更自然;economic 应改为 economy

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Part 1 梦与睡眠新话题

课堂推进:课堂进入 dreams(梦)和 sleep(睡眠)话题,学生练习梦是否有意义、是否做过成真的梦、睡眠时长、是否午睡、睡不着怎么办等问题。

老师处理:老师即时纠正 impression、energy、habit 等词,并在学生不会说褪黑素时,引导换成会说的表达。

学生原始输出:Yes, I often remember my dreams and it made me feel and it gave me a deep impression. / I I usually I usually呃,咋说呢?你想说啥?你平时是怎样的?褪黑素这这这这个说不会说呀? / I think yes because if I don't sleep, I don't have the emerge uh emerge emerge to.To uh complete my task in in in the day.

老师示范 / 修改方向:I usually listen to some quiet music. / I don't have the habit to take naps during the day. / If I don't sleep, I don't have the energy to complete my tasks.

复习抓手:impression(印象)是名词;habit(习惯)可用于 take naps;energy(精力)不是 emerge;不会说真实方法时,可以换成会说且合理的表达

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Part 1 梦与睡眠复盘

课堂推进:老师再次用不看文字的方式复盘 dreams 和 sleep 话题,学生能较快给出完整回答。

老师处理:老师连续提问,帮助学生把刚学过的内容转化为口头输出。

学生原始输出:Yes, I often remember my dream. / Yes, I think the dream can reflect the the desire that that you want in the actual world. / I usually sleep five hours a day. / No, I don't have the habit to take a nap. / I usually listen a quiet music.

老师示范 / 修改方向:I usually listen to quiet music. It helps me fall asleep.

复习抓手:reflect the desire(反映愿望)可用于 dreams;five hours a day 可用于睡眠时长;listen to quiet music 更自然

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Part 2 北京地点题搭建

课堂推进:课堂进入 Part 2,题目是 describe a city you have been to and would like to visit again。老师引导学生选择北京,并按地点、时间、人物、活动、感受搭建内容。

老师处理:老师示范 Part 2 开头、北京位置和首都信息,并提醒小问没有问 who 也可以补人物。

学生原始输出:北京可以没问题啊 / I visit my family members in Beijing and I wonder with my friends and my my parents。

老师示范 / 修改方向:There are many cities I would like to visit again, such as Beijing, Shanghai and Guangzhou. Today I would like to talk about Beijing. Beijing is located in the northern part of China and is the capital city of China.

复习抓手:Part 2 开头可以用 Today I would like to talk about...;be located in(位于);时间、地点、人物、事件、感受都可补充

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Part 2 景点、美食与词汇分层

课堂推进:老师帮助学生把北京素材分层:tourist attractions(旅游景点)、historical sites(历史景点)、landscapes(自然风景),并加入 Peking duck(北京烤鸭)等美食。

老师处理:老师解释 landscape 和 historical sites 的区别,并示范更有顺序的表达。

学生原始输出:I went to the Tiananmen and Tiananmen Square,嗯,再描述一下。It is very beautiful and make me feel shock about the. / I went to the Tiananmen Square and I think.嗯嗯,然后开边就说,I think it is呃significant and呃那个那个壮观那个词

老师示范 / 修改方向:I went to many historical sites such as Tiananmen Square and the Great Wall, and they are huge and magnificent. I was shocked by how pretty they were. I also tasted traditional Beijing dishes like hot pot and Peking duck.

复习抓手:tourist attractions(旅游景点)是上位词;historical sites(历史景点)适合天安门广场、长城;landscapes(自然风景)适合山、河、湖等自然景观;magnificent(壮观的)可用于景点描述

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Part 2 北京完整两分钟输出

课堂推进:学生完成第一版北京 Part 2 两分钟回答,包含城市选择、出行方式、历史景点、香山、美食和想再去的原因。

老师处理:老师计时两分钟,并提醒学生慢慢说、别着急。

学生原始输出:There are many cities in China such as Shanghai, Xi'an, and Guangzhou.But today I would like to talk about the capital of China, Beijing. And I went Beijing one years ago, and I I went there by plane with my family members.And I do a lot of interesting things in Beijing.First, I went to a a lot of history historical site and beautiful landscape. I went to Tiananmen Square and Great Wall.I think it is very magnificent, and I.It made me very shock how how pretty the historical site was, and I I also went to a a a pretty land landscape.My family with an an I went uh went to Xiangshan and we climbed this mountain and and see the beautiful beautiful landscape in the top of the mountain. I think it is very beautiful.And I also tasted many traditional be Beijing food.Uh, what um嗯,what make me feel uh what what gave me the.Deepest impressed is big a cooking烤鸭,I think it is very delicious. Hmm, I think Beijing culture is attracting me a lot, and it is unique and it different of uh different of with all the all other cities.So I want to win Beijing again.It made me feel very happy.

老师示范 / 修改方向:任务达成,内容已经能支撑两分钟;可修正为 I went to Beijing one year ago / historical sites / I was shocked / the deepest impression / Peking duck / I want to visit Beijing again.

