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张宇墨同学的课程学习报告

雅思口语 Part 1 学习困难、家乡、天气、玩具话题练习,以及 Part 2 人物题两分钟段子搭建

学员:宇墨同学 老师:滕达老师 课型:正课 主题:雅思口语 Part 1 学习困难/玩具/家乡/天气话题练习与 Part 2 人物题段子搭建

课后复习模块

练过的材料

  • Learning difficulty(Part 1 话题):学习困难相关问题,包括是否容易专注、最难学的科目、如何处理学习困难、喜欢独学还是和别人一起学。
  • Hometown / Weather / Toys(Part 1 话题):家乡、天气、玩具相关快问快答,训练学生快速组织短答案。
  • Describe a person who has interesting ideas or opinions(Part 2 人物题):描述一个有有趣想法或观点的人。
  • Describe a person who encouraged you to achieve a goal(Part 2 人物题):描述一个鼓励你实现目标的人。

词汇和表达

  • concentrate:Do you find it easy to concentrate when you study?;专注
  • native speaker:I'm not a native speaker.;母语者
  • communicate with others:English needs communication with others.;和别人交流
  • disturb / distract:I don't like someone to disturb me or distract me.;打扰 / 分散注意力
  • Part 1 基础回答模板:Yes, I find it easy to concentrate when I study because I think learning is super important and I enjoy it. That's why I can concentrate easily.
  • Part 1 分情况回答模板:I think different subjects may have different answers. When I study math, I need to concentrate, so I prefer to study alone. But when I study English, I need to communicate with others.

纠错重点

  • I think the English is the most difficult about me;English 作为学科通常不加 the;about me 改为 for me 更自然。
  • And in other hand;固定表达是 on the other hand(另一方面)。
  • I may be to ask for my teacher for help;ask someone for help 是固定搭配。
  • he wear glasses and have long hair;第三人称单数动词要加 s。
  • he likes to communication with others;like to 后面接动词原形 communicate。
  • he always talked a joke;讲笑话用 tell jokes。

可回读产出

  • 本节课口语段子改进版:{"topic": "Describe a person who has interesting ideas or opinions", "script": ["There are a lot of interesting people in my life, such as my teachers, my friends and my family members. But today I would like to talk about my senior high school classmate, Tony.", "I first met him when I was fourteen years old. Now we still play basketball together every weekend. He is very tall and a little bit fat. He wears glasses and has long hair.", "I think he is very friendly and humorous. He likes to communicate with others, and he tells jokes all the time. When I feel sad, he often tells me a funny joke and makes me smile.", "The most interesting thing about him is that he can always see something positive from something negative. For example, one day we cooked a dish together. I put in too much salt, so the dish was really salty. I wanted to throw it away. However, Tony stopped me. He added water to it and turned it into a soup. Surprisingly, it was delicious.", "When we are together, he always gives me positive emotional feedback. I think I can learn a lot from him, and I really admire him because he can always find a new way to solve a problem."]};{"topic": "Describe a person who encouraged you to achieve a goal", "script": ["There are many people who have encouraged me in my life, such as my parents, my friends and my teachers. But today I would like to talk about my senior high school English teacher.", "When I was in senior high school, my English was not very good. I could not speak English fluently, and sometimes I could not write a correct sentence. So my goal was to make progress in English and get a higher score in the exam.", "My English teacher helped me a lot. He asked me to read English books, and he analyzed articles with me every day. When I had learning difficulties, he did not just blame me. He encouraged me to keep practicing and to learn how to solve problems step by step.", "He also made me feel more relaxed. Sometimes, when I felt stressed, he even played football and basketball with me. This made me feel that learning English was not only difficult, but also meaningful.", "Finally, I made progress and got a higher score in my exam. I felt very thankful because his encouragement gave me confidence and motivation."]}

课后动作

  • 周中反复朗读本节课整理出的 Part 2 人物题段子,先读熟,再尝试脱稿说大意。
  • 复习 Part 1 的 Learning difficulty 题组,重点练习 concentrate、learning difficulties、ask my teacher for help、communicate with others。
  • 练习 case by case(分情况讨论)回答方式:数学、英语等不同学科要能说出不同学习方式。
  • 复习玩具题中 I can't remember my favorite toy 的处理方式,学会在没素材时自然转弯。

