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口语 · 2026-06-04

韵雅同学的课程学习报告

IELTS 口语 Part 1 高频话题快速回答,Part 2 为家人感到骄傲的故事段子,以及 Part 3 关于学习动力、父母骄傲和奖励机制的观点展开。

学员:韵雅同学 老师:滕达老师 课型:正课 主题:IELTS Speaking Part 1 高频话题与 Part 2/3 proud of a family member 拓展

课后复习模块

练过的材料

  • IELTS Speaking Part 1 常考话题:student, subjects, home, hometown, typing, films, memory
  • IELTS Speaking Part 2 题目:Describe a time when you felt proud of a family member.
  • IELTS Speaking Part 3 话题:children working hard for grades, adults feeling proud, parents feeling proud, rewards and motivation

词汇和表达

  • graduated from high school:I just graduated from high school.;高中毕业
  • bathtub:There is a huge bathtub in the bathroom.;浴缸
  • bubble bath:I can take a bubble bath and relax.;泡泡浴
  • humid:The climate is hot and humid.;潮湿的
  • I just graduated from high school.
  • I studied many subjects in high school, such as Chinese, maths and English.

纠错重点

  • I'm a students;I'm a student.;student 单数前用 a,不加 s。
  • and just graduate from high school;I just graduated from high school.;已经毕业,用过去式 graduated。
  • I plan studying;I plan to study.;plan 后面接 to do。
  • because I find Media is interesting;because I find media interesting.;I find + 名词 + 形容词。
  • The faster character moved;The faster you type, the faster your character moves.;the 比较级..., the 比较级... 表示“越……越……”。
  • she became confidence;she became confident.;became 后面接形容词 confident。

可回读产出

  • 本节课口语段子改进版:Describe a time when you felt proud of a family member.(part2);Story(part2)

课后动作

  • Part 1 回答先直接回答,再补一个原因或例子。
  • Part 2 故事按“人物背景-困难-努力-结果-为什么骄傲”推进。
  • Part 3 抽象题可以先表态,再解释原因,再补充例子或对比。

一、课堂推进时间轴

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开场复习:学习身份与高中科目

课堂推进:课堂从 Part 1 常见开场题开始,练习如何自然回答自己是学生、刚高中毕业,以及高中学过哪些科目。

老师处理:老师提醒过去式和毕业后的表达,示范用 I just graduated from high school 和 What subject did you study in high school 来回答。

学生原始输出:I'm a students I'm in year twelve; and just graduate from high school; I studied many subjects in high school such as chinese maths and english.

老师示范 / 修改方向:I just graduated from high school. / I studied many subjects in high school, such as Chinese, maths and English.

复习抓手:graduated from high school:高中毕业;过去已经毕业时,要用 did you study / I studied;列举科目时给两三个例子即可

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Part 1:最喜欢和最不喜欢的科目

课堂推进:学生练习说明喜欢历史、觉得政治难记,老师帮助把原因说得更自然。

老师处理:老师引导学生用 I find... very interesting / hard to remember 这类结构说明感受。

学生原始输出:my favorite subject is history because um the story and the characters in history, is very interesting; my least favorite subject是politics uh politics because i find it um the knowledge of politics is ah hard for me to remember

老师示范 / 修改方向:I find history very interesting. / I find politics hard to remember.

复习抓手:favorite subject:最喜欢的科目;least favorite subject:最不喜欢的科目;I find + 名词 + 形容词:我觉得……怎么样

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Part 1:大学计划与家

课堂推进:学生练习大学专业、住处、和最喜欢公寓哪个部分。老师纠正 plan to do 的结构,并帮助学生把 bathroom/bathtub 的答案说完整。

老师处理:老师纠正 I plan studying 为 I plan to study,并围绕 bathroom、bathtub、bubble bath 帮学生补充细节。

学生原始输出:I plan studying I plan to study media in university; I live in an apartment; I live with my friend; It must be bathroom, because ah it is um bat top a big bat top in bathroomand i can take a bubble bath um and relax

老师示范 / 修改方向:I plan to study media in university because I find media interesting. / I like the bathroom the most because there is a huge bathtub in the bathroom. I can take a bubble bath and relax.

