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本节课围绕 IELTS 口语 shopping(购物)和 helping others(帮助别人)展开,完成了 Part 1 短问短答、Part 2 人物描述和 Part 3 讨论题训练。

学员:彦汐同学 老师:滕达老师 课型:正课 主题:IELTS Speaking Part 1 shopping/helping others, Part 2 helpful person, Part 3 helping others discussion

课后复习模块

练过的材料

  • Shopping(Part 1 topic)
  • Helping others(Part 1 topic)
  • Describe a person who often helps others(Part 2 cue card):人物:Miss Hu,学生的班主任;身份:高中班主任,教 political science(政治课);特点:outgoing(外向的)、strict(严格的)、helpful(乐于助人的);帮助经历:学生上课困、不能保持清醒时,老师建议站到教室后面
  • Helping others(Part 3 discussion)

词汇和表达

  • convenient:方便的
  • material:材质
  • try it on:试穿
  • supervision:监督
  • Part 1 喜好回答:Yes, I like shopping because shopping is fun and exciting.
  • 两个都喜欢:I like both. I like online shopping because it is convenient. I also like in-store shopping because I can touch and feel the material and try it on.

纠错重点

  • {"issue": "How often 的回答不能只说 usually,还要说具体频率。", "studentRaw": "I usually go shopping online", "teacherCorrection": "I shop online every day."}
  • {"issue": "try it off 应改为 try it on(试穿)。", "studentRaw": "try it off", "teacherCorrection": "try it on"}
  • {"issue": "helping others 话题不要只说抽象作文句,要加生活例子。", "studentRaw": "可以给别人提供温暖... 感受到成就感", "teacherCorrection": "For example, I will help my parents carry heavy things, or I'll help my classmates with their homework."}
  • {"issue": "people 作主语时,动词不加 s。", "studentRaw": "my parents teachers in my classmatesusually help me", "teacherCorrection": "My parents, teachers and classmates usually help me."}
  • {"issue": "value 表示价值观时常用复数 values。", "studentRaw": "build a value", "teacherCorrection": "build values about helping others"}

可回读产出

  • 本节课口语段子改进版:{"part": "Part 1", "question": "Do you like shopping?", "answer": "Yes, I like shopping because shopping is fun and exciting.", "pairedWithCueCardId": ""};{"part": "Part 1", "question": "How often do you go shopping?", "answer": "I shop online every day, so I can say I shop online on a daily basis.", "pairedWithCueCardId": ""}

课后动作

  • 复习 Part 1 shopping 和 helping others 的短问短答,重点注意 How often 要回答具体频率。
  • 熟读 Part 2 helpful person 答案,尤其注意 home room teacher、stay awake、stand at the back of the classroom 等表达。
  • 复习 Part 3 中关于 helping others 的观点句和理由句:sense of achievement、build values、laws to protect people、basic needs。

一、课堂推进时间轴

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课前确认与表达热身

课堂推进:课程开始时,老师先确认沟通信息,并用 make sense(有道理、说得通)帮助学生理解常用表达。

老师处理:老师解释 make sense 的意思,并通过日常问题引入口语状态。

学生原始输出:make没sense

老师示范 / 修改方向:Does it make sense? make sense就是有道理嘛,符合事实嘛这个意思。

复习抓手:make sense(有道理、说得通);Does it make sense? 可以用来确认对方是否理解或是否符合事实

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Part 1 话题导入:Shopping

课堂推进:老师加入 shopping(购物)话题,先练习 Do you like shopping? 这种短问短答,并提醒学生用完整句回答。

老师处理:老师追问原因,并提示 fun and exciting(有趣又让人兴奋)作为原因表达。

学生原始输出:yes I like shopping

老师示范 / 修改方向:Yes, I like shopping because shopping is fun and exciting.

复习抓手:Part 1 回答要直接、完整;because 后面补一个简单原因;fun(有趣的);exciting(令人兴奋的)

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Part 1 频率表达:How often

课堂推进:老师讲解 How often do you go shopping? 是问频率,并带学生区分 always、usually、often、sometimes、rarely/hardly、never。

老师处理:老师解释频率副词,并引导学生把 online shopping(网购)和 every day(每天)结合起来回答。

学生原始输出:Usually嗯usually go shopping... Every day

老师示范 / 修改方向:I shop online every day. / I shop online on a daily basis.

