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IELTS 口语 Part 2 素材组织与迁移:WeChat、smartphone、Guardians of the Galaxy、环保产品、衣服、照片

学员:韵雅同学 老师:滕达老师 课型:正课 主题:IELTS Speaking Part 2 话题素材串联:useful app, technology, movie, eco-friendly product, clothing, photo

课后复习模块

练过的材料

  • useful app 题目:Describe a useful app on your phone.
  • technology 题目:Describe a piece of technology you own.
  • movie/book 题目:Describe a futuristic movie or book.
  • eco-friendly product 题目:环保产品素材:智能压缩垃圾桶。
  • clothing 题目:喜欢的衣服素材:奶油白短连衣裙。
  • photo 题目:照片素材起步:一张 live 自拍照。

词汇和表达

  • on a daily basis:每天
  • communicate with:和……沟通
  • free of charge:免费的
  • short video clips:短视频
  • This is a very interesting question. There are many useful apps on my phone, such as WeChat, Instagram and TikTok, but today I would like to tell you about WeChat.
  • I first started using WeChat around eight years ago, and I use it on a daily basis.

纠错重点

  • There are lot app apps in my phone on my phone.;There are a lot of apps on my phone.;apps 要用复数;手机上用 on my phone。
  • I first start use WeChat is around eight years ago.;I first started using WeChat around eight years ago.;讲过去开始使用,用 started using。
  • on the daily base;on a daily basis;固定搭配是 on a daily basis。
  • I will play the game in WeChat.;I play games on WeChat.;泛指游戏通常用复数 games。
  • the game is for free;the games are free / free of charge;games 是复数,搭配 are。
  • I can also shopping in WeChat.;I can also shop in WeChat.;can 后面接动词原形。

可回读产出

  • 本节课口语段子改进版:{"topic": "Describe a useful app on your phone", "text": "This is a very interesting question. There are many useful apps on my phone, such as WeChat, Instagram and TikTok, but today I would like to tell you about WeChat. I first started using WeChat around eight years ago, and I use it on a daily basis. I usually spend at least three hours on it every day. I use it everywhere, such as at home, on the subway or bus, and even at school. WeChat is very important to me because I use it to communicate with my family and friends. I studied in Australia last year, so during that time I needed to send messages to my mom and my best friend back home. WeChat can also do many other things. When I feel bored, I play games on WeChat. The games are free and fun to play. I also watch short video clips on it, and I can shoot vlogs to share my daily life with others, such as what I eat, what I cook and where I go for fun. I can also shop in WeChat, and WeChat Pay is extremely important in China. If I cannot log in to WeChat, I feel like I cannot do anything. So I think WeChat is one of the most useful apps on my phone."};{"topic": "Describe a piece of technology you own", "text": "This is a very interesting question. There are many technologies that I own and use all the time, such as my smartphone, my laptop and my tablet, but today I would like to talk about my smartphone. I first started using a smartphone about nine years ago. Now I use my phone on a daily basis, and honestly, I use it for more than fifteen hours a day. I use it everywhere, such as at home, on the subway or bus, and even at school. With my smartphone, I can do a lot of things. First, I can play games on it. The games on my smartphone are free and fun to play. Second, I can call an Uber on my phone, and it only takes about two minutes for me to call a ride, so it is very convenient. I also use my phone to communicate with my family and friends. I studied in Australia last year, so I needed to send messages to my mom and my best friend. Another thing I do on my phone is shoot vlogs. I like to share my daily life with others, such as what I eat, what I cook and what I do for fun. However, I think I use my phone too much, so I would like to reduce the time I spend on my phone."}

课后动作

  • 课后朗读并背诵本节整理的 WeChat 段子。
  • 课后朗读并背诵 smartphone 段子,尤其注意 on a daily basis、call an Uber、reduce the time I'm on my phone。
  • 复习 Guardians of the Galaxy 电影话题,重点记住 story、actors、cinematography、sound effects 四个评价维度。
  • 下节课可继续补充环保产品、喜欢的衣服和照片话题的英文完整段子。

一、课堂推进时间轴

1

引入 useful app 题目并建立 Part 2 开头框架

课堂推进:课堂先从 describe a useful app on your phone 进入,老师带韵雅同学使用通用开头:先说问题有意思,再列举几个例子,最后引出本次要讲的 WeChat。

老师处理:老师示范 Part 2 开头句型,并提醒这不是某一道题专属,而是 Part 2 可以迁移的开头套路。

学生原始输出:WeChat, Instagram, TikTok. But today I would like to talk about WeChat.

