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IELTS Speaking Part 1/2/3:帮助他人、朋友、被帮助经历,以及 Part 3 双理由展开

学员:Rice同学 老师:滕达老师 课型:正课 主题:IELTS Speaking:Helping others / Friends / Describe a time when someone helped you

课后复习模块

练过的材料

  • Do you like helping others?(Speaking Part 1 小问):练习用直接回答加例子的方式说明是否喜欢帮助别人。
  • What kind of things do you help your parents in daily life?(Speaking Part 1 小问):练习描述家务帮助。
  • Do you prefer helping your friends or your family members?(Speaking Part 1 小问):练习 prefer 选择题。
  • What kind of help do students often need?(Speaking Part 1 小问):练习概括学生常见求助内容。
  • Do you have many close friends?(Speaking Part 1 小问):练习 close friends 话题。
  • Do your friends help you with study?(Speaking Part 1 小问):练习朋友是否帮助学习。

词汇和表达

  • geography:地理
  • tidy up:整理
  • maintain relationships:维持关系
  • time and effort:时间和努力
  • Part 1 选择题:prefer A because...;我更喜欢帮助朋友,因为我们在学校相处时间最多。
  • Friends 话题解释为什么亲密朋友不多。;我没有精力维持那么多关系。

纠错重点

  • {"rawOrIssue": "helping other,s will makes me very happy", "correctedOrAdvice": "Helping others makes me very happy.", "reasonOrMemoryTip": "helping others 作主语时,谓语用 makes;不要同时用 will makes。", "sourceEvidence": "I think helping other,s will makes me very happy"}
  • {"rawOrIssue": "answer their problem about job", "correctedOrAdvice": "answer their questions about geography / help them with geography problems", "reasonOrMemoryTip": "这里学生说的是地理问题,不是 job。", "sourceEvidence": "I'm good at geography... answer their problem about job"}
  • {"rawOrIssue": "watch the dishes", "correctedOrAdvice": "wash the dishes", "reasonOrMemoryTip": "wash 是洗;watch 是看。", "sourceEvidence": "I will watch the dishes afterthe meal"}
  • {"rawOrIssue": "Ipreferhoppingmyfriends", "correctedOrAdvice": "I prefer helping my friends.", "reasonOrMemoryTip": "helping 表示帮助;hopping 是跳,不符合语境。", "sourceEvidence": "Ipreferhoppingmyfriends"}
  • {"rawOrIssue": "prefer helping friends 与 ask friends for help 混淆", "correctedOrAdvice": "helping friends 是帮助朋友;asking friends for help 是向朋友求助。", "reasonOrMemoryTip": "题目问的是给谁提供帮助,不是向谁求助。", "sourceEvidence": "不是askforhelp而是help哦哦。你更喜欢给你的朋友提供帮助..."}
  • {"rawOrIssue": "I don't maintaining a relationship takes a lot of time and effort.", "correctedOrAdvice": "Maintaining a relationship takes a lot of time and effort.", "reasonOrMemoryTip": "maintaining a relationship 可以直接作主语。", "sourceEvidence": "I don't maintaining a relationship takesa lot of time and effort"}

可回读产出

  • 本节课口语段子改进版:{"part": "Part 1", "question": "Do you like helping others?", "answer": "Yes, of course. Helping others makes me very happy. For example, I am good at geography, so sometimes I help my classmates with their geography problems.", "pairedWithCueCardId": ""};{"part": "Part 1", "question": "What kind of things do you help your parents in daily life?", "answer": "I usually help my parents with housework. For example, I help them tidy up the apartment, wash the clothes and wash the dishes after meals.", "pairedWithCueCardId": ""}

课后动作

  • 复习并朗读本节课 improvedOutput 中的 Part 1 短问短答,每题保持短答逻辑:直接回答 + 一个原因或例子。
  • 复习 Part 2 的地理老师帮助经历,重点记住 who / problem / what the teacher did / result 的顺序。
  • 复习 Part 3 的 two main reasons 结构,并练习 sense of achievement、build trust、it depends on、company 等表达。

一、课堂推进时间轴

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Part 1:Helping others 开场短问短答

课堂推进:课堂先从“是否喜欢帮助别人”进入,Rice尝试用地理学科优势举例说明自己会帮助同学。

老师处理:老师提示 Part 1 要直接回答并快速举例,帮助学生把“帮别人”落到具体场景。

学生原始输出:of course uh, uh, uh I think helping other,s will makes me very happy... I'm good at geography sometimesIwillhelpmy classmatesto answer their problem about job yes

老师示范 / 修改方向:For example, I'm good at geography, so sometimes I help my classmates answer their questions about geography.

