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IELTS 口语模考讲评:扩展答案、纠正中式英语、整理 Part 2 和 Part 3 话题素材

学员:韵雅同学 老师:滕达老师 课型:模考讲评 主题:IELTS 口语模考讲评:Part 1 apartment/reading/shopping,Part 2 学习语言经历,Part 3 语言学习与科技

课后复习模块

练过的材料

  • IELTS Speaking Part 1:Apartment, reading, shopping
  • IELTS Speaking Part 2:Describe something you did when learning a new language
  • IELTS Speaking Part 3:Group study, advantages and disadvantages of learning a language, children learning a second language, technology and language learning

词汇和表达

  • bubble bath:泡泡浴;不是 bubble shower
  • shower:淋浴;和 bath / bathtub 区分
  • roommate:室友;回答 who do you live with 时可用
  • share the rent:分摊房租;补充居住细节
  • I like the bathroom the most because I have a big bathtub, and I can take bubble baths.
  • I have a roommate, and we share the rent.

纠错重点

  • bubble shower;bubble bath;bubble bath 是泡泡浴;shower 是淋浴。
  • it is easily to read;it is easier to read;这里需要比较级 easier。
  • I very like shopping;I like shopping very much;英语中不能说 very like。
  • wear the dress;try it on / put it on to see if it fits;购物试穿要用 try on;wear 更像已经穿着自己的衣服。
  • relax novel;read for fun;表达娱乐阅读时可以说 read for fun。
  • too much time;a lot of time and effort;描述掌握语言的成本时,a lot of time and effort 更自然。

可回读产出

  • 本节课口语段子改进版:{"part": "Part 1", "question": "Do you live in an apartment or a house?", "answer": "I live in an apartment.", "sourceRecovery": {"method": "classroom_transcript", "status": "transcript_backed", "reportPath": "data/students/yunya/course_reports/2026-06-09-speaking-ielts-part-1-apartment-reading-shopping-pa-88ae68.json", "oldQuestion": "Part 1 - Apartment", "evidence": "source.md:17 do you live in an apartment or a house? I live in apartments", "note": "Recovered to answer-level speaking block from sourceMarkdownArchive/sourceArchive evidence."}, "reviewStatus": "ready", "audioStatus": "audio_needs_regen"};{"part": "Part 1", "question": "What do you like the most about your apartment?", "answer": "I like the bathroom the most because it has a big bathtub, and I can take bubble baths there.", "sourceRecovery": {"method": "classroom_transcript", "status": "transcript_backed", "reportPath": "data/students/yunya/course_reports/2026-06-09-speaking-ielts-part-1-apartment-reading-shopping-pa-88ae68.json", "oldQuestion": "Part 1 - Apartment", "evidence": "source.md:17-20 What do you like the most about your apartment ... I like the bathroom ... big bathtub ... bubble baths", "note": "Recovered to answer-level speaking block from sourceMarkdownArchive/sourceArchive evidence."}, "reviewStatus": "ready", "audioStatus": "audio_needs_regen"}

课后动作

  • 复习 Part 1 的 apartment、reading、shopping 三组答案,重点记住 corrected version。
  • 背熟 Part 2 “学习英语经历”段子,尤其是 quiz、review、IELTS materials、speaking practice、listening practice 的顺序。
  • 复习 Part 3 的 group study、language learning、technology 三类观点句和例子。
  • 特别注意不要再说 I very like、bubble shower、it is easily to read、wear the dress 这类表达。

一、课堂推进时间轴

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Part 1 apartment 话题开场

课堂推进:课堂从 apartment(公寓)话题开始,练习回答住在 apartment 还是 house,以及最喜欢公寓里的什么。

老师处理:老师认可学生能回答,并纠正 bathroom、bathtub、bubble bath、shower 的表达区别。

学生原始输出:I live in apartments. I like, the bathroom because... i have a big tap bathtub in the bath bedroom and i can take bubble shower.