复习抓手:How often 是问“多频繁”;always(总是);usually/often(通常/经常);sometimes(有时);rarely/hardly(几乎不);never(从不);on a daily basis(每天)

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Part 1 对比选择:Online or in-store shopping

课堂推进:老师引导学生回答更喜欢网购还是实体店购物。学生觉得两种都好,老师帮助她组织成双边回答。

老师处理:老师示范 both 的回答结构:网购方便,实体店能摸材质、试穿。

学生原始输出:I like both... I like a online shopping because ah It's very convenient... I likeinstore shopping too... I can touch and feel the material and And try it off

老师示范 / 修改方向:I like both. I like online shopping because it is very convenient. I can shop anywhere, anytime. I also like in-store shopping because I can touch and feel the material and try it on.

复习抓手:I like both(两个都喜欢);convenient(方便的);anywhere, anytime(任何地点、任何时间);touch and feel the material(摸一摸、感受材质);try it on(试穿)

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Part 1 新话题:Helping others

课堂推进:老师切换到 helping others(帮助别人)话题,提醒学生不要套高考作文式表达,要先用真实生活例子回答。

老师处理:老师把学生抽象的中文想法改成更自然的例子,如帮父母拿东西、帮同学做作业。

学生原始输出:他不仅可以让也不仅而且... 可以给别人提供温暖... 同时也能让我感受到成就感

老师示范 / 修改方向:I like helping others. For example, I will help my parents carry heavy things, or I'll help my classmates with their homework.

复习抓手:Part 1 可以用生活例子,不必写作文式拔高;carry heavy things(拿重物);help classmates with their homework(帮同学解决作业问题);a sense of achievement(成就感);satisfaction(满足感)

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Part 1 问题:Who helps you when you have problems

课堂推进:老师练习 Who usually helps you when you have problems? 并提醒学生说完整句。

老师处理:老师提示学生把 my teachers, my classmates and my parents 组织成完整回答。

学生原始输出:my friendsmy my classmates和My呃parents... My爷爷奶奶叔叔婶婶helping.Oh my teachers ,my classmates and my parentsusually helps me

老师示范 / 修改方向:When I have problems, my teachers, my classmates and my parents usually help me.

复习抓手:When I have problems...(当我遇到问题时);usually help me(通常帮助我);注意主谓一致:people usually help me

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Part 1 对比问题:Young people before and now

课堂推进:老师练习 Do young people help others more than before? 学生不确定时,老师允许用 I don't know / I have no idea 真实回答。

老师处理:老师示范不确定时的回答方式,并补充 today young people like helping others 的表达。

学生原始输出:i I don't know. Uh, I honestly,I don't know if young people... like helping others before but today... young people like helping and like helping others

老师示范 / 修改方向:Actually, I have no idea. I don't know if young people liked helping others before, but today young people like helping others.

复习抓手:I honestly don't know(我真的不知道);before(以前);today / nowadays(现在);不确定的问题可以诚实说明,再补充自己知道的部分

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Part 1 问题:Would you help strangers

课堂推进:老师练习是否会帮助陌生人。学生先给出很具体的网络例子,老师建议简化成更容易考试表达的答案。

老师处理:老师把复杂例子压缩为 I help strangers online,并避免展开太细的文化背景。

学生原始输出:Yes.I like helping strangers becausebecause... yes i helped strangers online

老师示范 / 修改方向:Yes, of course. I help strangers. I help strangers online. When people ask something, I will give them an answer.

复习抓手:stranger(陌生人);online(在线、网上);give them an answer(给他们回答);考试里复杂例子可以简化成清楚的日常表达

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Part 1 问题:What kind of help do students need

课堂推进:老师引导学生回答学生常需要什么帮助,重点练习 supervision(监督)、support(支持)、encouragement(鼓励)和 praise(表扬)。

老师处理:老师把学生的回答组织成学生懒散时需要鼓励,做得好时需要表扬。

学生原始输出:students often need some supervision... and support from teachers and parents... when getlazywe need the inin encouragement... We needthe from praise

老师示范 / 修改方向:Students often need some supervision and support from teachers and parents. When we get lazy, we need encouragement. When we do a good job, they should praise us and tell us we're doing a good job.

