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口语 · 2026-06-25

韵雅同学的课程学习报告

本节课以雅思口语复习为主,先练 Part 1 短问短答,再通过听音频、记关键词、复述的方式复习多个 Part 2 话题。

学员:韵雅同学 老师:滕达老师 课型:正课 主题:雅思口语 Part 1 短问短答与 Part 2 话题复述复习

课后复习模块

练过的材料

  • Do you usually carry a bag when you go out?(Part 1 question):用于 bags 话题短问短答练习
  • What do you normally put in your bag?(Part 1 question):用于 bags 话题补充细节练习
  • Do you prefer a backpack or handbag?(Part 1 question):用于 bags 话题偏好表达
  • Have bags changed compared to the past?(Part 1 question):用于过去与现在对比表达
  • Do you mind noise when you study?(Part 1 question):用于 noise 话题短问短答
  • What kind of noise are common in your neighborhood?(Part 1 question):用于列举社区噪音

词汇和表达

  • problem-solving skill:解决问题的能力
  • stay calm:保持冷静
  • solution:解决办法
  • outgoing:外向的
  • 适合人物、物品、地点、电影、技能等 Part 2 话题开头。;这是一个很自然的 Part 2 开头句,用来引出要讲的话题。
  • 人物类话题中说明认识时长。;我认识她五年了。

纠错重点

  • {"rawOrIssue": "Because it is an convenient for me to um.", "correctedOrAdvice": "It is convenient for me to use.", "reasonOrMemoryTip": "convenient 前不用 an;后面可以用 to use 表示“用起来方便”。", "sourceEvidence": "It's convenient to use啊! Oh oh. Ah, it's convenient for me to use."}
  • {"rawOrIssue": "I don't really know what. The bags look like in the past.", "correctedOrAdvice": "I don't really know what bags from the past looked like.", "reasonOrMemoryTip": "谈过去的样子要用 looked like。", "sourceEvidence": "I don't really know what.Uh Bags from the past looked like"}
  • {"rawOrIssue": "I want to err listen to what they are were say.", "correctedOrAdvice": "I can’t help listening to their conversation.", "reasonOrMemoryTip": "can’t help doing something 表示“控制不住/忍不住做某事”。", "sourceEvidence": "I can help listening to their conversation I can help doing something控制不了自己什么"}
  • {"rawOrIssue": "my home is a quite place / quite community", "correctedOrAdvice": "my home is a quiet place / quiet community", "reasonOrMemoryTip": "quiet 是“安静的”;quite 是“相当”。逐字稿中老师认可表达方向,但拼写/发音需注意。", "sourceEvidence": "is your home a quiet place?Uh Yes my home is a quite place... quite community."}
  • {"rawOrIssue": "Our citys became noisyer then before.", "correctedOrAdvice": "Cities are becoming noisier than before.", "reasonOrMemoryTip": "cities 复数;noisier 比较级;than 表示“比”。", "sourceEvidence": "Of course the city become Err cities are becoming noiser than before."}
  • {"rawOrIssue": "I would like to talking about", "correctedOrAdvice": "I would like to talk about", "reasonOrMemoryTip": "would like to 后接动词原形。", "sourceEvidence": "I would like to talking about um problem solving skills."}

可回读产出

  • 本节课口语段子改进版:{"part": "Part 1", "question": "Do you usually carry a bag when you go out?", "answer": "Yes, I usually carry a bag when I go out because I need to bring a lot of things.", "pairedWithCueCardId": ""};{"part": "Part 1", "question": "What do you normally put in your bag?", "answer": "I normally put an umbrella, tissues and my keys in my bag.", "pairedWithCueCardId": ""}

课后动作

  • 把本节课复习过的几个 Part 2 话题标记为已完成。
  • 课后复习本节课的 Part 1 小问短答,尤其是 bags 和 noise 两组问题。
  • 复习 Part 2 复述方法:听大意、记关键词、再复述,不要求逐字背诵。

一、课堂推进时间轴

1

Part 1 Bags 话题短问短答

课堂推进:课堂先复习了 bags 相关短问题,包括出门是否带包、包里通常放什么、喜欢 backpack 还是 handbag,以及现在和过去的包是否有变化。

老师处理:老师连续提问并即时修正学生表达,例如 convenient for me to use、past looked like。

学生原始输出:Yes, I usually carry. Ah will I go out because I need to bring a lot of thing. / I normally put um. Put umbrella, um tissue and the keys ah backpack. / I prefer a handbag. Because it is an convenient for me to um.