老师示范 / 修改方向:bubble bath 是泡泡浴;shower 是淋浴。可以说:I like the bathroom the most because I have a big bathtub, and I can take bubble baths.

复习抓手:apartment(公寓)回答可以先直接回答,再补一句原因。;bathtub(浴缸)和 shower(淋浴)不要混用。;bubble bath(泡泡浴)不是 bubble shower。

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Part 1 who do you live with

课堂推进:学生练习回答和谁一起住,老师提醒可以多补充一点信息,让答案更自然。

老师处理:老师示范把短答案扩展成更完整的生活场景。

学生原始输出:I live with my friends.

老师示范 / 修改方向:可以扩展为:I have a roommate, and we share the rent. / It's a pretty big apartment, so we share it.

复习抓手:Part 1 不要只答一句,可以补充 roommate(室友)、share the rent(分摊房租)等细节。;扩展答案时要围绕原问题自然补充。

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Part 1 reading 话题:是否喜欢阅读

课堂推进:进入 reading(阅读)话题,学生表达喜欢 novels(小说),老师帮助补充什么时候读。

老师处理:老师纠正 especially 的听写/表达,并示范加入阅读时间,如通勤路上或睡前。

学生原始输出:I like reading especially novels.

老师示范 / 修改方向:可以说:I enjoy reading on the bus. / I like reading before I go to sleep at night.

复习抓手:especially novels(尤其是小说)可以作为喜好补充。;回答喜好后可以补 when(什么时候)来延长答案。;on the bus(在公交车上)和 before I go to sleep(睡前)都是自然补充。

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Part 1 reading 话题:纸质书和电子屏

课堂推进:学生回答更喜欢在 screen(屏幕)上阅读,老师纠正 easier 的用法,并整理电子书方便的理由。

老师处理:老师把学生关于排版、携带和方便性的中文理由转化为英文口语表达。

学生原始输出:I prefer to read on the screen because it is easily to read.

老师示范 / 修改方向:Because it's easier to read an e-book. Paper books are hard to carry. They're heavy. It's more convenient to read on my phone. It is easier to read an e-book because you can change the format.

复习抓手:it is easily to read 应改为 it is easier to read。;e-book(电子书)可以用 easier、more convenient(更方便)解释。;format(排版/格式)可以解释电子书更好读。

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Part 1 reading 话题:仔细读与快速读

课堂推进:老师帮助学生区分 academic article(学术文章)和 read for fun(娱乐阅读)两种阅读方式。

老师处理:老师修正 recarefully 等不自然表达,并示范 slowly、read for fun、read really fast。

学生原始输出:when i re academic article I need to recarefully... but I relax novel I don't have to

老师示范 / 修改方向:When I read academic articles, I need to take the time to read carefully and slowly. However, if I read for fun, I can just read really fast.

复习抓手:academic article(学术文章)需要 read carefully and slowly(仔细慢读)。;read for fun(为了娱乐而读)可以快速读。;不要说 relax novel,可以说 read for fun 或 read novels for fun。

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Part 1 shopping 话题:是否喜欢购物

课堂推进:进入 shopping(购物)话题,学生表达喜欢购物,老师纠正 very like 的中式英语问题。

老师处理:老师示范 I like shopping very much,并加入 with my friends 让答案更完整。

学生原始输出:yes I read... i very like shopping with my friends

老师示范 / 修改方向:不能说 I very like shopping。可以说:I like shopping very much. I especially enjoy shopping with my friends.

复习抓手:不能说 I very like...,要说 I like ... very much。;especially enjoy(尤其喜欢)可以自然加强语气。;with my friends(和朋友一起)可以让答案更具体。

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Part 1 shopping 话题:线上还是线下购物

课堂推进:学生回答更喜欢 in store(实体店)购物,因为可以摸材质和试穿,老师修正 touch、try on、fit 的表达。

老师处理:老师把学生的原始表达整理成自然答案,并区分 wear 和 try on / put on。

学生原始输出:I prefer shopping in store because i can touch the dress and wear the dress.