复习抓手:supervision(监督);support(支持);encouragement(鼓励);praise(表扬);do a good job(做得好)

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Part 1 连续复盘

课堂推进:老师把 shopping 和 helping others 的 Part 1 小问连在一起做了一轮复盘,训练学生快速听题、直接回答和补充原因。

老师处理:老师连续提问,纠正学生把 How often 回成泛泛频率的问题,并强化短问短答节奏。

学生原始输出:do shopping啊... I likeshopping all the time... I usually go shopping online... Every day ah ,i shop online everyday

老师示范 / 修改方向:How often 真的问你多频繁,你得说一个。Every day. I shop online every day.

复习抓手:Part 1 要听清 question word(疑问词);How often 要回答频率;Which do you prefer 可以回答 I like both

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Part 2 选题:Describe a person who often helps others

课堂推进:老师进入 Part 2 话题:描述一个经常帮助别人的人。学生选择写班主任胡老师,并补充人物背景。

老师处理:老师通过年龄、学科、外貌、性格、怎么帮助学生等问题帮学生搭建素材。

学生原始输出:My teacher... Miss Hu... she is in her fifties... she teaches us political science... She is out going

老师示范 / 修改方向:My high school home room teacher, Miss Hu, is a person who often helps students. She teaches us political science. She is outgoing and strict.

复习抓手:home room teacher(班主任);political science(政治学/政治课);outgoing(外向的);strict(严格的);Part 2 可以先搭建人物基本信息

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Part 2 故事素材:老师如何帮助学生

课堂推进:学生提供一个课堂场景:自己上课容易困、注意力不集中,胡老师提醒她,并建议她站到教室后面保持清醒。

老师处理:老师把素材整理成可讲的故事线:问题、求建议、老师建议、效果、后续改变。

学生原始输出:I'm all outgoing so i always lose my attention to study then she always reminds me... She suggests me stand up... stand up behind the classroom... stay awake

老师示范 / 修改方向:One time I had a real problem: I couldn't stay awake in class, so I went to Miss Hu and asked for suggestions. She suggested that I should stand in the back when I couldn't keep myself awake.

复习抓手:lose my attention(注意力跑掉);remind me(提醒我);ask for suggestions(寻求建议);stand at the back of the classroom(站在教室后面);stay awake / keep myself awake(保持清醒)

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Part 2 老师完整示范

课堂推进:老师把学生素材整理成一个完整 Part 2 答案,包含人物介绍、性格特点、帮助方式、具体故事和个人评价。

老师处理:老师口头示范完整答案,并让学生把示范录入以便复习。

老师示范 / 修改方向:Today I want to talk about someone who has been really helpful in my life. My high school home room teacher, Miss Hu... One time I had a real problem: I couldn't stay awake in class...

复习抓手:Part 2 一个 cue card 要讲成完整故事;答案结构:开头介绍人物 -> 人物特点 -> 一次帮助经历 -> 结果和评价;as long as(只要);fall asleep in class(上课睡着)

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Part 3 问题:Why do some people enjoy helping others

课堂推进:老师进入 Part 3 讨论,先问为什么有些人喜欢帮助别人,并引导学生从成就感、满足感、交朋友、生活更好等角度回答。

老师处理:老师提供可用于讨论题的理由表达,并提醒学生说出观点。

学生原始输出:Some people like helping others because they give them a sense of achievement an a sense of uh satisfaction... Because it's ah thing

老师示范 / 修改方向:Some people like helping others because it gives them a sense of achievement and satisfaction. I enjoy doing it because I believe it's the right thing to do. When you help others, you can make a lot of friends and your life will be better.

复习抓手:a sense of achievement(成就感);a sense of satisfaction(满足感);the right thing to do(正确的事);make friends(交朋友)

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Part 3 问题:Should children be taught to help people

课堂推进:老师继续讨论孩子是否应该从小被教导帮助别人。学生尝试表达这能让世界更好。

老师处理:老师帮助学生把 children should have values about helping others 和 make the world better 连接起来。

学生原始输出:Children she have an ah opinion about helping others Is Um嗯 way too Make the world a Better

老师示范 / 修改方向:Yes, children should be taught to help people from a young age because it can help them build values about helping others and make the world better.