老师示范 / 修改方向:This is a very interesting question. There are many useful apps on my phone, such as WeChat, Instagram and TikTok, but today I would like to tell you about WeChat.

复习抓手:Part 2 开头可以用“问题评价 + 举例 + 今天讲某一个”的结构;useful app(有用的 app)可以用 WeChat、Instagram、TikTok 作为例子;tell you about / talk about 都可用于引出主体

2

围绕 WeChat 补充时间、频率、地点信息

课堂推进:老师带学生把 WeChat 话题扩展出时间、使用频率和地点,让答案更像完整段子,而不是只列功能。

老师处理:老师追问第一次使用时间、每天使用频率、昨天使用时长和使用地点,并讲解 basis 的表达。

学生原始输出:I first start use WeChat is uh around eight years ago. I use it on a daily basis. I use it for three hours. At least three hours. I use WeChat everywhere such as my home. On the subway or bus. Even in school.

老师示范 / 修改方向:I first started using WeChat around eight years ago, and I use it on a daily basis. Yesterday I spent around three hours on WeChat. I use it everywhere, such as at home, when I take the subway or bus, or even at school.

复习抓手:I first started using...(我第一次开始使用……);on a daily basis(每天);at home / on the subway or bus / at school(在家、地铁或公交上、学校)

3

补充 WeChat 的人物关系和海外经历

课堂推进:课堂继续把 WeChat 和真实经历结合:韵雅同学曾在澳洲学习,因此可以说自己用 WeChat 和家人朋友保持联系。

老师处理:老师引导学生加入一年前在澳洲学习的经历,让 communication(沟通)部分更具体。

学生原始输出:I use WeChat communicate with my family and the friends. Because I studied in Australia last year, so I need to message it to my mom and my best friend.

老师示范 / 修改方向:I use WeChat to communicate with my family and friends all the time. I went to Australia to study a year ago, and during that time I would talk to my family and friends back home on WeChat.

复习抓手:communicate with my family and friends(和家人朋友沟通);back home(国内、家那边);用个人经历支撑功能说明

4

展开 WeChat 功能:游戏、短视频、购物、支付、打车

课堂推进:老师帮助学生把 WeChat 的功能分成娱乐和日常生活两类:游戏、短视频、购物、支付、打车等,并配上简单好用的表达。

老师处理:老师通过追问功能和生活场景,让学生把 WeChat 的 usefulness(有用性)说具体。

学生原始输出:When I feel bored, I will play the game in WeChat. The advantage is the game is for free. I will watch short video in WeChat. I will shoot block to share my life with others. I can also shopping in WeChat. The most important is I should use WeChat pay. If I can't log in WeChat, I can't do anything.

老师示范 / 修改方向:The games are free and fun to play. I use it to watch short video clips. I also shoot vlogs to share my daily life, like what I eat, what I cook and where I go for fun. WeChat is also a very important shopping tool. I cannot imagine my life without WeChat Pay.

复习抓手:free of charge(免费的);short video clips(短视频);vlog(视频博客);share my daily life(分享日常生活);WeChat Pay(微信支付);I cannot imagine my life without it(我无法想象没有它的生活)

5

第一次完整输出 WeChat 段子并即时纠错

课堂推进:韵雅同学尝试完整讲述 WeChat 话题,老师在过程中纠正语法和搭配,例如 started using、on a daily basis、games are free、shop in WeChat。

老师处理:老师让学生限时输出,并在学生卡顿或语法错误时给出短句修正。

学生原始输出:The this is a very interesting question. There are a a there are lot app apps in my phone on my phone, such as WeChat, Instagram, TikTok. But today I would like to talk about WeChat. I first start use WeChat is uh around eight years ago. I use it on a daily basis. I use it for three hours, at least three hours. I use WeChat everywhere such as my home, on the subway or bus, even in school.