复习抓手:plan to do:计划做某事;bathtub:浴缸;bubble bath:泡泡浴;回答房间问题时要给出具体原因

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Part 1:家乡重庆与历史学习

课堂推进:学生练习介绍家乡重庆、气候和是否学过家乡历史。老师提醒回答要补充上下文,让考官能听懂背景。

老师处理:老师把学生的 school subject 细节整理成完整语境,并纠正毕业后描述高中经历时使用过去时。

学生原始输出:my hometown is重庆; I like uh climatemostin my home town; Of course I learned the history about my hometown when i was in high school; there was a subject that we need to study it is all about the history, of our home town

老师示范 / 修改方向:When I was in high school, there was a subject about the history of my hometown.

复习抓手:hometown:家乡;humid:潮湿的;给点语境:回答时补充 when/where/what;高中经历用过去时:was / there was

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Part 1:家乡是否适合年轻人居住

课堂推进:学生谈到重庆在海外变火、夜景、打卡和旅游热度。老师引导学生从 living(长期居住)角度回答,比如娱乐、美食、工作机会、生活成本。

老师处理:老师区分 visit 和 live 的答题重点,示范从 fun place、good food、entertainment、job、not expensive 等方面展开。

学生原始输出:Of course, Um My Home Town Is Famous Uh In abroad; 重庆is known all over the world because It's a cyber city

老师示范 / 修改方向:Of course, my hometown is suitable for young people to live in because it is a fun place. There is good food and a lot of entertainment in the city. Because the population is so big, it is easy to find a job. Also, it is not that expensive to live in Chongqing.

复习抓手:suitable:适合的;livable:适合居住的;entertainment:娱乐活动;live 强调长期生活,visit 强调旅游参观

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Part 1:Typing 打字话题

课堂推进:学生练习打字和手写、什么时候需要打字、打字是否重要,以及小学学习打字的经历。

老师处理:老师帮助学生把打字用途扩展为 homework、text messages、taking notes,并示范 the faster..., the faster... 句型。

学生原始输出:I prefer typing because my hand writing looks very ugly; I need to type When Whenever, I do my workand the texts a messaging to my friends; Yes I know typing at primary school; When I in primary School We Learn Typing Through Uh Typing Games

老师示范 / 修改方向:I need to type whenever I do my homework and send text messages to my friends. / We learned typing through a typing game. The faster you type, the faster your character moves on the screen.

复习抓手:handwriting:手写字;send text messages:发文字消息;take notes:记笔记;The faster you type, the faster your character moves:你打字越快,角色移动越快

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Part 1:Films 电影话题

课堂推进:学生练习喜欢什么电影、小时候看电影频率、在家看还是去电影院看,以及多久去一次电影院。

老师处理:老师提醒 often / how often 是在问频率,可以给 once a week 这类具体频率。

学生原始输出:I like romantic films; Because I like the feelings when a two-two character fall in love; Yes iI often watched films嗯i was,a child; if is a new, new films uh I like um我I like watch uh watch it in the cinema uh if it is an old film uh I prefer uh watch it at home

老师示范 / 修改方向:I watched movies very often when I was a kid. I watched a movie every single week. / If it is a new film, I like to watch it in the cinema. If it is an old film, I prefer to watch it at home.

复习抓手:romantic films:爱情电影;once a week:一周一次;How often 问频率;cinema:电影院

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Part 1:Memory 记忆话题

课堂推进:学生练习是否擅长记东西、日常需要记什么、是否忘过重要事情,以及用什么方法帮助记忆。

老师处理:老师把学生的答案整理成 keep notes、take notes on phone/computer、record a voice memo 等方法。

学生原始输出:Yes.I'm good at remembering things; I need to remember what i need to do every day; No,I've never forgotten any part because I keep notes of the important things; such as My Phone我的cat and laptop in the Uh voice recording And voice recording

老师示范 / 修改方向:There are many things I do to help me remember things, such as taking notes on my phone, taking notes on my computer, or recording a voice memo.

复习抓手:memorize / remember:记住;daily life:日常生活;keep notes:做记录;voice memo:语音备忘录

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Part 2:为家人感到骄傲的经历

课堂推进:课堂进入 Part 2,题目是描述一次为家庭成员感到骄傲的经历。老师先讲答题结构:谁、做了什么、困难是什么、怎么努力、结果如何、为什么骄傲。

老师处理:老师解释 proud of somebody 的故事通常需要变化和过程,并给出妹妹努力提升英语的完整示范段落。

学生原始输出:I want to talk about My sister; She's not very good at English.And always get low score last year.She decided,decided oh she must work hard to improve her english grade first Uh she go to bookstore Um And bring seven books back和reading them daily basis second she watch English TV show and try to understanding without Chinese

老师示范 / 修改方向:Today let me tell you about my sister and how she learned to improve her English skills. She was still in elementary school, and she was never good at English. Last year she decided to work hard. She bought English books, read them daily, watched English TV shows without Chinese subtitles, and kept trying. After a year, her English improved a lot.