老师示范 / 修改方向:It's convenient to use. / Ah, it's convenient for me to use. / I don't really know what bags from the past looked like.

复习抓手:Part 1 回答要短,但要补一个具体原因;convenient 后面可以接 to use,表示“用起来方便”;谈过去的样子要用 past looked like

2

Part 1 Noise 话题短问短答

课堂推进:随后复习了 noise 话题,围绕学习时是否介意噪音、社区常见噪音、家里是否安静、城市是否比以前更吵展开。

老师处理:老师帮助学生把“控制不住听别人说话”整理成 can’t help doing something,并补充 neighborhood、community、cities are becoming noisier than before 等表达。

学生原始输出:Yes,I mind noise ah will I study um? For example for some people um. Ah! When I study, some people uh talk and talk a near next to me. Um I want to err listen to what they are were say.

老师示范 / 修改方向:I can help listening to their conversation / I can help doing something 控制不了自己什么. / cities are becoming noiser than before.

复习抓手:can’t help doing something 表示“忍不住做某事”;quiet community 可以表达“安静的小区”;becoming noisier than before 表示“比以前更吵”

3

听音频记笔记并复述 Part 2 useful skill

课堂推进:老师播放并示范 useful skill 的 Part 2 答案,让学生听大意、记关键词,然后用自己的话复述 problem-solving skill。

老师处理:老师强调不用逐字记下来,而是听懂大意、记关键词,再唤起之前练过的内容。

学生原始输出:I would like to talking about um problem solving skills. Um This skill is important because we may ah face problems at in everyday life yep uh I practice this skill when I see the internet um or problem yeah um with some Some of my friends you ask err Ask me how to communicate with child.

老师示范 / 修改方向:A useful skill I have learned is problem solving skill. I learn it in my daily life because people often face different problems and we need to find ways to solve them.

复习抓手:听力复述时先抓意思,不需要逐字记录;problem-solving skill 表示“解决问题的能力”;stay calm and try to find a solution 可用于解释技能价值

4

Part 2 best friend 话题复述

课堂推进:学生复述了 best friend Tracey 的答案,包含人物外貌、认识时间、见面频率、一起购物、打麻将和尝试新食物等内容。

老师处理:老师先朗读完整示范,再让学生按听到的结构复述,并在过程中认可其能抓住主要信息。

学生原始输出:This is a very interesting question There are many people In about their many friends in my life such as classmates or neighbors um but today I would like to talk about My best friend Tracey, She is nineteen years old Um We are same age And she is my high school classmate.

老师示范 / 修改方向:I have known her for five years and I see her three times a week. I really enjoy spending time with her. Let me give you a few examples first...

复习抓手:人物类 Part 2 可以按身份、外貌、认识时间、共同活动、感受组织;same taste in fashion 表示“审美/穿衣品味相同”;happy and relaxed 可作为人物关系类结尾感受

5

Part 2 useful app 话题复述

课堂推进:学生复述了 useful app on your phone 的答案,重点围绕 WeChat 的聊天、游戏、短视频、vlog、购物和 WeChat Pay 展开。

老师处理:老师给出完整示范答案,并引导学生把 WeChat 的使用场景和重要性串成完整回答。

学生原始输出:Ah! Uh, I first use We chat uh around eight years old ago. I used it daily basis Um for three hours every day. Ah, I use wechat anywhere such as ah subway or bus嗯even high school啊,I use ah wechat to communicate with other hmm others.

老师示范 / 修改方向:I first started using WeChat around eight years ago. And I use it on a daily basis. I usually spend at least three hours on it every day.

复习抓手:on a daily basis 表示“每天、日常地”;communicate with my friends and family 表示“和朋友家人沟通”;If I cannot log into WeChat, I feel like I cannot do anything 可用于强调 app 重要性

6

Part 2 technology/smartphone 话题复述

课堂推进:学生继续复述 technology 话题,以 smartphone 为对象,讲到每天使用时间、游戏、Uber、联系朋友家人、拍 vlog,以及想减少手机使用时间。

老师处理:老师先读完整模型答案,再让学生复述,并指出学生输出越来越少、越来越抓重点。

学生原始输出:This is a very interesting question. There are many technologies such as smartphone, laptop and tablet but today I would like to talk about uh My Smartphone. I first used um smart phone, about nine years ago ah But now I use it daily basis in over of fifteen hours a day.