老师示范 / 修改方向:I prefer shopping in store because I can touch the dress to feel the material and see if it's soft and comfortable. I can also try it on to see if it fits.

复习抓手:material(材质)可以解释为什么想在线下摸衣服。;try it on(试穿)比 wear it 更适合购物场景。;to see if it fits(看看是否合身)是常用表达。

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Part 1 shopping 话题:退货经历

课堂推进:学生一时想不到退货经历,老师提醒考试中可以编合理例子,并给出 dress(裙子)和 phone(手机)的例子。

老师处理:老师示范如何快速构造 returned anything bought online 的答案。

学生原始输出:我想不起来说什么东西了呀... 我后面的理由我就编不出来啦

老师示范 / 修改方向:I've returned a dress because it didn't fit. / The color looked different from the picture. / I returned a phone because the battery was not good and only lasted for three hours.

复习抓手:口语考试可以用合理例子支撑答案。;didn't fit(不合身)和 color looked different(颜色不一样)适合网购退货话题。;battery only lasted for three hours(电池只能撑三个小时)适合电子产品退货。

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Part 2 学习语言经历:问题诊断

课堂推进:Part 2 讲评中,老师指出学生答案太短,提醒可以讲 many things(很多事情),不要卡在一个 thing 上。

老师处理:老师帮助学生把 workshop(课程/训练营)、quizzes(小测)、review(复盘)、reading IELTS material(读雅思材料)等课堂真实内容串成长答案。

学生原始输出:part two太短了... 没话说呀。

老师示范 / 修改方向:Today, I want to talk about how I learned English at a workshop. I did many things there. I did quizzes and reviewed after the quizzes. I read IELTS materials and checked questions after practice.

复习抓手:Part 2 要用细节把时间讲满。;如果题目问 a thing,也可以围绕一个主题讲 many things。;quiz(小测)、review(复盘)、IELTS material(雅思材料)都可以作为学习语言经历。

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Part 2 学习语言经历:复盘与阅读材料

课堂推进:老师示范如何讲做题、复盘、查错和积累词汇,让 Part 2 内容更充实。

老师处理:老师带出 after the quiz、things I need to improve、remember things better、spend about two hours a day reading IELTS material 等表达。

老师示范 / 修改方向:After I finished the quiz, I knew the things I needed to improve. Through reviewing, I could improve my skills and remember things better. I would spend about two hours a day reading IELTS materials.

复习抓手:after I finished the quiz(做完小测后)可以引出复盘。;things I need to improve(需要提高的地方)适合讲学习反馈。;spend about two hours a day reading IELTS materials(每天花约两小时读雅思材料)可以补时间细节。

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Part 2 学习语言经历:口语与听力练习

课堂推进:老师把课堂口语练习、回家背题、听力做题和单词复习整理为 Part 2 的后半部分。

老师处理:老师引导学生讲 real conversations(真实对话)、IELTS speaking tests(雅思口语测试)、home practice(回家练习)、listening skill(听力能力)。

学生原始输出:听就是做题、听单词嗯然后i will review

老师示范 / 修改方向:In order to improve my speaking skill, I had real conversations just like the IELTS speaking test with my teacher. We practiced at least once or twice a week, and each time we practiced for one to two hours. I also did practice tests, reviewed them, listened to the vocabulary, and tried to memorize how to spell them.

复习抓手:real conversations(真实对话)可以描述口语训练。;once or twice a week(一周一到两次)和 one to two hours(一到两小时)能补充频率和时长。;memorize how to spell them(记住拼写)适合听力和词汇复习。

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Part 3 group study 话题:小组学习的好处

课堂推进:Part 3 进入语言学习讨论,学生先说 group study(小组学习)更好,老师提醒 Part 3 不能只说一句,要解释原因。

老师处理:老师引导学生加入 support each other、challenge each other、learn from each other、compete 等理由。

学生原始输出:I think studying with a group.Is better because we can talk,with each other

老师示范 / 修改方向:Studying with a group is better because we can support each other and challenge each other. We can learn from each other because everybody has new and interesting ideas. When I study by myself, I can get bored and lose motivation. When I study with a group, I can compete with them, which is more exciting.