一、课堂推进时间轴

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开课与本节目标确认

课堂推进:本节课先检查上周口语任务的量是否合适,再进入雅思口语 Part 1 和 Part 2 练习。课堂目标是把真题话题整理成学生周中可以反复读、背、脱稿说的材料,为寒假冲刺做准备。

老师处理:老师说明本节课会过 Part 1 和 Part 2,并强调段子不是逐字死背,而是要把意思脱稿说出来。

学生原始输出:可以试试

老师示范 / 修改方向:不是一词一句的背诵,而是说把这个意思大概自己脱稿的说一说。

复习抓手:口语段子要从熟读过渡到脱稿表达;背诵不是逐字复制,而是抓住意思后自然说出来;周中复习材料要服务于寒假冲刺

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Part 1 学习困难话题:concentrate 题目练习

课堂推进:老师从 Learning difficulty(学习困难)话题开始,让学生练习回答是否容易专注学习。老师提醒学生先完整回应题干,再补原因。

老师处理:老师示范 Part 1 回答结构:先直接回答问题,再用 because 补充一两句原因;同时提醒学生声音要大一点,没记住原句时可以自己变换表达。

学生原始输出:yes, I find it easy when I study because

老师示范 / 修改方向:I find it easy to concentrate when I study because I think learning is super important and I enjoy it. That's why I can concentrate easily.

复习抓手:concentrate(专注)题要先回答 easy or difficult;Part 1 先所问即所答,再补原因;不会完整复述题干时,可以用意思相同的简单句替换

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Part 1 学习困难话题:最难学科与处理困难

课堂推进:学生回答了最难学的科目是英语,并说明自己不是 native speaker(母语者),会遇到很多 new words(新词)和 new things(新内容)。老师认可学生回答,并继续追问如何处理学习困难。

老师处理:老师让学生连续回答 What subjects do you find the most difficult to learn? 和 How do you usually deal with learning difficulties? 并在学生回答后给予认可。

学生原始输出:I think the English is the most difficult about me because I'm not a native speaker. I think I need to face a lot of new words and new things. Good. I think this is difficult. When I face a difficulty about learning, I will search some information about the question. And in other hand, I may be to ask for my teacher for help.

老师示范 / 修改方向:I usually go to my teacher for help. Or ask my friends for help. I can also go on the website to find video tutorials or video classes.

复习抓手:native speaker(母语者)可以用来解释语言学习困难;处理学习困难可以说 ask my teacher for help(向老师求助);也可以说 find video tutorials(找视频教程)

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Part 1 学习方式题:alone or with others

课堂推进:学生学会用 case by case(分情况讨论)的方式回答学习方式题:不同学科可以有不同答案。数学需要独立思考,英语则需要和别人交流。

老师处理:老师引导学生把答案从空泛表达转为具体分情况说明,并表扬学生没有使用假大空语言。

学生原始输出:I think different subjects maybe have a different answer. 比如说,我喜欢读学学学习,因为我必须想想和考虑这些问题。 因为我无人能理解我,我并不喜欢人们理解我, 但我认为其他题目的,例如英语,我可以学习同学,因为我必须想和别人交流。

老师示范 / 修改方向:I prefer to study alone because when I work on difficult math problems, I need to concentrate. I don't like someone to disturb me or distract me. For English, I need to communicate with others.

复习抓手:case by case(分情况讨论)能让 Part 1 答案自然变长;math(数学)可以对应 concentrate(专注);English(英语)可以对应 communicate with others(和别人交流)

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Part 1 放弃学习与运动能力话题

课堂推进:学生练习回答是否放弃过学习某件事,并用 badminton(羽毛球)和 coach(教练)的训练太累作为例子。之后老师继续用 sports(运动)话题训练学生说明自己擅长什么以及为什么容易学。

老师处理:老师提醒如果没听懂问题,考试时可以说 Could you please explain the question? 也可以用 Pardon,但 explain 会让考官换更简单的说法。

学生原始输出:Yes, I give up to learn the badminton because my coach My coach gave me a lot of practice I think it is I think I can't 接受 I think it is too tired. Because PE is my personal interest. Good. I love it, so I have a motivation to complete the practice.

老师示范 / 修改方向:I have given up learning badminton before because my coach trained me too hard. I was too tired from doing the practice.