老师示范 / 修改方向:However, I think I use my phone too much. So I would like to reduce the time I spend on my phone.

复习抓手:technology 话题可以和 app 话题共用部分素材;reduce the time I spend on my phone 表示“减少花在手机上的时间”;复述时可以少说但要保留主线

7

Part 2 film 话题复述与词汇纠音

课堂推进:课堂复习了 film 话题,学生选择 Guardians of the Galaxy,并练习电影内容、演员表现、画面、音效、音乐和人物 romance 的表达。

老师处理:老师纠正电影名和 galaxy 发音,并补充 unique、cinematography、sound effects 等电影类词汇。

学生原始输出:This is a very interesting question ah today I would like to talk about uh A film named um Guardian of Galaxy. Yeah, very good, um This is a story about a group of superhero they travel in different planets yes,yes,yesand They fight bad guys.

老师示范 / 修改方向:Guardian of the Galaxy. / Galaxy. / the story is unique and interesting. / cinematography.

复习抓手:galaxy 表示“银河、星系”;unique 表示“独特的”;cinematography 表示“电影摄影、画面呈现”;sound effects 表示“音效”

8

Part 2 new house/apartment 话题复述

课堂推进:学生复述了 best friend Tracey 的新公寓话题,提到公寓面积、浴缸、卧室窗外景色、购物中心、喜欢的服装店,以及这个公寓对自己的积极影响。

老师处理:老师朗读示范答案,让学生抓主要信息复述,并提示表达 spacious、bathtub、positive impact、afford 等关键词。

学生原始输出:The Apartment Is Ah Very Big. And More Than One Hundred Square Meters. Big, one hundred square meters. Ahundred squares space spaciousvery good. The Best Room On Like A Bathroom Because There It'sA Huge Bathtub in ah bedroom.

老师示范 / 修改方向:It’s more than one hundred square meters so it feels very spacious. / This new place has a positive impact on me... I hope I can afford an apartment just like that in the future.

复习抓手:spacious 表示“宽敞的”;bathtub 表示“浴缸”;positive impact 表示“积极影响”;afford 表示“负担得起”

9

Part 2 polluted city 话题复述

课堂推进:最后复习了 polluted city 话题,学生以重庆为例,讲到人口、晚上看不到星星、工厂、夏天空调、街边烧烤和交通导致空气质量变差。

老师处理:老师帮助学生区分 produce 的动词用法,并补充 carbon emission、air quality 等污染话题表达。

学生原始输出:Um This is a very interesting question and uh I know um many polluted cities such as Beijing Shanghai Chongqing Um but today i would like to talk about my hometown chongqing. Uh, Chongqing Is One of the biggest city in China. And there are over twenty million people.

老师示范 / 修改方向:produce / greenhouse gas / Carbon Emission / Air quality / make the air quality even worse.

复习抓手:produce 可作动词,表示“生产、产生”;greenhouse gas 表示“温室气体”;carbon emission 表示“碳排放”;air quality 表示“空气质量”

10

阶段标记与休息安排

课堂推进:课堂结尾老师让学生把刚刚练过的内容标记为完成,然后安排休息五分钟后继续。

老师处理:老师要求学生标注完成,并说明这些题目已经练完。

老师示范 / 修改方向:标标记完成你完成。你完成把这几个刚才我们连完的标注一个什么让你典范嘛我们可以休息五分钟再休息五分钟继续OK.

复习抓手:课后应把已练习题目做完成标记,方便复盘

二、本节课亮点表现

韵雅同学能跟着老师的音频和示范,把多个 Part 2 旧题重新唤起并复述出来。

Part 1 中 bags 和 noise 两个话题都进行了真实小问拆分,重点练习短答加原因。

课堂反复训练了“听大意、抓关键词、再复述”的方法,不要求逐字背诵。

多个 Part 2 话题之间开始形成可迁移素材,例如 WeChat、smartphone、Australia、Tracey、vlog 等。

三、本节课用了哪些材料

四、学生课堂输出

Part 1 Bags - carrying a bag

Yes, I usually carry. Ah will I go out because I need to bring a lot of thing.

Part 1 Bags - items in bag

Uh I normally put um.Put umbrella, um tissue and the keys ah backpack.

Part 1 Bags - handbag preference

I prefer a handbag.Because it is an convenient for me to um.