复习抓手:feel proud of:为……感到骄傲;low score:低分;on a daily basis:每天;without Chinese subtitles:没有中文字幕;故事要有变化:以前不好、中间努力、最后进步

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Part 2:学生复述与老师鼓励

课堂推进:学生尝试完整复述 Part 2 段子,保留了妹妹英语不好、买书、看英文节目、差点放弃、被鼓励、去悉尼旅行时能说英语等主要内容。

老师处理:老师让学生从头再来一遍,并指出学生其实已经能完成这个段子。

学生原始输出:this is a very interesting question to there are many people ah i feel proud of in my life but today i want to talk about my sister she she study she studied in primary school and then she never get a good grade um and often get low score last year, um. She think she must work hard to improve her English uh grade first she go to bookstore and bring several english books back um and reading them daily basis second she watch english TV show um and try to understand without Chinese嗯 it is difficult at the beginning and she almost want to give up但i encouraged her I said you can do it after several months um she became confidence ah la last month our family go to Sydney for vacation and she can speak um English during the entire trip so this reason a why i proud of her.

老师示范 / 修改方向:This is why I am very proud of her. / She became confident. / She could speak English during the entire trip.

复习抓手:confident:自信的;during the entire trip:整个旅途中;This is why I am proud of her:这就是我为她骄傲的原因;不要给自己负面提示,已经可以说出来

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Part 3:孩子是否只为成绩努力

课堂推进:老师带学生讨论 Part 3 抽象题:孩子只为成绩努力好不好。课堂重点是把观点从“成绩”扩展到 motivation(动力)、confidence(自信)和 self-improvement(自我提升)。

老师处理:老师示范观点:只为成绩学习不够好,因为成绩下降时容易失去动力;学习的重点应是成长、信心和更好的生活。

学生原始输出:I think it is not good for um children's future but uh if in school they must working hard for their grade

老师示范 / 修改方向:It is not good to study just for grades. Students may lose their motivation sooner or later. The whole point of learning is not to get good grades. The whole point of learning is to improve yourself and become more confident.

复习抓手:just for grades:只是为了成绩;motivation:动力;decline / decrease:下降;improve yourself:提升自己;overcome difficulties:克服困难

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Part 3:成年人和父母什么时候会骄傲

课堂推进:老师继续拓展 proud 话题,整理成年人、父母和孩子相关的常见回答角度。

老师处理:老师示范成年人可能为事业、赚钱养家、照顾老人而骄傲;父母可能因孩子学习进步、运动表现、独立和健康而骄傲。

学生原始输出:Like i just mention嗯Their children um improve at school; See, their children uh became become more independent.And健康and See their children live a healthy life

老师示范 / 修改方向:Adults may feel proud when they make enough money to support the family, build a successful career, or take care of the elderly in the family. Parents may feel proud when they see their children improve at school, compete and win in sports, become more independent, and live a healthy life.

复习抓手:support the family:养家;successful career:成功的事业;take care of the elderly:照顾老人;become more independent:变得更独立;live a healthy life:过健康的生活

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Part 3:奖励是否能让孩子变好

课堂推进:最后讨论 rewards(奖励)是否能帮助孩子变好。老师和学生一起区分 external motivation(外部动力)和 internal motivation(内在动力)。

老师处理:老师先承认小奖励有效,再指出如果一直依赖奖励,孩子可能失去长期动力,并强调内在成就感更持久。

学生原始输出:我觉得这个点就是我觉他不好的点在于就是如果每次考好成绩父母都要给奖励那就是我觉得这不是理所应当的嗯就是你获得一个好成绩父母奖励你给一个奖励而不是因为你获得一个好成绩父母就必须奖励你

老师示范 / 修改方向:External motivation like rewards is important, but it does not last long. Internal motivation comes from within yourself. It is a sense of achievement and growth. It makes you feel confident and independent, and it lasts longer.