复习抓手:give up learning something(放弃学某事)后面可以直接接例子;coach trained me too hard(教练训练太狠)比 too tired 更清楚;motivation(动力)可以解释为什么学运动比较容易

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Part 1 家乡与城市话题

课堂推进:学生围绕北京回答了 favorite place(最喜欢的地方)、城市变化、喜欢大城市还是小城镇、城市问题等问题。学生提到天坛、大城市生活便利、北京污染等内容。

老师处理:老师用连续 Part 1 问答推动学生保持口语节奏,并在学生表达后给予简短确认。

学生原始输出:I think the Tian Tan part is my favorite place about my hometown. I think it is a good place to have a city walk. It is very beautiful. I like to live in a big city because I think big city can make your life more convenient. There are a lot of supermarkets or something, or bus station beside your home. I think Beijing has a heavy pollution.

老师示范 / 修改方向:Beijing is one of the most advanced cities in China.

复习抓手:city walk(城市散步)可以用于地点喜好;convenient(便利的)适合解释大城市优势;pollution(污染)可以作为城市问题

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Part 1 天气与玩具话题

课堂推进:学生回答了雨天对心情的影响、雨天通常做什么,以及小时候玩具相关问题。老师随后肯定学生上周练习后效果明显:碰到准备过的话题时,自信、正确率和流利度都更好。

老师处理:老师继续进行 Part 1 快问快答,并在玩具话题前总结学生上周练习的有效性。

学生原始输出:I think yes. I'm a person who likes to go out and do sport. I think if it is raining, it makes me feel depressed and I can't do the things I like. So I think yes, it can influence my mood. I usually sleep in my home. 或视频

老师示范 / 修改方向:没有碰到我的题目 和碰到我说到我的题目 完全自信心的状态不一样 而且语言正确率和流利度也高了。

复习抓手:feel depressed(感到低落)可以表达雨天影响心情;influence my mood(影响我的心情)是天气题常用表达;准备过的话题会明显提升口语自信和流利度

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Part 1 玩具题补充与答题策略

课堂推进:老师讲解如果想不起小时候最喜欢的玩具,可以诚实回答自己记不清,并补充小时候玩具有很多。老师还示范了父母是否应该给孩子花很多钱买玩具的答案。

老师处理:老师示范如何处理没有素材的问题,并给出 Should parents spend a lot of money on toys? 的回答框架。

学生原始输出:不是,因为我这个没有什么记忆 我不知道怎么说了 这个可能就是想法匮乏一点,但我马上编了一个 我想说拼装,像乐高原 但我就没编出来怎么拼

老师示范 / 修改方向:Actually I can't remember my favorite toy. I had so many different toys when I was a child. But now I can't remember any toy specifically. No, I don't think parents should spend too much money on toys, because sometimes children have unrealistic desires.

复习抓手:想不起具体玩具时可以诚实说 I can't remember;unrealistic desires(不现实的愿望)可用于玩具消费题;rather than buying expensive toys(而不是买昂贵玩具)可以引出更合理花钱方式

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Part 1 阶段总结

课堂推进:老师总结 Part 1 的核心:学生有想法,接下来要把想法难度调低,用简单中文构思,再转成简单英文口头表达。老师还强调分情况讨论可以快速扩展答案。

老师处理:老师帮助学生归纳 Part 1 表现与后续练习方向。

学生原始输出:没有。困难都是语言困难。

老师示范 / 修改方向:想法是有的,把想法的难度调低。起点中文构思简单一点。case by case 是很好的。

复习抓手:口语先解决能说出来,再追求复杂度;中文构思要简单,英文表达才稳定;case by case 可以把答案扩成四五句话

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Part 2 人物题框架:Introduction 和 5W

课堂推进:课堂进入 Part 2 人物题。老师讲解每个 Part 2 可以先用 introduction(开头引入),再按时间、地点、人物、事件、感受组织内容。人物题要先把人物放前面。

老师处理:老师用 Describe a person who has interesting ideas or opinions 讲解 Part 2 结构,并示范万能开头。

学生原始输出:my classmate

老师示范 / 修改方向:There are many interesting people in my life such as my parents, my teachers. But today I would like to talk about my classmate Tony.