老师示范 / 修改方向:I first started using WeChat around eight years ago. The games are free and fun to play. I can shop in WeChat.

复习抓手:There are a lot of apps on my phone(我手机上有很多 app);started using 比 start use 更自然;games 要用复数时,be 动词用 are;shop 是动词,表达为 shop in WeChat

6

迁移到 technology 题目:smartphone

课堂推进:课堂把刚才 WeChat 的思路迁移到 describe a piece of technology you own。老师说明 technology(科技产品)可以是 hardware(硬件)或 software(软件),并选择 smartphone 作为主体。

老师处理:老师讲解 smartphone、laptop、tablet 的词汇,并要求学生把刚才的时间、地点、功能等内容迁移到手机题。

学生原始输出:There are a lot technology I own, such as a smartphone, laptop, and tablet. But today I would like to talk about smartphone. My smartphone.

老师示范 / 修改方向:There are many technologies that I own and I use all the time, such as my smartphone, laptop and tablet. Today I would like to tell you about my smartphone.

复习抓手:technology(科技产品)可以指手机、电脑、平板,也可以指软件;smartphone(智能手机)比 telephone 更适合这里;tablet(平板电脑)和 iPad 的关系:iPad 是一种 tablet

7

输出 smartphone 段子:功能和自我反思

课堂推进:学生完成 smartphone 话题练习,内容包括使用年限、使用时长、地点、游戏、打车、沟通、拍摄分享,并在结尾加入“用手机太多,想减少时间”的反思。

老师处理:老师提示学生加入 call an Uber、communicate with family and friends、shoot vlogs、reduce the time on my phone 等表达。

学生原始输出:I first start to use my smartphone is about nine years ago. I use my phone on the daily base. I use my phone over fifteen hours a day. I can play game on the smartphone. The games on my smartphone are free and fun. I can call the Uber on my phone. It only take two minutes. I'll use phone communicate with my family and friends because I study in Australia last year, so I need to send message to my mom and the best friend. I can use my phone to shoot my log to share with others. I'll share my day life, such as what I eat, what I cook, what things I do for fun. I think I use my phone too much. I would like to reduce the time on my phone.

老师示范 / 修改方向:It only takes about two minutes for me to call an Uber. I use my phone to communicate with my family and friends. I shoot vlogs to share my daily life with others. I would like to reduce the time I'm on my phone.

复习抓手:call an Uber / call a ride(叫网约车);It only takes about two minutes(只需要大约两分钟);communicate with(和……沟通);shoot vlogs(拍 vlog);reduce the time I'm on my phone(减少玩手机的时间)

8

进入 futuristic movie/book 题目并筛选素材

课堂推进:课堂进入未来题材电影或书的话题。学生先提到《流浪地球》,又讨论了自己喜欢的电影类型,最后把素材转向 Guardians of the Galaxy。

老师处理:老师先帮助学生回忆《流浪地球》的英文表达和情节,再引导她用更熟悉的 Guardians of the Galaxy 来组织答案。

学生原始输出:我快忘了,几年前看了吗?反正由于某种原因,他们要把地球推离原来的轨道。后来我想到一个科幻片了。银河护卫队呀。

老师示范 / 修改方向:The Wandering Earth. Today I want to talk about Guardians of the Galaxy Volume Two. It's about a group of superheroes. They're traveling in space, visiting different planets and fighting bad guys.

