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IELTS 口语模考与讲评:Part 1 快速准确回答、Part 2 搭建完整故事、Part 3 用原因和例子支撑观点

学员:韵雅同学 老师:滕达老师 课型:模考 主题:IELTS 口语模考与讲评:morning time、patience、memory、smile 话题

课后复习模块

练过的材料

  • IELTS Speaking Part 1:morning time、patience、memory
  • IELTS Speaking Part 2:Describe an occasion when you smiled.
  • IELTS Speaking Part 3:smiling in modern life, photographs, professional settings, cultures, reasons for not smiling

词汇和表达

  • sleep in:No, I like sleeping in.;睡懒觉
  • routine:Has your morning routine changed?;日常规律、固定会做的事
  • patient:Are you a patient person?;有耐心的
  • patience:I need to have patience.;耐心
  • Could you please explain the question?
  • No, I like sleeping in, and I usually get up in the afternoon.

纠错重点

  • I like sleep.
  • Walk and running.
  • I never do any exercise in the morning.
  • make program with a roommate
  • I'm a good memorizing person.
  • The people in photograph want others see them is happy.

可回读产出

  • 本节课口语段子改进版:{"type": "part2", "prompt": "Describe an occasion when you smiled.", "text": "This is a very interesting question. I have smiled many times in my life, but today I want to talk about a time when I smiled during a school trip. It happened about a year ago, when I was studying in Australia. On that day, we took a boat from Sydney to another island. The weather was wonderful, and the sunshine was beautiful.", "ttsReady": true};{"type": "part2", "prompt": "Describe an occasion when you smiled.", "text": "On that trip, I wore one of my favorite skirts. It was a creamy white skirt from my dad. It was very cute, with puff sleeves and lace at the back. My dad chose it for me by himself, so every time I saw it, I could feel his love.", "ttsReady": true}

课后动作

  • 复习 Part 1 三组话题:morning time、patience、memory,每题至少准备一句完整回答。
  • 背熟并能朗读 Part 2 改进版:Describe an occasion when you smiled.
  • 用“人、时间、地点、事件、感受”的顺序,自己再整理一个 Part 2 人物类话题。
  • Part 3 回答时练习“观点 + 原因 + 例子”,不要只说一句结论。

一、课堂推进时间轴

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模考开场与身份确认

课堂推进:本节课先按正式口语考试流程开始,老师询问姓名和称呼,帮助学生进入模考状态。

老师处理:老师用英文完成开场身份确认。

学生原始输出:My name is Zhao Yunya. / Uh, you can call me Yunya. / How are you. Uh. Good.

老师示范 / 修改方向:老师确认学生可以被称为 Yunya,并继续进入 Part 1。

复习抓手:正式口语开场要简短回答即可;How are you doing today? 可以回答 I'm good 或 I'm doing well

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Part 1:morning time 话题模考

课堂推进:学生围绕早晨起床、早餐、运动和小时候的早晨习惯进行回答。老师后续重点讲了 sleep in(睡懒觉)、walking and running(散步和跑步)以及 routine(日常规律)。

老师处理:老师连续提问 morning time 相关 Part 1 问题,并在讲评中纠正表达。

学生原始输出:No, I I like sleep. Uh. Uh and the. Um.Get up in the afternoon. / I cook breakfast. Uh and go out, uh.To do actor exercise. / Walk and running. / Yes.Uh, in my childhood, I uh.I never do any exercise in the morning.

老师示范 / 修改方向:No, I like sleeping in. And I usually get up in the afternoon. / I cook breakfast and go out to exercise. / I like walking and running in the morning. / When I was a child, I never did any exercise in the morning, and now if I get up early, I'll do some exercise.

复习抓手:sleep in 是“睡懒觉”;routine 是“日常规律、固定会做的事”;问 childhood(小时候)时,要注意过去时:did / was;没有听懂题目时可以说:Could you please explain the question?