复习抓手:introduction(开头引入)可以适用于很多 Part 2 题;5W 可以帮助搭建长答案;人物题可以先说 who this person is(这个人是谁)

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Part 2 人物描述:外貌与性格

课堂推进:老师指导学生先描述人物外貌,再描述性格。外貌可以说高矮胖瘦、戴眼镜、头发长短;性格可以说 outgoing(外向的)、humorous(幽默的)。

老师处理:老师拆解人物描述的两个方向,并纠正 communicate 与 funny 的使用。

学生原始输出:Tony is very very very tall and a little bit fat and he wear glasses and have long hair. I think he like I think he have a lot of funny

老师示范 / 修改方向:He is a super outgoing person. He likes to communicate with others. He is very funny and humorous. He tells jokes all the time.

复习抓手:communicate with others(和别人交流)不能说 to communication;funny 用来形容人可以是幽默,但 funny viewpoints 可能不自然;wears glasses(戴眼镜)和 has long hair(有长头发)要注意动词形式

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Part 2 具体例子:把咸菜改成汤

课堂推进:老师强调 Part 2 要用具体、好懂、有画面感的例子。学生和老师共同搭建了一个例子:做饭时菜放太多盐,本来想扔掉,Tony 加水把它变成汤,结果很好喝。

老师处理:老师把抽象的“想法有趣、积极”落到具体生活例子,并解释为什么具体名词和动作更容易让听者理解。

学生原始输出:当我们一起煮,我用了很多沥干,但我当时是很烤的, 他把这道菜调整成的菜式 非常美味

老师示范 / 修改方向:One day I cooked a dish. I put in so much salt and it was really salty. I wanted to throw it away. However, Tony added water to it and turned it into a soup, and it was delicious.

复习抓手:具体例子比抽象评价更容易拿分;salty(咸的)、throw it away(扔掉)、turn it into a soup(变成汤)都是可视化表达;Part 2 内容要简单、具体、有新鲜感

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Part 2 第一次完整输出:有趣想法的人

课堂推进:学生完成了 Describe a person who has interesting ideas or opinions 的两分钟口语输出。答案包含开头、人物关系、认识时间、外貌、一起打篮球、幽默性格、做饭例子和个人感受。

老师处理:老师给学生一分钟准备和两分钟答题,并在答题结束后确认时间刚好,说明这是一个好答案。

学生原始输出:There are a lot of interesting people in my life, such as my teacher, my friends and my family members. But today I want to talk about my senior high school classmates. and we know each other when I was 14 years old. He is very tall and a little bit fat. He wears glasses and he has long hair. We play basketball every weekend now. I think he is very friendly and humorous. When I was sad, he always talked a joke, a lovely joke for me and made me laugh. And when we cooked together, I used a lot of salt in a meal, in a mile, and I want to get the meal in the trash bin, and he stopped me and he changed the meal to a soup, and it's very delicious. And when we were together, he always gave me a positive emotional feedback. And I think I can learn a lot of things about him. And I admire him. I admire him because 我认为他能够讨论各种手段 他能够提供新的预线

老师示范 / 修改方向:时间刚好 2分02秒 这一定有好答案。

复习抓手:Part 2 两分钟可以用 introduction + 人物 + 事件 + 感受撑满;已有例子可以迁移到人物题;结尾可以用 admire him(佩服他)表达感受

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Part 2 第二个题目:鼓励你实现目标的人

课堂推进:老师让学生自己发挥一个新题:Describe a person who encouraged you to achieve a goal。学生选择高中英语老师,说明老师帮助自己读英文书、分析文章,并在困难时一起运动。

老师处理:老师读出题目要求,并提醒这个题可以借用刚才的人物题素材,但需要围绕 goal(目标)、how they encouraged you(如何鼓励你)和 feelings(感受)来组织。

学生原始输出:friends, but now I would like to talk about my senior high school English teacher. When I was in senior high school, my English is not very well and I can't speak frequently and I can write a correct sentence. So the teacher always helped me and he let me read English book and I analyzed articles with him every day. and so I achieved my goal. I had a high score in my graduate exam. And he not only had one pound. And when I was difficult, he even played football and basketball with me together. そして私は感動感が強いです 私は私たちに感謝しています 私たちの人生の一番大事な人生の一番大きな

老师示范 / 修改方向:He encouraged me to learn how to do new things. Today I want to talk about how he encouraged me to learn how to cook.