Part 1 Bags - bags in the past

I don't really know uh what. The bags look like in the past yeah.So.Yeah.So I can really answer this question.

Part 1 Noise - study noise

Hmm, yes,I mind noise ah will I study um?For example for some people um.Ah!When I study, some people uh talk and talk a near next to me.Um I want to err listen to what they are were say

Part 1 Noise - neighborhood noise

The noise of car嗯,the noise of baby crying

Part 1 Noise - quiet home

Uh Yes my home is a quite place because ah, because uh my apartment um it's in It's located in a quite community.

Part 2 Useful skill

I would like to talking about um problem solving skills. Um This skill is important because we may ah face problems at in everyday life yep uh I practice this skill when I see the internet um or problem yeah um with some Some of my friends you ask err Ask me how to communicate with child

Part 2 Best friend

This is a very interesting question There are many people In about their many friends in my life such as classmates or neighbors um but today I would like to talk about My best friend Tracey, She is nineteen years old Um We are same age And she is my high school classmate.

Part 2 Useful app

I first use We chat uh around eight years old ago.I used it daily basis Um for three hours every day.

Part 2 Smartphone

I first used um smart phone ,about nine years ago ah But now I use it daily basis in over of fifteen hours a day.

Part 2 Film

This is a very interesting question ah today I would like to talk about uh A film named um Guardian of Galaxy.

Part 2 New apartment

The Apartment Is Ah Very Big.And More Than One Hundred Square Meters.Big, one hundred square meters.Ahundred squares space spaciousvery good.

Part 2 Polluted city

Chongqing Is One of the biggest city in China.And there are over twenty million people.um I, uh I live there. Uh twenty years.

五、本节课口语段子改进版

以下为按课堂已讲方向整理的课后复习改进版;内容只使用本节逐字稿中出现并可恢复的信息。

Do you usually carry a bag when you go out?

Yes, I usually carry a bag when I go out because I need to bring a lot of things.

What do you normally put in your bag?

I normally put an umbrella, tissues and my keys in my bag.

Do you prefer a backpack or handbag?

I prefer a handbag because it is convenient for me to use.

Have bags changed compared to the past?

I don't really know what bags from the past looked like, so I can't really answer this question.

Do you mind noise when you study?

Yes, I mind noise when I study. For example, when some people talk next to me, I can't help listening to their conversation.

What kind of noise are common in your neighborhood?

The most common noises are the noise of cars and the noise of babies crying.

Is your home a quiet place?

Yes, my home is a quiet place because my apartment is located in a quiet community.

Are cities becoming noisier than before?

Yes, cities are becoming noisier than before because there are more cars, more people and more construction.

Describe a useful skill you have learned.

A useful skill I have learned is problem-solving skill. I learned it in my daily life because people often face different problems and we need to find ways to solve them. I practice this skill when I meet problems in my own life. For example, sometimes my friends ask me how to communicate with their parents. When I think about their problems and share my experience, I also improve my own problem-solving skills. I think this skill is very useful because everyone will face different problems. If we have problem-solving skills, we can stay calm and try to find a solution. I would like to share my experience with others, but I don't think I have enough experience yet because I am only nineteen years old.

Describe your best friend.

This is a very interesting question. I have many friends in my life, such as my classmates and neighbors, but today I would like to talk about my best friend, Tracey. She is nineteen years old, and we are the same age. She is my high school classmate. She is short with long brown hair, and she wears glasses. She is outgoing, and she likes watching TikTok. I have known her for five years, and I see her three times a week. I really enjoy spending time with her. First, I enjoy going shopping with her. We have the same taste in fashion, so it is easy and fun for us to shop together. Second, I enjoy playing mahjong with her. She is a great player, and she teaches me how to play mahjong well. Also, I enjoy trying new food with her because we have the same taste in food and we both like spicy food. When I spend time with Tracey, I feel happy and relaxed. That is why she is an important friend to me.

Describe a useful app on your phone.