复习抓手:Part 1 先直接回答,再给一个很短的具体例子;help others 后面要接具体帮助内容;geography 是“地理”,job 不符合这里的语境

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Part 1:日常帮家人做什么

课堂推进:Rice练习描述自己在家帮忙做家务,包括洗碗、整理房间和洗衣服。

老师处理:老师把学生零散表达整理成可朗读的家庭日常帮助答案。

学生原始输出:uhsometimeswe will I will watch the dishes afterthe meal and we often cleaning our ah an Ioften... clean all rooms in my house

老师示范 / 修改方向:I would help them tidy up our room, tidy up the apartment, wash the clothes and wash the dishes.

复习抓手:wash the dishes 是“洗碗”,不是 watch the dishes;tidy up the apartment 表示“整理公寓/家里”;家务类答案可以列 2-3 个动作

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Part 1:更喜欢帮助朋友还是家人

课堂推进:Rice选择更喜欢帮助朋友,并说明自己在学校和朋友相处时间更多。

老师处理:老师纠正题意,强调 prefer helping friends 不是 ask friends for help。

学生原始输出:Ipreferhoppingmyfriends.I'm usually for helping my friend啊because wei spendthe most of my time with my friends at school

老师示范 / 修改方向:I prefer helping my friends because we spend most of our time together at school.

复习抓手:prefer helping friends 表示“更喜欢帮助朋友”;ask for help 是“寻求帮助”,不要和 help 混淆;spend most of my time with... 表示“和……相处时间最多”

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Part 1:学生通常需要什么帮助

课堂推进:Rice练习概括学生常见的求助场景,包括作业问题和课堂知识难点。

老师处理:老师认可学生把问题分成 homework 和 difficult knowledge 两类。

学生原始输出:students use there are many kinds of help that studentoften needed such as err theproblems in their homework and some difficult knowledge when theyare starting orwhentheyaretaking class

老师示范 / 修改方向:Students often need help with homework problems and difficult knowledge when they are studying or taking classes.

复习抓手:need help with + 问题;homework problems 是“作业问题”;difficult knowledge 是“难懂的知识点”

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Part 1:Friends 话题 close friends

课堂推进:课堂转入 Friends 话题,Rice表达自己没有很多亲密朋友,因为维持太多关系需要时间和精力。

老师处理:老师解释 close friends 是“关系很好的朋友”,并示范 maintain relationships、time and effort 的表达。

学生原始输出:no, I don'tbecause I do not have enough energy to keepkeep the relationship ah friendship with too many people... I think i'll just have one or two close friend that's quite enough

老师示范 / 修改方向:I don't have the energy to maintain that many relationships. It takes time and effort, so I think one or two close friends is quite enough.

复习抓手:close friends 是“亲密朋友/关系很好的朋友”;maintain relationships 表示“维持关系”;It takes time and effort 表示“这需要时间和努力”

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Part 1:朋友是否帮助学习

课堂推进:Rice说明自己大多数时候不会和朋友聊学习,但有问题时朋友会回答。

老师处理:老师帮助学生把 whenever I have questions and ask them 的句型整理顺畅。

学生原始输出:mostoftime wewillnot talk about our ah.Aboutourstudy but whenever you have, whenever I have the questions and ask themthey will give mea clearly an unclear answer

老师示范 / 修改方向:Most of the time, we do not talk about our studies, but whenever I have questions and ask them, they will give me an answer.

复习抓手:Most of the time 表示“大多数时候”;talk about our studies 表示“聊学习”;whenever I have questions 表示“每当我有问题时”

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Part 1:可靠朋友

课堂推进:Rice练习回答什么样的朋友可靠,并围绕守时的人展开。

老师处理:老师帮助学生调整逻辑:可靠的人通常守时,但和这样的人做朋友可能会有压力。

学生原始输出:people whoare on time... however... I do not liketype type ofpeople... Because I will be later sometimes

老师示范 / 修改方向:Reliable people are always on time. However, it can be hard to be friends with them because they can be stressful.