复习抓手:Part 3 需要观点加解释,不能只答一句。;support each other(互相支持)、challenge each other(互相挑战)适合小组学习。;lose motivation(失去动力)可以解释独自学习的缺点。

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Part 3 group study 话题:分工的利弊

课堂推进:老师继续拓展小组学习可以 divide the work(分工),同时也提醒分工可能导致只学自己负责的部分。

老师处理:老师把学生关于分工后只钻研一个部分的中文想法转成 disadvantages(缺点)表达。

学生原始输出:你做这个part你就只钻研这个part其他部分你就不会去钻研... 下次分组的时候一就想分到这个part

老师示范 / 修改方向:When we study with a group, we can do different parts of an assignment and work together, which can make us more productive. On the other hand, each person only takes care of one part of the work, which means they don't get to learn other parts.

复习抓手:do different parts of an assignment(做作业的不同部分)可以解释分工。;more productive(更高效)是分工的好处。;on the other hand(另一方面)可以自然引出缺点。

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Part 3 学习语言的优点

课堂推进:老师引导学生整理学习英语和外语的好处,包括交流、旅行、留学、看影视和读原版书。

老师处理:老师示范 language is power、international language、communicate with local people、watch movies without subtitles 等表达。

学生原始输出:language is power... 我可以是外国人

老师示范 / 修改方向:A language can open up new opportunities in your life. If you can speak English, you can talk to people from many countries because English is an international language. When you travel, you can communicate with local people. If your English is really good, you can study at a university in another country. You can also watch English movies without subtitles and read English novels without waiting for the translated version.

复习抓手:language is power(语言就是力量)可以作为观点句。;international language(国际语言)适合解释英语用途。;subtitles(字幕)和 translated version(翻译版本)适合影视/阅读场景。

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Part 3 学习语言的缺点

课堂推进:老师示范学习新语言的缺点:需要大量时间和努力,如果不用会很快忘记。

老师处理:老师整理 it takes a lot of effort、if you don't use it, you're going to forget it 等表达。

学生原始输出:It takes花时间怎么说too much time

老师示范 / 修改方向:It takes a lot of time and effort to master a new language. If you don't use it, you're going to forget it really quickly. Many people study English for years, but if they don't use it at work, they may feel that they wasted years of study.

复习抓手:it takes a lot of time and effort(需要很多时间和努力)比 too much time 更自然。;master a new language(掌握一门新语言)适合 Part 3。;waste years of study(浪费多年学习)可以表达学习后不用的遗憾。

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Part 3 儿童是否应学习第二语言

课堂推进:老师说明儿童是否应该在学校学习 second language(第二语言)可以复用前面关于旅行、交流、文化和机会的优点。

老师处理:老师把前面语言学习好处迁移到 should children learn a second language at school 的题目上。

老师示范 / 修改方向:Yes, children should learn a second language at school because it helps them communicate with more people, understand different cultures, and get more opportunities in the future.

复习抓手:second language(第二语言)题目可以复用语言学习好处。;communicate(交流)、culture(文化)、opportunities(机会)是核心理由。;Part 3 可以把已讲过的观点迁移到相邻题。

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Part 3 最好的语言学习方式

课堂推进:老师整理学习新语言的好方法:找老师、和当地人交流、练习、做题、复盘、背诵,并让学习更有趣。

老师处理:老师示范 find a good teacher、talk to local people、do quizzes、review、make learning fun、watch TV shows in English 等表达。

老师示范 / 修改方向:The best way to learn a new language is to practice a lot, find a good teacher, talk to local people, do quizzes, review after the quizzes, and memorize useful things. It is also important to make learning fun. For example, you can find a TV show that interests you and try to watch it in English.