复习抓手:futuristic(未来感的);science fiction movie(科幻电影);The Wandering Earth(流浪地球);Guardians of the Galaxy(银河护卫队);set in space and in the future(设定在太空和未来)

9

搭建电影评价维度:故事、演员、视觉、声音、推荐

课堂推进:老师把电影话题拆成可说的评价维度:故事是否有趣、演员是否有说服力、画面是否好看、音乐和音效是否有冲击力,以及是否会推荐给朋友家人。

老师处理:老师用提问方式帮助学生总结好电影的标准,并给出 colorful, vivid, computer graphic, sound effect, impactful 等表达。

学生原始输出:故事很有意思。演员跟人物契合。视觉和听觉。颜色好看。The music is wonderful. 好的电影我会拉着我朋友再看一遍。

老师示范 / 修改方向:The story is unique and interesting. The actors and actresses did a really good job and made the characters believable and relatable. The cinematography is colorful and vivid. The computer graphics are amazing. The sound effects are impactful, and the music is exciting.

复习抓手:unique(独特的);believable(可信的);relatable(让人有共鸣的);cinematography(电影摄影);colorful and vivid(色彩鲜明生动);computer graphics(电脑特效);sound effects(音效);impactful(有冲击力的)

10

补充 Guardians of the Galaxy 的个人喜欢点

课堂推进:学生补充自己喜欢 Guardians of the Galaxy 中主角之间的感情线,老师帮助她用 romance between the main characters 表达。

老师处理:老师把学生中文想法转换成可用于口语答案的英文表达。

学生原始输出:我看里面的时候,我是看那个辛杰和那个卡莫拉他们两个的爱情。

老师示范 / 修改方向:I like the romance in the movie as well between the main characters.

复习抓手:romance(爱情线);between the main characters(主角之间);个人喜欢点可以放在电影描述的后半部分

11

串联后续可复用题库:gift, invention, website, novel

课堂推进:课堂后半段快速梳理了多个可复用题目:重要礼物、有用发明、离不开的网站和有趣小说,并讨论如何把 smartphone、WeChat、AI、电影故事迁移到这些题目。

老师处理:老师带学生判断哪些素材可以复用,提示 gift 可以讲手机,invention 可以讲手机或 WeChat,website 可以讲豆包 AI,novel 可以和电影故事关联。

学生原始输出:手机。WeChat 不行吗?豆包。AI 是吧?对呀,AI。他就真的就是,在网站上也可以用。

老师示范 / 修改方向:I rarely use a computer nowadays. I spend more than fifteen hours on my phone, so I really need to talk about something I use. I use WeChat. This is an app, but it is basically like a webpage on the phone.

复习抓手:同一素材可以迁移到多个 Part 2 题目;gift(礼物)可以讲爸爸送的手机;invention(发明)可以讲 smartphone 或 WeChat;website(网站)可以讲 AI 工具,如豆包

12

环保产品中文素材开发:智能压缩垃圾桶

课堂推进:学生用中文讲了一个环保产品:可以自动检测垃圾满了、压缩垃圾,并通知垃圾公司来收走的智能垃圾桶。老师确认这是后续可整理成英文的好素材。

老师处理:老师追问产品来源、工作原理、环保价值和创业背景。

学生原始输出:就是那个垃圾桶,它满了之后,它会自动检测到满了,它就可以压缩,压扁,然后就可以继续投,然后压压压,一直压到不能再压,然后那个垃圾桶就会自动打电话给那个垃圾公司,说你可以来收垃圾了,这样就可以减少垃圾车出来的频率。

老师示范 / 修改方向:老师本节主要用中文确认素材,未在逐字稿中给出完整英文定稿。

复习抓手:环保产品可以从功能、来源、改进过程、环保价值展开;smart trash bin(智能垃圾桶);compress rubbish(压缩垃圾);reduce the frequency of garbage truck trips(减少垃圾车出车频率)

13

衣服话题中文素材开发:生日礼物连衣裙

课堂推进:学生准备了喜欢的衣服素材:爸爸几年前生日时买的一条奶油白短连衣裙,适合夏天和朋友出去时穿。

老师处理:老师追问购买背景、颜色、款式、材质、穿着场合和打理方式。

学生原始输出:是几年前我的生日买的。我爸。奶油白。短的连衣裙。泡泡袖,背后是宽带的那种,像系鞋带一样。夏天的裙子,穿起来很舒服,很软,很凉快,透气。跟我闺蜜出去的时候。

老师示范 / 修改方向:creamy color. A short dress. It is soft, cool and breathable. I usually wear it when I go shopping with my best friend.