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Part 1:patience 话题模考

课堂推进:学生回答自己是否有耐心、小时候是否有耐心、什么时候需要耐心,以及耐心是否重要。老师讲了 patience(耐心)、patient(有耐心的)和 group project(小组项目)的准确说法。

老师处理:老师引导学生把“对自己有耐心、对别人没那么有耐心”和“小组作业需要耐心”说完整。

学生原始输出:It depends.Uh, to myself, uh, I'm very patient, but.To other guys, I I'm I'm not very patient. / Yeah, maybe I can't remember. / I think a a a in sometimes I need to do some.Hmm.Formal um.Formal things. Uh huh.Like um.Make program with a roommate. / Yes.Uh, I think patient is important because um.Uh, if uh we.We are patient.We can, uh, do things more.Um.Careful.

老师示范 / 修改方向:I have a lot of patience for myself, but I don't have a lot of patience for other people. / Yes, I was very patient when I was a kid. / I think I need to have patience, especially when I do group projects with my classmates. / If we're patient, we can do things more carefully.

复习抓手:patient 是形容词:有耐心的;patience 是名词:耐心;group project 是“小组项目”,program 通常是别人设计好的项目或课程;小时候相关问题常考过去时:was / did

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Part 1:memory 话题模考

课堂推进:学生围绕记忆力、记东西的方法、平时会忘什么、记忆力对学习是否重要进行回答。老师重点讲了如何直接套用题目里的表达,并补充 short-term memory(短期记忆)和 long-term memory(长期记忆)。

老师处理:老师指出 Part 1 可以顺着题目结构回答,并帮助学生把“记得快也忘得快”表达得更准确。

学生原始输出:Ah yes, I I think I can say I'm a good memorize.Memorizing.Person. Um.But I forgot.Uh, also very quickly. / Under understand the hmm meaning. / I usually forget.Anything. / Yes.Uh, if we have a, a good memory, we can.Uh.We can do.Uh.We can do better.

老师示范 / 修改方向:Yes, I'm good at memorizing things. / I have a really good short term memory, but my long term memory is not that good. / Understanding the meaning helps me remember things better. / I'm a very forgetful person. If you interrupt me, I will lose my train of thought. / I sometimes forget what I'm about to do next.

复习抓手:memorize 是“记住、背下来”;I'm good at memorizing things 是自然表达;short-term memory 是“短期记忆”;long-term memory 是“长期记忆”;lose my train of thought 是“忘记刚才要说什么”

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Part 2:describe an occasion when you smiled 模考

课堂推进:Part 2 题目要求描述一次自己笑了的场合。学生一开始确认 occasion 的意思,然后讲到爸爸几年前送的生日礼物:一条奶白色裙子,因为想到爸爸的爱而微笑。

老师处理:老师解释 occasion 是“一次场合/一次经历”,并让学生按考试流程准备和作答。

学生原始输出:This is.A very interesting question. / I uh I have many times um I smiled.Um, but today I want to talk about um.Uh, an occasion that um.Um.My dad, my dad, uh.Gave me a birthday gift a few years ago. / It is um.It is a cream white um.Um, cream white.Skirt. / The skirt with um.Bubble no uh.Puff sleeves and.Lace of.Backs back. / Because um, my my dad, pick pick it up.It um by himself, so uh.Uh.Every time I I see it, I can feel um.The love of my dad.

老师示范 / 修改方向:A time when you smiled. / I still remember one day we went on a school trip. On the trip, we had to take a boat from Sydney to another island. / On that day, I wore my favorite skirt, and this skirt was from my dad. It's creamy white, and it's very cute. It has lace at the back. / I was so happy, I couldn't help myself but smile all the time.