复习抓手:practice(练习)和 review(复盘)是语言学习核心动作。;make learning fun(让学习变有趣)可以解释长期坚持。;TV show that interests you(你感兴趣的电视剧/节目)比 textbook(课本)更有吸引力。

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Part 3 科技如何改变语言学习

课堂推进:最后讨论 technology(科技)如何改变语言学习,老师引导学生从互联网、YouTube、线上交流和 AI 老师角度回答。

老师处理:老师对比过去材料少、难找老师,现在网络资源丰富,还可以用 AI 24/7 学习。

老师示范 / 修改方向:Technology has changed language learning a lot. In the past, it was difficult to find a teacher, someone to practice with, or enough materials. Nowadays, because of the Internet, we have unlimited information in foreign languages. We can watch videos on YouTube, talk with foreigners online, send text messages, have voice calls, and ask AI to explain words anytime, 24/7.

复习抓手:technology(科技)题可以用 past vs nowadays(过去 vs 现在)结构。;unlimited information(无限信息)适合讲互联网资源。;24/7 表示一天 24 小时、一周 7 天,随时可用。

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内部跟进:答案长度与素材调用

老师处理:老师多次提醒学生答案偏短,需要把已有学习经历和真实课堂训练转化为可说内容。

学生原始输出:没话说呀。

老师示范 / 修改方向:答案素材可以来自日常英语学习、做题、复盘、背题、听力词汇和课堂口语练习。

复习抓手:学生有内容储备,但现场调用和展开不足。;后续可继续训练 Part 2 时间填充和 Part 3 观点扩展。

二、本节课亮点表现

本节课从 Part 1 的 apartment(公寓)、reading(阅读)、shopping(购物)开始,重点练习把短答案自然扩展成两到三句。

Part 2 重点整理“学习英语经历”的完整段子,把 workshop(课程/训练营)、quiz(小测)、review(复盘)、IELTS materials(雅思材料)、speaking practice(口语练习)串起来。

Part 3 重点练习语言学习话题,包括 group study(小组学习)、learning a new language(学习新语言)、technology(科技)对学习方式的影响。

三、本节课用了哪些材料

四、学生课堂输出

Apartment

I live in apartments. I like, the bathroom because... i have a big tap bathtub in the bath bedroom and i can take bubble shower.

Living with others

I live with my friends.

Reading

I like reading especially novels.

Screen reading

I prefer to read on the screen because it is easily to read.

Shopping

i very like shopping with my friends

Shopping in store

I prefer shopping in store because i can touch the dress and wear the dress.

Group study

I think studying with a group.Is better because we can talk,with each other

Learning a language disadvantage

It takes... too much time

五、本节课口语段子改进版

以下为按课堂已讲方向整理的课后复习改进版,内容来自本节课老师带练的表达和话题素材。

Do you live in an apartment or a house?

答案朗读 1

I live in an apartment.

What do you like the most about your apartment?

答案朗读 2

I like the bathroom the most because it has a big bathtub, and I can take bubble baths there.

Who do you live with?

答案朗读 3

I live with my friends. I have a roommate, and we share the rent, so it is more affordable.

Do you like reading?

答案朗读 4

Yes, I like reading, especially novels.

When do you usually read?

答案朗读 5

I usually read on the bus or before I go to sleep at night.

Do you prefer to read on paper or on the screen?

答案朗读 6

I prefer to read on the screen because it is easier to read an e-book. Paper books are hard to carry because they are heavy, but it is more convenient to read on my phone. Also, I can change the format, so the words are easier to follow.

Do you like shopping?

答案朗读 7

Yes, I like shopping very much. I especially enjoy shopping with my friends.

Do you prefer shopping online or shopping in store?

答案朗读 8

I prefer shopping in store because I can touch the clothes to feel the material and see if they are soft and comfortable. I can also try them on to see if they fit.

Have you ever returned anything you bought online?