复习抓手:reliable 表示“靠谱的/可靠的”;on time 表示“准时”;stressful 表示“让人有压力的”

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Part 1:学习问题找朋友还是老师

课堂推进:Rice选择更愿意先问朋友,因为和朋友随时能聊,更方便。

老师处理:老师帮助学生补全 anytime 和 teacher 的对比结构。

学生原始输出:I would like to askaskmy friendforhelp becauseI think it is more convenient... I can talkto myfriends all the time... anytime... However,Icando that with...teacher

老师示范 / 修改方向:I would like to ask my friends for help because it is more convenient. I can talk to my friends anytime, but I cannot always do that with teachers.

复习抓手:ask my friends for help 表示“向朋友求助”;more convenient 表示“更方便”;anytime 表示“随时”

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Part 2:Describe a time when someone helped you

课堂推进:课堂进入 Part 2,Rice围绕地理老师帮助自己理解一篇关于北京城乡人口数据文章的经历构思两分钟答案。

老师处理:老师逐步追问 who helped、what problem、what the teacher did、result,并补充 article online、latest data、fill the gaps、misleading information、class presentation 等表达。

学生原始输出:after the last geography class yes uh I have some geography problems and I ask our geography teacher Mister Li... this problem是about the difference between... rural area and... urban... He found some article online...

老师示范 / 修改方向:I asked my geography teacher Mr. Li for help. He found an article online, and it had the latest data from Beijing. He filled all the gaps for me and gave me the correct data and the right information.

复习抓手:Part 2 要按 who / problem / help / result 推进;rural area 是“农村地区”,urban area 是“城市地区”;latest data 是“最新数据”;fill the gaps 是“补全缺失信息”;misleading information 是“误导性信息”

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Part 3:为什么人们帮助别人

课堂推进:Rice练习 Part 3 两点展开:帮助别人会带来成就感,也有助于建立信任和长期友谊。

老师处理:老师提醒 Part 3 通常用两个原因展开,并带学生复述完整答案。

学生原始输出:There are two main reasons firstly helping others will make us happy,And people can gain... a sense of achievement... secondly err helping others will build our trust between two people Yeah and sometimes people can make a long-term friendship after that

老师示范 / 修改方向:There are two main reasons. Firstly, helping others can make us happy because we can gain a sense of achievement. Secondly, helping others can build trust between two people and sometimes lead to a long-term friendship.

复习抓手:Part 3 可以用 two main reasons 组织;a sense of achievement 是“成就感”;build trust 是“建立信任”;long-term friendship 是“长期友谊”

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Part 3:学校是否应鼓励学生互助

课堂推进:Rice认为学校应该鼓励学生互相帮助,因为很多学生问题较小,可以在同学之间解决,也能让老师更专注教学。

老师处理:老师帮助学生把 small problems、arguments、save teachers' time、pay more attention to teaching 组织成 Part 3 答案。

学生原始输出:School must in应该should encourage student to help classmate... The most of problem that students student have our small problems... such as problems from homework and some little arguments between students... teacher can uh pay more attention in teaching

老师示范 / 修改方向:Schools should encourage students to help their classmates because many problems students have are small problems, such as homework problems and small arguments. These can be solved between students, so teachers can pay more attention to teaching.

复习抓手:should encourage students to... 表示“应该鼓励学生……”;small arguments 是“小争执”;pay attention to teaching 表示“把注意力放在教学上”

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Part 3:直接帮助还是捐钱

课堂推进:Rice练习用“取决于帮助者能力和场景”回答直接帮助与捐钱的选择。

老师处理:老师引导学生说明:如果没有很多钱可以做志愿者;如果对方很远、灾害场景不安全或需要专业人员,可以捐钱。

学生原始输出:it depends on the ability of Donor or Volunteer if you do not have too much money... you can become a volunteer... however if you have... money and do not have many free time... you can donate...