This is a very interesting question. There are many useful apps on my phone, such as WeChat, Instagram and TikTok, but today I would like to talk about WeChat. I first started using WeChat around eight years ago, and I use it on a daily basis. I usually spend at least three hours on it every day. I use it everywhere, such as at home, on the subway or bus, and even at school. WeChat is very important to me because I use it to communicate with my friends and family. I studied in Australia last year, so during that time I needed to send messages to my mom and my best friend back home. WeChat can also do many other things. When I feel bored, I play games on WeChat. The games are fun and free to play. I also watch short video clips on it, and I can shoot vlogs to share my daily life with others, such as what I ate, what I cooked and where I went for fun. I can also shop on WeChat, and WeChat Pay is extremely important in China. If I cannot log into WeChat, I feel like I cannot do anything. So I think WeChat is the most useful app on my phone.

Describe a technology you own and use.

This is a very interesting question. There are many technologies that I own and use all the time, such as my smartphone, laptop and tablet, but today I would like to talk about my smartphone. I first started using a smartphone about nine years ago. Now I use my phone on a daily basis, and honestly I use it more than fifteen hours a day. I use it everywhere, such as at school, on the subway or bus. With my smartphone, I can do a lot of things. First, I can play games on it. The games on my smartphone are free and fun to play. Second, I can use Uber on my iPhone, and it only takes about two minutes for me to call a ride, so it is very convenient. I also use my phone to communicate with my friends and family. I studied in Australia last year, so I needed to send messages to my mom and my best friend. Another thing is that I use my phone to shoot vlogs. I like to share my daily life with others, like what I eat, what I cook or what I do for fun. However, I think I use my phone too much, so I would like to reduce the time I spend on my phone.

Describe a film.

Today, I would like to talk about a science fiction film called Guardians of the Galaxy Volume Two. It is about a group of superheroes. They travel in space, visit different planets and fight bad guys. The story is set in space in the future, so it is full of imagination. What really makes me like this movie is that the story is unique and interesting. It is not the same as other movies. The actors and actresses also did a really good job. They made the characters believable and relatable, almost as if these superheroes could exist in real life. Another thing I like is the cinematography. The movie is colorful and vivid, and the computer graphics are amazing. The sound effects are also very impactful, and the music is exciting. Lastly, I like the romance between the main characters because it is also a love story. I first watched this movie by myself, and I liked it so much that I wanted to recommend it to my friends and family. For me, it is a relaxing and fun movie to watch.

Describe a new house or apartment.

Today, I would like to talk about my best friend Tracey, who recently moved into a new apartment. I have known Tracey for several years, and she is one of my closest friends. Her new apartment is really big. It is more than one hundred square meters, so it feels very spacious. The most impressive room is the bathroom because there is a huge bathtub in it. Every time I visit her, I really want to take a bubble bath there because it looks so relaxing. Another thing I like about her apartment is the window in her bedroom. It is very big, and if you look out of the window, you can see trees and parks. Sometimes you can also see kids playing outside. The view is especially beautiful in spring and summer. The location is also very convenient. Her apartment is right in the heart of the city, so it is easy for us to visit her. It is also easy to order takeout or go shopping because there is a huge shopping mall near her place. The best part is that the mall also has our favorite clothing store, which is called Chikbak. This new place has a positive impact on me. Every time I visit her, I feel happy and relaxed. At the same time, it also motivates me to work harder because I hope I can afford an apartment just like that in the future.

Describe a polluted city.

This is a very interesting question. There are many polluted cities I have been to, such as Beijing, Shanghai and Chongqing. Today, I would like to talk about Chongqing, my hometown. Chongqing is one of the biggest cities in China, and there are more than twenty million people in the city. I have lived there for many years. The city is quite polluted, and it is difficult to see the stars at night. There are many reasons why it is polluted. The first reason is the factories. Chongqing is an industrial city, and a lot of things are made there, including cars, motorcycles and steel. These factories produce tons of greenhouse gases. The second reason is that the place is crowded and hot, so people often turn on their air conditioning during summer. People also like eating outside and having barbecues in the streets. These restaurants and barbecues produce a lot of smoke. The third kind of pollution is traffic. Nowadays, almost every Chinese family owns a car, and some families own more than one car. All of these cars produce carbon emissions and make the air quality worse.

六、本节课纠错

原句问题推荐表达记忆方法

七、课后任务

八、方法和词汇

方法总结

  • 听大意而不是逐字记录
  • 用关键词唤起旧答案
  • 把相似素材迁移到不同话题
  • Part 2 用例子展开

补充词汇

  • umbrella:雨伞
  • tissue:纸巾
  • keys:钥匙
  • community:小区;社区
  • construction:施工;建筑工程
  • mahjong:麻将
  • bubble bath:泡泡浴
  • takeout:外卖