复习抓手:reward:奖励;external motivation:外部动力;internal motivation:内在动力;sense of achievement:成就感;last longer:更持久

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教师内部观察:Part 2 输出信心与心理提示

老师处理:老师在学生完成 Part 2 后指出学生已经能做到,并提醒不要给自己负面提示。

学生原始输出:哎呦我忘了啊!不要给自己那个,不要给自己那负面提示。

老师示范 / 修改方向:刚才我觉得你说得非常好。

复习抓手:学生遇到长段表达时容易先否定自己;实际产出能覆盖主要故事线;后续可继续训练稳定复述和自我提示

二、本节课亮点表现

能围绕 student、hometown、typing、films、memory 等 Part 1 常见话题持续回答。

Part 2 已经能说出完整故事线:妹妹英语不好、开始努力、买书、看英文节目、差点放弃、被鼓励、最后旅行中能说英语。

课堂重点练习了 the faster..., the faster... 和 just for grades / internal motivation 等 Part 3 观点表达。

三、本节课用了哪些材料

四、学生课堂输出

高中科目

I studied many subjects in high school such as chinese maths and english.

喜欢的科目

my favorite subject is history because um the story and the characters in history, is very interesting

大学计划

I plan studying I plan to study media in university

公寓里最喜欢的部分

It must be bathroom, because ah it is um bat top a big bat top in bathroomand i can take a bubble bath um and relax

打字话题

I prefer typing because my hand writing looks very ugly

Part 2 proud of sister

this is a very interesting question to there are many people ah i feel proud of in my life but today i want to talk about my sister she she study she studied in primary school and then she never get a good grade um and often get low score last year, um. She think she must work hard to improve her English uh grade first she go to bookstore and bring several english books back um and reading them daily basis second she watch english TV show um and try to understand without Chinese嗯 it is difficult at the beginning and she almost want to give up但i encouraged her I said you can do it after several months um she became confidence ah la last month our family go to Sydney for vacation and she can speak um English during the entire trip so this reason a why i proud of her.

Part 3 grades

I think it is not good for um children's future but uh if in school they must working hard for their grade

五、本节课口语段子改进版

以下为按课堂已讲方向整理的课后复习改进版,内容来自课堂中老师示范和学生复述的故事线。

Describe a time when you felt proud of a family member.

答案朗读 1

This is a very interesting question. There are many people in my life who I am proud of, but today I want to talk about my younger sister and how she improved her English.

Story

答案朗读 2

My sister was in primary school, and she was not very good at English. She often got low scores in her English class. Last year, she decided to work hard to improve her English. First, she went to a bookstore and bought several English books. Then she started reading them on a daily basis. Second, she watched English TV shows and tried to understand them without Chinese subtitles.

Difficulty and Result

答案朗读 3

It was difficult at the beginning, and she almost wanted to give up. But I encouraged her. I told her, "You can do it." After several months, she became more confident and formed the habit of using English in everyday life. Last month, our family went to Sydney for vacation, and she could speak English during the entire trip. So this is the reason why I am very proud of her.

Do you think children should work hard just for grades?

答案朗读 4

I do not think it is good to study just for grades. If children only care about grades, they may lose their motivation when their grades go down. The whole point of learning is not only to get good grades. It is also to improve yourself, become more confident, and learn how to overcome difficulties.

Do rewards help children become better?

答案朗读 5

I think rewards can help children sometimes. For example, if a child gets a good grade and receives a small gift, the child may feel happy and work harder. However, rewards are external motivation, and they do not last very long. Internal motivation is more important because it comes from a sense of achievement and growth. It can make children feel confident and independent.

六、本节课纠错

原句问题推荐表达记忆方法
I'm a studentsI'm a student.student 单数前用 a,不加 s。
and just graduate from high schoolI just graduated from high school.已经毕业,用过去式 graduated。
I plan studyingI plan to study.plan 后面接 to do。
because I find Media is interestingbecause I find media interesting.I find + 名词 + 形容词。
The faster character movedThe faster you type, the faster your character moves.the 比较级..., the 比较级... 表示“越……越……”。
she became confidenceshe became confident.became 后面接形容词 confident。
so this reason a why i proud of herSo this is the reason why I am proud of her.be proud of 需要 be 动词。

七、课后任务

这部分会在确认后补充。

八、方法和词汇

方法总结

  • Part 1 回答先直接回答,再补一个原因或例子。
  • Part 2 故事按“人物背景-困难-努力-结果-为什么骄傲”推进。
  • Part 3 抽象题可以先表态,再解释原因,再补充例子或对比。

补充词汇

  • low score:低分
  • improve:提升
  • give up:放弃
  • encourage:鼓励
  • independent:独立的
  • sense of growth:成长感