老师示范 / 修改方向:It depends on the ability of the donor or volunteer. If you do not have too much money, you can become a volunteer and help people directly. If the people you want to help are far away, or if there is a natural disaster like an earthquake, you can donate money instead.

复习抓手:It depends on... 表示“这取决于……”;donor 是“捐赠者”;volunteer 是“志愿者”;natural disaster 是“自然灾害”;earthquake 是“地震”

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Part 3:现在人们帮助陌生人更多还是更少

课堂推进:Rice认为现在帮助陌生人的情况更多,因为互联网连接了世界各地的人,线上求助和帮助不受距离限制。

老师处理:老师提示可以联系互联网,并帮学生修正 help others online、do not need to know each other 的表达。

学生原始输出:There are more people help, strangers definitely yes. Uh because the internet is developed very fast yep and it connect... every people around the world... help others on online... They don't need to know each other

老师示范 / 修改方向:People help strangers more now because the Internet has developed very fast and connects people around the world. People can help others online, and they do not need to know each other.

复习抓手:strangers 是“陌生人”;the Internet connects people around the world 表示“互联网连接世界各地的人”;help others online 表示“在线帮助别人”

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Part 3:帮助别人是否也让帮助者受益

课堂推进:Rice回答帮助别人也会让帮助者受益,包括获得成就感、保持开心、建立新关系和交朋友。

老师处理:老师引导学生使用 gain a sense of achievement、make new friends 等表达。

学生原始输出:Absolutely there are many... when you are helping others yes firstly, you can gain... the sense of achievement... secondly a helping others... can help you to form relationship... make new friends

老师示范 / 修改方向:Absolutely. When people help others, they can gain a sense of achievement, and it will keep them happy. Helping others can also help them form new relationships and make new friends.

复习抓手:benefit 表示“使……受益”;form new relationships 表示“建立新关系”;make new friends 表示“交新朋友”

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Part 3:老人最需要什么帮助

课堂推进:Rice认为老人最需要陪伴,因为医疗和健康护理更容易获得,但子女常因工作无法陪伴父母。

老师处理:老师解释 companionship/company 的区别,并给出更自然的 they need company 表达。

学生原始输出:I think the companionship is the elderly people need most... the medical science and health care is very development... there are less people will accompany with their... Kids... spend time with their parents because they have to work

老师示范 / 修改方向:I think elderly people need company most. Medical science and health care are well developed now, so they can get this kind of help from hospitals. However, many elderly people are lonely because their children have to work and cannot spend much time with them.

复习抓手:elderly people 是“老年人”;companionship/company 是“陪伴”;health care 是“医疗护理”;spend time with their parents 表示“陪伴父母”

二、本节课亮点表现

Rice本节课覆盖了 Part 1 的 helping others 和 friends 两组短问短答,并练习了 Part 2 被他人帮助的经历。

Part 3 重点练习了 two main reasons、it depends on、Internet connects people 等逻辑展开方式。

课堂持续保留学生原始输出,再由老师示范更自然、更准确的表达,便于课后复习和音频化练习。

三、本节课用了哪些材料

四、学生课堂输出

Part 1 - Do you like helping others?

of course uh, uh, uh I think helping other,s will makes me very happy... I'm good at geography sometimesIwillhelpmy classmatesto answer their problem about job yes

Part 1 - help parents

I will watch the dishes afterthe meal... clean all rooms in my house

Part 1 - prefer helping friends or family

Ipreferhoppingmyfriends... because wei spendthe most of my time with my friends at school

Part 1 - close friends

no, I don'tbecause I do not have enough energy to keepkeep the relationship ah friendship with too many people

Part 1 - reliable friends

people whoare on time... ButI do not liketype type ofpeople... Because I will be later sometimes

Part 2 - someone helped you

after the last geography class yes uh I have some geography problems and I ask our geography teacher Mister Li... the difference between... rural area and... urban...

Part 3 - why people help others

There are two main reasons firstly helping others will make us happy... people can gain a sense of achievement... secondly err helping others will build our trust between two people

Part 3 - elderly people

I think the companionship is the elderly people need most... there are less people will accompany with their... they have to work

五、本节课口语段子改进版

以下为按课堂已讲方向整理的课后复习改进版,内容仅使用本次逐字稿中已出现的材料、观点和表达。

Do you like helping others?