复习抓手:from a young age(从小);values(价值观);build values(建立价值观);make the world better(让世界更好)

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Part 3 问题:Do people help strangers less than before

课堂推进:老师讨论现在的人是否比过去更少帮助陌生人。学生倾向认为现在更多人愿意帮助别人,老师引导用法律保护作为理由。

老师处理:老师提示 laws(法律)、protect(保护)、lend a helping hand(伸出援手)等表达。

学生原始输出:I i think people help like to help others more nowadays... Because there.Are some policies... to protect the people who helping other

老师示范 / 修改方向:I think people like to help others more nowadays because there are laws to protect people who lend a helping hand to others.

复习抓手:nowadays(如今);law(法律);protect(保护);lend a helping hand(伸出援手);government(政府)

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Part 3 问题:What kind of help do elderly people need

课堂推进:老师讨论老人通常需要什么帮助。学生提到经济帮助,老师补充药、食物和家庭开支等具体表达。

老师处理:老师把 help elderly economy help 整理成 Some old people need help with money,并补充用途。

学生原始输出:help elderly economy help... Need money

老师示范 / 修改方向:Some old people need help with money. They need money for medicine or food, and they might even need money to feed their children.

复习抓手:elderly people(老年人);need help with money(需要经济帮助);medicine(药);food(食物);feed their children(养活孩子)

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Part 3 问题:Volunteer activities at school

课堂推进:老师讨论学校是否应该组织更多志愿活动。学生认为应该,老师补充这能建立价值观,也能让学生走出教室、运动和呼吸新鲜空气。

老师处理:老师扩展 hospital volunteer work、park cleaning、exercise、fresh air 等理由。

学生原始输出:yes they should because little he said would the help Children build a .build a value

老师示范 / 修改方向:Yes, they should because it would help children build values about helping others. Students can also get a chance to do some work outside the classroom, get some exercise and get some fresh air.

复习抓手:volunteer activities(志愿活动);build values(建立价值观);outside the classroom(课堂之外);get some exercise(运动一下);fresh air(新鲜空气)

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Part 3 问题:Who should help poor people

课堂推进:老师最后讨论应该由个人还是政府更多帮助穷人。学生选择政府,老师引导原因:政府有更多权力和钱,可以立法、用税收提供食物、住所和基本需求。

老师处理:老师补充 government has more power and money, make laws and rules, use tax money, provide basic needs 等表达。

学生原始输出:government... has more power和 has more money... to make new laws and rules

老师示范 / 修改方向:The government should help poor people more because it has more power and more money. It can make new laws and rules, and use tax money to provide poor people with food, shelter and basic needs.

复习抓手:government(政府);power(权力);tax money(税收);provide A with B(给A提供B);food and shelter(食物和住所);basic needs(基本需求)

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课后安排提醒

课堂推进:课程末尾,老师提醒学生需要和家长确认后续时间安排,并把时间说准确。

老师处理:老师提醒学生和家长、学校老师确认填志愿相关时间,避免课程时间反复调整。

学生原始输出:嗯

老师示范 / 修改方向:你得给我们一个准确,然后你跟你妈商量商量好不好。

复习抓手:课后需要确认后续时间安排;涉及请假或调课时,要提前给出准确时间

二、本节课亮点表现

Part 1 重点练习了听清题目类型:How often 要回答频率,Which do you prefer 可以说明两个都喜欢并分别给原因。

学生能用真实生活素材回答 helping others(帮助别人)话题,例如帮助父母拿重物、帮助同学作业、在网上回答别人的问题。

Part 2 完成了 Describe a person who often helps others 的完整素材搭建,人物是班主任 Miss Hu。

Part 3 练习了更抽象的讨论题,包括为什么人们喜欢帮助别人、孩子是否应从小学习帮助别人、政府是否应帮助穷人等。

三、本节课用了哪些材料

四、学生课堂输出

课堂内容

yes I like shopping

课堂内容

Usually嗯usually go shopping... Every day ah ,i shop online everyday

课堂内容

I like both... I like a online shopping because ah It's very convenient... I likeinstore shopping too... I can touch and feel the material and And try it off

课堂内容

他不仅可以让也不仅而且... 可以给别人提供温暖... 同时也能让我感受到成就感

课堂内容

my friendsmy my classmates和My呃parents... My teachers ,my classmates and my parentsusually helps me

课堂内容

i I don't know. Uh, I honestly,I don't know if young people... like helping others before but today... young people like helping and like helping others

课堂内容

Yes.I like helping strangers becausebecause... yes i helped strangers online

课堂内容

students often need some supervision... and support from teachers and parents... when getlazywe need the inin encouragement... We needthe from praise