答案朗读 9

I have returned a dress I bought online because it did not fit, and the color looked different from the picture.

Part 2 - Describe something you did when learning a new language

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Today, I want to talk about how I learned English at a workshop. I did many things there to improve my English. First, I did many quizzes and reviewed after the quizzes. After I finished a quiz, I knew the things I needed to improve. Through reviewing, I could improve my skills and remember things better. Learning something takes a long time, and it takes repetition. You have to do something many times in order to remember it.

Part 2 - Continued

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Secondly, I read a lot of English articles at the workshop. I spent about two hours a day reading IELTS materials. I also did questions and checked them after practice. If I saw something I did not understand, I would ask the teacher for answers and explanations. If I saw new vocabulary, I would write it down and look it up in the dictionary.

In order to improve my speaking skill, I had real conversations with my teacher, just like the IELTS speaking test. We practiced at least once or twice a week, and each time we practiced for one to two hours. My teacher also assigned me some simple questions to practice at home, and I tried to memorize them before I went to sleep. I also did a lot of things to improve my listening skill. I did practice tests, reviewed them, listened to the vocabulary, and tried to memorize how to spell the words.

Part 3 - Group Study

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I think studying a language with a group is better because we can support each other and challenge each other. We can also learn from each other because everybody has new and interesting ideas. When I study by myself, I sometimes get bored and lose motivation. But when I study with a group, I can compete with other people, which is more exciting.

Part 3 - Group Work

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Another benefit is that group members can divide the work. We can do different parts of an assignment and work together, which can make us more productive. On the other hand, there are also some disadvantages. Each person may only take care of one part of the work, which means they do not get to learn the other parts.

Part 3 - Advantages and Disadvantages of Learning a Language

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Learning a new language is very useful because language is power. A language can open up new opportunities in your life. For example, if you can speak English, you can talk to people from many countries because English is an international language. When you travel, you can communicate with local people. If your English is really good, you can also go to a university in another country.

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Another advantage is that you can enjoy more books, movies, and TV shows. If you understand English, you do not have to read subtitles when you watch movies or TV shows. You can also read English novels without waiting for the translated version to come out. However, learning a new language also has disadvantages. It takes a lot of time and effort to master a new language. If you do not use it, you may forget it really quickly.

Part 3 - Technology and Language Learning

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Technology has changed language learning a lot. In the past, it was difficult to find a teacher, someone to practice with, or enough materials. Before the Internet, it was also difficult to find English books. However, nowadays, because of the Internet, we have unlimited information in foreign languages. We can watch videos on YouTube, talk with foreigners online, send text messages, or even have voice calls to practice conversational English. AI can also be a great teacher because it is available 24/7. Whenever we want to learn, we can ask AI to explain a word or show us how to use it.

六、本节课纠错

原句问题推荐表达记忆方法
bubble showerbubble bathbubble bath 是泡泡浴;shower 是淋浴。
it is easily to readit is easier to read这里需要比较级 easier。
I very like shoppingI like shopping very much英语中不能说 very like。
wear the dresstry it on / put it on to see if it fits购物试穿要用 try on;wear 更像已经穿着自己的衣服。
relax novelread for fun表达娱乐阅读时可以说 read for fun。
too much timea lot of time and effort描述掌握语言的成本时,a lot of time and effort 更自然。

七、课后任务

八、方法和词汇

方法总结

  • 短答案扩展法:先直接回答,再补原因和例子。
  • Part 2 时间填充法:把一个主题拆成多件真实做过的事,按顺序讲。
  • Part 3 对比法:用 on the other hand 引出另一面。
  • 过去和现在对比法:讲 technology 题时用 in the past 和 nowadays。

补充词汇

  • apartment:公寓
  • bathtub:浴缸
  • novel:小说
  • academic article:学术文章
  • material:材质;材料
  • assignment:作业/任务
  • productive:高效的
  • international language:国际语言
  • translated version:翻译版本
  • conversational English:日常对话英语