答案朗读 1

Yes, of course. Helping others makes me very happy. For example, I am good at geography, so sometimes I help my classmates with their geography problems.

What kind of things do you help your parents in daily life?

答案朗读 2

I usually help my parents with housework. For example, I help them tidy up the apartment, wash the clothes and wash the dishes after meals.

Do you prefer helping your friends or your family members?

答案朗读 3

I prefer helping my friends because I spend most of my time with my friends at school. It is easy for me to notice their problems and help them.

What kind of help do students often need?

答案朗读 4

Students often need help with homework problems and difficult knowledge. Sometimes they also need help when they are studying or taking classes.

Do you have many close friends?

答案朗读 5

No, I don't. I do not have enough energy to maintain too many relationships. It takes time and effort, so I think one or two close friends is quite enough.

Do your friends help you with study?

答案朗读 6

Most of the time, we do not talk about our studies. But whenever I have questions and ask them, they will try to give me an answer.

What kind of friends do you think is reliable?

答案朗读 7

I think reliable people are usually on time. However, it can be hard to be friends with them because they can be stressful sometimes.

Do you prefer asking friends or teachers for help when you have problems with your studies?

答案朗读 8

I prefer asking my friends for help because it is more convenient. I can talk to my friends anytime, but I cannot always do that with teachers.

Describe a time when someone helped you.

答案朗读 9

I would like to describe a time when my geography teacher, Mr. Li, helped me after a geography class. After the last geography class, I had some geography problems, so I asked Mr. Li for help. The problem was about the difference between the population in rural areas and the population in urban areas. I did not understand the numbers and some parts of the article. Mr. Li found a geography article online. It had the latest data from Beijing, including the rural population and the urban population. However, the article was not very well written, so there were many things I could not understand. It was missing some explanations, and there was also some misleading information. Mr. Li explained the article clearly. He filled all the gaps for me and gave me the correct data and the right information. At the end of it, I understood the concept very clearly. In the next class, I did a class presentation on the same topic and got a really good score. I could not have figured out all of this by myself, so I believe that when we have problems, we should go to our teachers for help.

Why do people help others?

答案朗读 10

There are two main reasons. Firstly, helping others can make people happy because they can gain a sense of achievement when they help someone solve a problem. Secondly, helping others is good for relationships. People can build trust and sometimes form a long-term friendship after that.

Do you think schools should encourage students to help their classmates?

答案朗读 11

Yes, I think schools should encourage students to help their classmates. Many problems students have are small problems, such as homework problems and small arguments between students. These problems can often be solved between students. Also, it saves teachers' time, so teachers can pay more attention to teaching.

Is it better to help people directly or donate money?

答案朗读 12

I think it depends on the ability of the donor or volunteer. If you do not have too much money, you can become a volunteer and help people directly. However, if the people you want to help are far away, or if there is a natural disaster like an earthquake, it may not be safe for you to go there. In that case, donating money is a better choice.

Do people help strangers more or less now than before?

答案朗读 13

I think people help strangers more now than before. The Internet has developed very fast, and it connects people around the world. Many people can help others online. They do not need to know each other, and distance is not such a big problem anymore.

Does helping others benefit the helpers too?

答案朗读 14

Absolutely. Helping others can benefit the helpers too. Firstly, helpers can gain a sense of achievement, and this can keep them happy. Secondly, helping others can help people form new relationships and make new friends.

What kind of help do elderly people need most?

答案朗读 15

In my opinion, elderly people need company most. Nowadays, medical science and health care are well developed, so elderly people can get this kind of help from hospitals. However, many elderly people are lonely because their children have to work and cannot spend much time with them. So I think the most important help they need is companionship.

六、本节课纠错

原句问题推荐表达记忆方法

七、课后任务

八、方法和词汇

方法总结

  • Part 1 短问短答:直接回答 + 简短原因/例子
  • Part 2 经历题四步法:谁帮你、遇到什么问题、对方怎么帮、最后结果
  • Part 3 双理由展开
  • 比较题用 it depends on

补充词汇

  • achievement:成就;achievement感可以说 a sense of achievement
  • stressful:让人有压力的
  • earthquake:地震
  • elderly people:老年人