复习抓手:occasion 是“一次场合、一次经历”;cream white / creamy white 是“奶白色”;puff sleeves 是“泡泡袖”;lace at the back 是“背后的蕾丝”;可以把照片、旅行、衣服、爸爸的礼物串成一个完整故事

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Part 2 讲评:如何自己搭台阶讲长段

课堂推进:老师讲解 Part 2 不能只等考官追问,而要自己假装考官在问:是谁、什么时候、在哪里、发生了什么、为什么开心。这样可以把一个故事讲完整。

老师处理:老师用“船上旅行、手机自拍、裙子来自爸爸”的内容示范如何把 Part 2 扩展成完整段子。

学生原始输出:就我part就part不想说。对,因为没见过,懵了。嗯,就是我觉得对话这种会对我比较义务好。

老师示范 / 修改方向:你就想这个考官对你很有兴趣,他会问你这些问题,无非那些问题:人、时间、地点、事件、人物、感受。 / Let me tell you where it happened. It was on the boat, in the ocean. / Let me tell you when it happened. It was about a year ago.

复习抓手:Part 2 要自己补充“人、时间、地点、事件、感受”;可以把已准备过的照片素材改造成 smiling 话题;遇到没见过的题,不要停在“没素材”,可以从已有经历改写

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Part 2 延伸练习:helpful person 话题

课堂推进:老师临时用“describe a person who likes helping others”做练习,训练学生用同样的方法展开人物类话题。

老师处理:老师让学生尝试描述一个乐于助人的人,并提示可以编一个叫 Tracy 的朋友,补充年龄、认识时间、在哪里认识、多久见一次等信息。

学生原始输出:There are many.People.People.In my life.In my life.嗯,who likes?Who likes a help?嗯,other. / But I want to talk about my best friend Tracy. / I know.Um.Five years ago. / She is my high school classmate.

老师示范 / 修改方向:There are many people in my life who like helping others, but I want to talk about my best friend Tracy. / I have known her for five years. She is my high school classmate.

复习抓手:人物类 Part 2 可以讲外貌、关系、认识多久、在哪里认识、多久见面、为什么这个人符合题目;who like helping others 是“喜欢帮助别人的人”;I have known her for five years 比 I know five years ago 更准确

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Part 3:smile 话题模考与讲评

课堂推进:学生回答了现在的人是否比过去笑得更多、为什么人在照片里笑、职业场合微笑是否重要、不同文化是否因不同原因微笑、为什么有人不爱笑、是否应该多笑。老师重点补充了压力、线上交流、真实面对面交流、销售和顾客场景。

老师处理:老师根据学生回答扩展 Part 3 论证,让学生用原因和例子支撑观点。

学生原始输出:No, I think hmm making people smile more in the past.Um because.Uh.Nowadays um.Uh, there are many things.Many problems people have to face. / I think photograph um.Uh.Is um.Photograph can.Uh, can offer.Uh happiness to people. / Ah yes, I think it is a very important.Um.Um because um.A smile uh.Smiling can show your op or opinions, your attitude. / I think maybe because I do not know many.Culture of other country. / Maybe they think other people is hmm.Um.Do do not respect, respect uh them. / Yes.Um.I think a smile can give us a energy.

老师示范 / 修改方向:I think people smile less now compared to the past. The reason is that people are very stressed. / People usually take photos of happy things. We usually take photos when we're having a party, when we're having a good time, and we want to keep that memory. / If you're smiling to your client or customer, then they will think you're friendly, warm, and helpful. / I don't have much knowledge about other cultures, so I can't really go into details on this question.

复习抓手:Part 3 要给原因和例子;stress 是“压力”;face-to-face conversation 是“面对面交流”;client / customer 是“客户/顾客”;professional setting 是“职业场合”;smiling can show your attitude 可以,但 show your opinion 不准确

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内部观察:Part 2 抗拒与课堂情绪

老师处理:老师识别到学生对 Part 2 独白有抗拒,继续用拆问题和搭台阶的方法降低难度。

学生原始输出:你让我说part three,我就要不开心了。 / 就我part就part不想说。对,因为没见过,懵了。

老师示范 / 修改方向:你就考试,你就当你在跟我说话。 / 你就想这个考官在,考官对你很有兴趣,他会问你这些问题。

复习抓手:学生更适应问答式互动,对长独白的主动展开压力较大;后续训练可继续把 Part 2 拆成考官隐形追问

二、本节课亮点表现

完成了一套围绕 morning time、patience、memory 和 smile 的口语模考。

Part 1 重点练习了顺着题目结构回答,例如 Are you good at memorizing things? 可以直接答 Yes, I'm good at memorizing things.