复习抓手:a piece of clothing(一件衣服);creamy color(奶油白);puff sleeves(泡泡袖);breathable(透气的);场景可以说和闺蜜出门逛街

14

照片话题起步

课堂推进:课堂最后开始进入 a photo you took that you are proud of,学生提到可以讲一张自拍照,但本节还没有展开完整内容。

老师处理:老师提示照片题仍可按时间、地点、人物、感受的思路组织。

学生原始输出:是一张我自拍照。它是 live 的,就是它是动。

老师示范 / 修改方向:时间地点人物感受,我们什么都能按照那个思路考。

复习抓手:photo 题也可以按时间、地点、人物、感受展开;如果素材还没讲完,课后可继续补充

15

内部跟进:课堂素材较多,需要整理成背诵稿

老师处理:老师多次表示会课后帮学生整理成英文版,并要求学生回去读和背。

学生原始输出:好。哦,OK。

老师示范 / 修改方向:到时候还是一样,我帮你整理好,然后你回去你就读一背啊。

复习抓手:课后需要将已讲思路整理成可背诵版本;下节课继续处理新题型和未完成素材

二、本节课亮点表现

本节课重点练习了 Part 2 的自然展开方式:先开头引题,再按时间、地点、人物、功能、感受推进。

WeChat 和 smartphone 两个话题完成了较完整的课堂输出,并进行了即时纠错。

电影话题从《流浪地球》过渡到更熟悉的 Guardians of the Galaxy,重点学习了如何评价故事、演员、画面和音乐。

课堂后半段积累了环保产品、喜欢的衣服、照片等后续题目的中文素材。

三、本节课用了哪些材料

四、学生课堂输出

WeChat

The this is a very interesting question. There are a a there are lot app apps in my phone on my phone, such as WeChat, Instagram, TikTok. But today I would like to talk about WeChat. I first start use WeChat is uh around eight years ago. I use it on a daily basis. I use it for three hours. At least three hours. I use WeChat everywhere such as my home, on the subway or bus, even in school.

WeChat functions

When I feel bored, I will play the game in WeChat. The advantage is the game is for free. Secondly, I will watch short video in WeChat. I will shoot block to share my life with others. I can also shopping in WeChat. The most important is I should use WeChat pay. If I can't log in WeChat, I can't do anything.

Smartphone

There are a lot technology I own, such as a smartphone, laptop, and tablet. But today I would like to talk about smartphone. I first start to use my smartphone is about nine years ago. I use my phone on the daily base. I use my phone over fifteen hours a day.

Smartphone functions

I can play game on the smartphone. The games on my smartphone are free and fun. I can call the Uber on my phone. It only take two minutes. I'll use phone communicate with my family and friends because I study in Australia last year, so I need to send message to my mom and the best friend. I can use my phone to shoot my log to share with others.

Future movie

我想到一个科幻片了。银河护卫队呀。我看里面的时候,我是看那个辛杰和那个卡莫拉他们两个的爱情。

Eco-friendly product

就是那个垃圾桶,它满了之后,它会自动检测到满了,它就可以压缩,压扁,然后就可以继续投,然后压压压,一直压到不能再压,然后那个垃圾桶就会自动打电话给那个垃圾公司,说你可以来收垃圾了。