复习抓手:Part 2 要慢慢说,充满时间;可用景点、美食、文化、再次想去的理由展开;注意 one year ago、was shocked、deepest impression 等表达

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Part 2 long journey 同素材改写

课堂推进:老师让学生把北京素材改成 a long journey you would like to take again,训练同一素材适配不同题目。

老师处理:老师提醒如果时间不够,可以补充拍照、社交媒体或大学等内容。

学生原始输出:There are many famous famous cities in China such as Xi'an, Shanghai, Guangzhou.But today I would like to talk about the capital of China, Beijing.嗯,I I went there one years ago, and I I went to Beijing by plane. I think it is the fastest way... I know Beijing have a lot of famous university like be the like the Beijing University or Tsinghua University, and I want to go there.

老师示范 / 修改方向:可以把地点题素材转成 journey 题,增加 by plane, fastest way, famous universities like Peking University and Tsinghua University.

复习抓手:同一素材可以迁移到相近 Part 2 题目;journey 题可以强调交通方式和旅程经历;补充 famous universities(著名大学)可以延长内容

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Part 3 城市与乡村

课堂推进:课堂进入 Part 3。老师讲解城市和乡村对比题,建议围绕城市的教育、医疗、购物等优势展开。

老师处理:老师把学生想到的经济、教育、医疗转成更容易说的名词表达,如 schools、hospitals、shopping malls。

学生原始输出:城市有什么好呢?其实刚才你的part two已经提到了,比如说教育,对不对?对。多了经济教育。对经济教育医疗是不是?医疗的基础设施,但这怎么说?

老师示范 / 修改方向:Many people prefer to live in cities for many reasons. The first is education. You can find the best universities in cities like Beijing, such as Peking University and Tsinghua University. Also, there are more hospitals in the city.

复习抓手:不会说抽象词时,可以换成具体名词;education 可换成 schools / universities;medical care 可换成 hospitals;购物和经济可以用 shopping malls 展开

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Part 3 旅游正负影响

课堂推进:老师和学生讨论 tourism(旅游业)对本地社区的正面和负面影响:促进经济、传播文化,也可能带来噪音和垃圾。

老师处理:老师把学生的中文思路转成口语答案,提醒太复杂的经济结构问题可以暂时避免。

学生原始输出:正面影响首先旅游业是呃最低成本去促进经济发展的一个措施,这是。然后嗯,旅旅游业还能利于本地传统文化的传播。

老师示范 / 修改方向:The positive impact is that it can bring in more money and boost the local economy. The negative impact is that tourists can create waste and noise.

复习抓手:boost the local economy(促进当地经济);traditional culture(传统文化);waste and noise(垃圾和噪音)

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Part 3 科技、限流与未来旅行

课堂推进:老师讲解科技如何改变旅行、政府如何减少热门景点拥堵,以及未来人们是否会更多旅行。

老师处理:老师引导学生从交通、旅行 App、限流、公共交通和未来太空旅行等角度组织答案。

学生原始输出:交通。嗯。嗯,比如说交通发展,也有有了飞机,那就可以去国外,就比如例子。 / 政府可以制定政策或者限流。 / 随着经济的发展,那人们有了钱,他就希望可以多出去看看。

老师示范 / 修改方向:Technology helps people travel faster and further. Apps can help people find interesting things to do. The government can control the number of visitors and improve public transportation. In the future, people may even travel in space.

复习抓手:technology(科技)题可以从交通和 App 展开;control the number of visitors(控制游客数量);improve public transportation(改善公共交通);future travel 可适当打开思路,但仍要说清楚

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课后口语材料与背诵方式调整

老师处理:老师听取学生关于中午背诵材料太难的反馈,并承诺整理更适合口语课的段子发到群里。

学生原始输出:让我背那种科技性特强的,背为什么这种猴子就是他能能能更能生存,他进化出什么系统来?我觉得这对我口语没有什么帮助,我不会说这种东西。

老师示范 / 修改方向:从明天开始,中午背的段子会更多来自口语课,符合口语要求。

复习抓手:学生能接受朗读,但觉得复杂阅读类材料难以背诵;后续应提供更贴近口语课堂的可背素材;课后材料需要降低复杂度并贴合输出目标

二、本节课亮点表现

宇墨同学本节课能在不看题干的情况下完成多组 Part 1 连续问答,反应速度比前面更快。

Part 2 北京题完成了一版接近两分钟的完整回答,包含城市、交通、景点、美食、文化和再次想去的原因。

课堂重点训练了把中文想法换成会说的英文,例如把“医疗”转成 hospitals(医院),把“教育”转成 schools / universities(学校/大学)。

老师多次提醒 Part 1 不要讲太长,Part 3 才需要更完整地讲原因和例子。

三、本节课用了哪些材料

四、学生课堂输出

Public places

because I think,呃,most of,呃,public places can improve the economic of the city。

Crowded places

I don't like.Don't like public uh crowded place。Because,呃,I think it a public uh crowded place make me feel repressed.or.Okay.Comfortable.