Part 2 重点学习了如何把“爸爸送的奶白色裙子”和“旅行照片”串成一次 smiling occasion(微笑的经历)。

Part 3 重点学习了用 stress(压力)、face-to-face conversation(面对面交流)、customer(顾客)等具体原因和例子展开观点。

三、本节课用了哪些材料

四、学生课堂输出

Part 1 morning time

No, I I like sleep. Uh. Uh and the. Um.Get up in the afternoon.

Part 1 patience

It depends.Uh, to myself, uh, I'm very patient, but.To other guys, I I'm I'm not very patient.

Part 1 memory

Ah yes, I I think I can say I'm a good memorize.Memorizing.Person. Um.But I forgot.Uh, also very quickly.

Part 2 smiling occasion

My dad, my dad, uh.Gave me a birthday gift a few years ago. It is a cream white skirt. The skirt with puff sleeves and lace of backs back. Every time I see it, I can feel the love of my dad.

Part 3 photographs

Photograph can offer happiness to people. The people in photograph want others see them is happy.

Part 3 professional settings

A smile uh.Smiling can show your op or opinions, your attitude.

五、本节课口语段子改进版

按课堂已讲方向整理的课后复习改进版,围绕课堂中讲过的爸爸送的裙子、旅行、船上照片和微笑原因展开。

Describe an occasion when you smiled.

答案朗读 1

This is a very interesting question. I have smiled many times in my life, but today I want to talk about a time when I smiled during a school trip. It happened about a year ago, when I was studying in Australia. On that day, we took a boat from Sydney to another island. The weather was wonderful, and the sunshine was beautiful.

On that trip, I wore one of my favorite skirts. It was a creamy white skirt from my dad. It was very cute, with puff sleeves and lace at the back. My dad chose it for me by himself, so every time I saw it, I could feel his love.

When we got on the boat, everything felt perfect. I was wearing my favorite skirt, the view was beautiful, and I felt really happy. I couldn't help smiling all the time. I also took out my phone and took a selfie. It became one of my favorite photos, because it reminds me of that happy day and also of my dad's love.

Do you think people smile more now than in the past?

答案朗读 2

I think people smile less now compared to the past. The reason is that people are under a lot of stress in their daily life, such as stress from school and work. Also, people spend more time on their phones and computers, so they have fewer face-to-face conversations. When people talk to a real person, they usually smile more.

Why do people smile in photographs?

答案朗读 3

People usually smile in photographs because they want to keep happy memories. For example, people often take photos at parties or when they are having a good time. They want others to see them as happy, and they also want to remember that moment later.

Is smiling important in professional settings?

答案朗读 4

Yes, I think smiling is important in professional settings. For example, if a salesperson smiles at customers, the customers may think this person is friendly, warm, and helpful. My mom has a beauty salon, and when people work with customers, a smile can make customers feel more comfortable.

六、本节课纠错

原句问题推荐表达记忆方法
I like sleep.
Walk and running.
I never do any exercise in the morning.
make program with a roommate
I'm a good memorizing person.
The people in photograph want others see them is happy.
Smiling can show your opinions, your attitude.

七、课后任务

八、方法和词汇

方法总结

  • Part 1:顺着题目里的句型回答,减少临场造句压力。
  • Part 2:把题目拆成隐形追问:谁、什么时候、在哪里、发生了什么、为什么有感受。
  • Part 3:每个观点后面加一个原因和一个生活例子。

补充词汇

  • face-to-face conversation:面对面交流
  • stress:压力
  • friendly:友好的
  • warm:温暖亲切的
  • helpful:愿意帮忙的
  • trauma:创伤
  • attractive:有吸引力的
  • confident:自信的