Clothing

是几年前我的生日买的。我爸。奶油白。短的连衣裙。泡泡袖,背后是宽带的那种,像系鞋带一样。夏天的裙子,穿起来很舒服,很软,很凉快,透气。

五、本节课口语段子改进版

以下为按课堂已讲方向整理的课后复习改进版,保留本节课实际讲过的素材:WeChat、smartphone 和 Guardians of the Galaxy。

Describe a useful app on your phone

答案朗读 1

This is a very interesting question. There are many useful apps on my phone, such as WeChat, Instagram and TikTok, but today I would like to tell you about WeChat. I first started using WeChat around eight years ago, and I use it on a daily basis. I usually spend at least three hours on it every day. I use it everywhere, such as at home, on the subway or bus, and even at school. WeChat is very important to me because I use it to communicate with my family and friends. I studied in Australia last year, so during that time I needed to send messages to my mom and my best friend back home. WeChat can also do many other things. When I feel bored, I play games on WeChat. The games are free and fun to play. I also watch short video clips on it, and I can shoot vlogs to share my daily life with others, such as what I eat, what I cook and where I go for fun. I can also shop in WeChat, and WeChat Pay is extremely important in China. If I cannot log in to WeChat, I feel like I cannot do anything. So I think WeChat is one of the most useful apps on my phone.

Describe a piece of technology you own

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This is a very interesting question. There are many technologies that I own and use all the time, such as my smartphone, my laptop and my tablet, but today I would like to talk about my smartphone. I first started using a smartphone about nine years ago. Now I use my phone on a daily basis, and honestly, I use it for more than fifteen hours a day. I use it everywhere, such as at home, on the subway or bus, and even at school. With my smartphone, I can do a lot of things. First, I can play games on it. The games on my smartphone are free and fun to play. Second, I can call an Uber on my phone, and it only takes about two minutes for me to call a ride, so it is very convenient. I also use my phone to communicate with my family and friends. I studied in Australia last year, so I needed to send messages to my mom and my best friend. Another thing I do on my phone is shoot vlogs. I like to share my daily life with others, such as what I eat, what I cook and what I do for fun. However, I think I use my phone too much, so I would like to reduce the time I spend on my phone.

Describe a futuristic movie

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Today I would like to talk about a science fiction movie called Guardians of the Galaxy Volume Two. It is about a group of superheroes. They travel in space, visit different planets and fight bad guys. The story is set in space and in the future, so it is full of imagination. What really makes me like this movie is that the story is unique and interesting. It is not the same as other movies. The actors and actresses also did a really good job. They made the characters believable and relatable, almost as if these superheroes could exist in real life. Another thing I like is the cinematography. The movie is colorful and vivid, and the computer graphics are amazing. The sound effects are also very impactful, and the music is exciting. I also like the romance between the main characters. I first watched this movie by myself, and I liked it so much that I wanted to recommend it to my friends and family. For me, it is a relaxing and fun movie to watch.

六、本节课纠错

原句问题推荐表达记忆方法
There are lot app apps in my phone on my phone.There are a lot of apps on my phone.apps 要用复数;手机上用 on my phone。
I first start use WeChat is around eight years ago.I first started using WeChat around eight years ago.讲过去开始使用,用 started using。
on the daily baseon a daily basis固定搭配是 on a daily basis。
I will play the game in WeChat.I play games on WeChat.泛指游戏通常用复数 games。
the game is for freethe games are free / free of chargegames 是复数,搭配 are。
I can also shopping in WeChat.I can also shop in WeChat.can 后面接动词原形。
It only take two minutes.It only takes about two minutes.主语 it 后动词用 takes。
send message to my mom and the best friendsend messages to my mom and my best friendmessages 用复数;my best friend 更自然。
shoot my logshoot my vlog视频博客是 vlog。

七、课后任务

八、方法和词汇

方法总结

  • Part 2 答案按课堂推进自然展开:开头引题、时间、地点、人物、功能、感受。
  • 一个素材可以迁移到多个题目,例如 WeChat、smartphone 可以用于 app、technology、invention、website 等话题。
  • 电影话题不要只复述剧情,也可以评价故事、演员、画面、音乐和推荐理由。

补充词汇

  • hardware:硬件
  • software:软件
  • smartphone:智能手机
  • tablet:平板电脑
  • futuristic:未来感的
  • The Wandering Earth:《流浪地球》
  • Guardians of the Galaxy:《银河护卫队》
  • puff sleeves:泡泡袖
  • creamy color:奶油白
  • smart trash bin:智能垃圾桶