课堂内容

My teacher... Miss Hu... she is in her fifties... she teaches us political science... She is out going... She suggests me stand up... stand up behind the classroom... stay awake

课堂内容

Some people like helping others because they give them a sense of achievement an a sense of uh satisfaction

课堂内容

Children she have an ah opinion about helping others Is Um嗯 way too Make the world a Better

课堂内容

I i think people help like to help others more nowadays... Because there.Are some policies... to protect the people who helping other

五、本节课口语段子改进版

以下为按课堂已讲方向整理的课后复习改进版,内容仅基于本节课逐字稿中的题目、素材、老师示范和课堂纠错。

Do you like shopping?

答案朗读 1

Yes, I like shopping because shopping is fun and exciting.

How often do you go shopping?

答案朗读 2

I shop online every day, so I can say I shop online on a daily basis.

Which do you prefer, online shopping or in-store shopping?

答案朗读 3

I like both. I like online shopping because it is very convenient, and I can shop anywhere, anytime. I also like in-store shopping because I can touch and feel the material and try clothes on.

Do you like helping others?

答案朗读 4

Yes, I do. I like helping others. For example, I will help my parents carry heavy things, and I will help my classmates with their homework.

Who usually helps you when you have problems?

答案朗读 5

When I have problems, my teachers, my classmates and my parents usually help me.

Do young people help others more than before?

答案朗读 6

Honestly, I don't know if young people liked helping others before, but today young people like helping others.

Do you like helping strangers?

答案朗读 7

Yes, I do. I help strangers online. When people ask something, I will give them an answer.

What kind of help do students often need?

答案朗读 8

Students often need some supervision and support from teachers and parents. When we get lazy, we need encouragement. When we do a good job, they should praise us and tell us we are doing a good job.

Describe a person who often helps others.

答案朗读 9

This is a very interesting question. Today I want to talk about someone who has been really helpful in my life: my high school home room teacher, Miss Hu. Miss Hu teaches us political science. She is outgoing and she likes to talk to students. However, she doesn't smile a lot because she is pretty strict. She has many good qualities. For example, when we do a good job, she tells us she is proud of us, and she encourages and supports us. When we make mistakes or get lazy, she reminds us to do better and try harder. One time, I had a real problem. I couldn't stay awake in class, so I went to Miss Hu and asked for suggestions. She suggested that I stand at the back of the classroom when I could not keep myself awake. I took her advice, and it really helped. It worked because it was quite embarrassing to stand at the back of the classroom. After that, I went to bed early and got enough rest. As long as I get enough sleep, I won't fall asleep in class. So this helped solve my problem. I think she is a great teacher, and I like her a lot.

Why do some people enjoy helping others?

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Some people enjoy helping others because it gives them a sense of achievement and satisfaction. Also, I think helping others is the right thing to do. When you help others, you can make a lot of friends, and your life will be better.

Should children be taught to help people from a young age?

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Yes, they should. Children should be taught to help people from a young age because it can help them build values about helping others. It can also make the world better.

Do people help strangers less often than they did in the past?

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I think people like to help others more nowadays. One reason is that there are laws to protect people who lend a helping hand to others. In the past, some people got into trouble for helping others in the street, but now the government has made laws to protect them.

What kind of help do elderly people usually need?

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Some elderly people need help with money. They may need money for medicine or food, and they might even need money to feed their children.

Should schools organize more volunteer activities?

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Yes, they should. Volunteer activities can help children build values about helping others. Students can also get a chance to do some work outside the classroom. For example, they can go to the hospital to do volunteer work, or go to the park to do some cleaning. It can also give them some exercise and fresh air.

Who should help poor people more, individuals or the government?

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I think the government should help poor people more because the government has more power and more money. It can make new laws and rules, and it can use tax money to provide poor people with food, shelter and basic needs.

六、本节课纠错

原句问题推荐表达记忆方法

七、课后任务

八、方法和词汇

方法总结

  • Part 1:先直接回答,再给一个简单原因或例子。
  • Part 2:人物题按“人物基本信息-特点-具体帮助经历-结果和评价”展开。
  • Part 3:先表达观点,再给原因和例子。

补充词汇

  • make sense:有道理、说得通
  • on a daily basis:每天
  • lend a helping hand:伸出援手
  • shelter:住所、庇护处