复习抓手:鼓励类人物题要明确 goal(目标);要说明 how they encouraged you(对方怎样鼓励你);可以把前一个话题的素材迁移,但要改成符合新题的方向

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课末复盘与课后材料方向

课堂推进:老师总结本节课会把内容整理出来,帮助学生在周中阅读和背诵。后续会逐步积累人物、事件、事物、地点等核心话题,形成可以排列组合的口语素材库。

老师处理:老师说明会整理本节课内容,并解释为什么要每周生成和积累核心话题素材。

学生原始输出:这个OK的我们可以用啊 待会帮你整理好

老师示范 / 修改方向:每周现在我们生成一堆,然后你周中就开始读,一周一周累积。

复习抓手:课后要读本节整理出的口语段子;人物、事件、事物、地点话题可以互相迁移;素材积累越多,考试中排列组合的可能性越多

二、本节课亮点表现

本节课完成了多组 Part 1 快问快答,重点练习先直接回答问题,再补充原因和例子。

学生在学习困难话题中能说出英语难学、遇到新词、会向老师求助和查资料等内容。

学生学会了 case by case(分情况讨论)的答题方式,例如数学适合独立思考,英语适合与别人交流。

Part 2 人物题中,学生完成了一段约两分钟的完整回答,包含人物介绍、外貌、性格、具体事件和感受。

老师强调口语内容要简单、具体、有画面感,优先用看得见、听得懂的名词和动作。

三、本节课用了哪些材料

四、学生课堂输出

Part 1 concentrate 题

yes, I find it easy when I study because

Part 1 最难学科

I think the English is the most difficult about me because I'm not a native speaker. I think I need to face a lot of new words and new things.

Part 1 处理学习困难

When I face a difficulty about learning, I will search some information about the question. And in other hand, I may be to ask for my teacher for help.

Part 1 学习方式

I think different subjects maybe have a different answer.

Part 2 有趣想法的人

There are a lot of interesting people in my life, such as my teacher, my friends and my family members. But today I want to talk about my senior high school classmates. and we know each other when I was 14 years old. He is very tall and a little bit fat. He wears glasses and he has long hair. We play basketball every weekend now. I think he is very friendly and humorous. When I was sad, he always talked a joke, a lovely joke for me and made me laugh. And when we cooked together, I used a lot of salt in a meal, in a mile, and I want to get the meal in the trash bin, and he stopped me and he changed the meal to a soup, and it's very delicious. And when we were together, he always gave me a positive emotional feedback. And I think I can learn a lot of things about him. And I admire him. I admire him because 我认为他能够讨论各种手段 他能够提供新的预线

Part 2 鼓励你实现目标的人

friends, but now I would like to talk about my senior high school English teacher. When I was in senior high school, my English is not very well and I can't speak frequently and I can write a correct sentence. So the teacher always helped me and he let me read English book and I analyzed articles with him every day. and so I achieved my goal. I had a high score in my graduate exam. And he not only had one pound. And when I was difficult, he even played football and basketball with me together.

五、本节课口语段子改进版

以下为按课堂已讲方向整理的课后复习改进版,主要基于课堂中 Tony 人物题、做饭加盐例子、老师示范句和学生原始输出整理。

改进版等待老师确认。

六、本节课纠错

原句问题推荐表达记忆方法
I think the English is the most difficult about meEnglish 作为学科通常不加 the;about me 改为 for me 更自然。
And in other hand固定表达是 on the other hand(另一方面)。
I may be to ask for my teacher for helpask someone for help 是固定搭配。
he wear glasses and have long hair第三人称单数动词要加 s。
he likes to communication with otherslike to 后面接动词原形 communicate。
he always talked a joke讲笑话用 tell jokes。
make me smellsmile 是微笑;smell 是闻起来有味道,发音和意思都要区分。
I want to get the meal in the trash binthrow away 更自然,表示扔掉。

七、课后任务

八、方法和词汇

方法总结

  • Part 1:先直接回答问题,再补 because 原因。
  • Part 1:不会复杂表达时,先用简单中文构思,再转成简单英文。
  • Part 1:用 case by case 分情况讨论,让答案自然变长。
  • Part 2:用 introduction 开头,再按人物、时间、地点、事件、感受展开。
  • Part 2:用具体生活例子,不要只说抽象评价。

补充词汇

  • concentrate:专注
  • learning difficulty:学习困难
  • motivation:动力
  • communicate:交流
  • humorous:幽默的
  • positive:积极的
  • salty:咸的
  • throw away:扔掉
  • turn into:变成
  • admire:佩服