Colors

the clo uh the clothes or the shoes are white is.Very easy to to be dirt too dirt uh too dirty and I don't I I don't like to wash them.

Dreams

Yes, I think the dream can reflect the the desire that that you want in the actual world.

Sleep

I think yes because if I don't sleep, I don't have energy to complete my task.

Part 2 Beijing

There are many cities in China such as Shanghai, Xi'an, and Guangzhou.But today I would like to talk about the capital of China, Beijing. And I went Beijing one years ago, and I I went there by plane with my family members.

五、本节课口语段子改进版

按课堂已讲方向整理的课后复习改进版,保留本节课的北京、公共场所、拥挤场所、颜色、梦、睡眠和旅游话题内容。

Part 1 - Public places

Yes, I often go to public places. I usually go to the cinema, the park, or the shopping mall. I think public places are important in cities because they can promote the economy of the city. Recently, many public places in my city have been rebuilt. I prefer outdoor public places because I like sports, and I like going to parks and basketball courts.

Part 1 - Crowded places

No, I don't like crowded places because they make me feel depressed and uncomfortable. The last time I was in a crowded place was last weekend, and I went to a cinema. When I am in a crowded place, I feel uncomfortable because there are a lot of people and it is noisy. I think there are more crowded places now because of the increase of population. So I would like to avoid crowded places.

Part 1 - Colors

My favorite color is blue because I think it is beautiful. I usually wear clothes in my favorite color because blue clothes make me feel happy. I don't like white very much because white shoes and white clothes get dirty very easily, and they are difficult to take care of. I think colors can affect my mood. When I see my favorite color, it makes me feel happy. If I paint my room, I would choose white because white walls make the room look clean and neat.

Part 1 - Dreams and sleep

Yes, I often remember my dreams because some dreams give me a deep impression. I like hearing about other people's dreams because I think it is interesting. I think dreams can reflect the desires that people have in the real world. I usually sleep five hours a day. I don't have the habit of taking naps during the day. If I can't fall asleep, I usually listen to quiet music because it helps me fall asleep. Sleep is important to me because if I don't sleep, I don't have enough energy to complete my tasks.

Part 2 - A city I would like to visit again

There are many cities in China that I would like to visit again, such as Shanghai, Xi'an, and Guangzhou. But today I would like to talk about the capital of China, Beijing. Beijing is located in the northern part of China, and it is the capital city of China. I went to Beijing one year ago by plane with my family members. I think taking a plane was the fastest way to get there. During the journey, we did a lot of interesting things. First, we visited many tourist attractions. For example, we went to some historical sites, such as Tiananmen Square and the Great Wall. They were huge and magnificent, and I was shocked by how beautiful they were. I also went to Xiangshan with my family. We climbed the mountain and saw the beautiful landscape from the top of the mountain. I think it was very beautiful. Also, I tasted many traditional Beijing dishes. What gave me the deepest impression was Peking duck. I think it was very delicious. I think Beijing culture is very unique, and it is different from the culture of other cities. That is why I want to visit Beijing again.

Part 3 - Cities and travel

Many people prefer to live in cities for many reasons. The first reason is education. In big cities like Beijing, people can find famous universities, such as Peking University and Tsinghua University. Also, there are more hospitals in cities, so if people get sick, they can get treated more easily. Tourism can also have both positive and negative impacts on local communities. The positive impact is that it can bring in more money and boost the local economy. The negative impact is that tourists may create a lot of waste and noise. Technology has changed the way people travel because transportation is faster now, and apps can help people find interesting things to do. To reduce overcrowding at popular tourist attractions, the government can control the number of visitors and improve public transportation.

六、本节课纠错

原句问题推荐表达记忆方法
public places can improve the economic of the citypublic places can promote the economy of the city
many of public places is rebuiltmany public places have been rebuilt in recent years
crowded place make me feel repressedcrowded places make me feel depressed and uncomfortable
I usually listen a quiet musicI usually listen to quiet music
I went Beijing one years agoI went to Beijing one year ago
what gave me the deepest impressedwhat gave me the deepest impression

七、课后任务

八、方法和词汇

方法总结

  • 相似问题用 Like I just mentioned 自然承接。
  • 不会说抽象词时,换成具体名词,例如把医疗换成 hospitals。
  • Part 2 用时间、地点、人物、事件、感受来撑结构。
  • 同一个素材可以迁移到相近题目,例如北京地点题和 long journey 题。

补充词汇

  • public places(公共场所)
  • crowded places(拥挤的地方)
  • shopping mall(商场)
  • basketball court(篮球场)
  • depressed(压抑的)
  • uncomfortable(不舒服的)
  • population(人口)
  • economy(经济)
  • get dirty easily(容易变脏)
  • take care of(打理)
  • clean and neat(干净整齐)
  • impression(印象)
  • habit(习惯)
  • energy(精力)
  • tourist attractions(旅游景点)
  • historical sites(历史景点)
  • landscapes(自然风景)
  • magnificent(壮观的)
  • Peking duck(北京烤鸭)
  • boost the local economy(促进当地经济)
  • public transportation(公共交通)