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雅思口语 Part 2/Part 3:二手物品、动物保护法律、法律作用、手机管理

学员:Pine同学 老师:滕达老师 课型:正课 主题:雅思口语:二手物品、动物保护新法律、法律作用、手机使用管理

课后复习模块

练过的材料

  • Describe a second-hand app or website that helped you(Part 2 cue card):学生用闲鱼和 CCD 相机经历进行口语讲述
  • Why do people buy second-hand things?(Part 3 question):讨论购买二手物品的原因
  • Is buying second-hand goods good for the environment?(Part 3 question):讨论二手物品与环保
  • What risks may people face when they use second-hand app?(Part 3 question):讨论二手平台风险
  • Describe a new law you think should be introduced in your country(Part 2 cue card):学生选择动物保护法作为回答主题
  • Why should we protect animals?(Part 3 question):讨论动物保护的理由

词汇和表达

  • brand new:全新的
  • a good deal:划算的交易
  • bargain:讲价
  • trendy:流行的
  • Part 2 开头介绍应用或网站;介绍某个平台是中国最流行的二手商品网站
  • 描述购买经历和结果;我和他稍微讲了价,省了一百元

纠错重点

  • {"rawOrIssue": "brand新", "correctedOrAdvice": "brand new", "reasonOrMemoryTip": "brand new 是固定表达,意思是“全新的”。", "sourceEvidence": "brand new是全新意思 Brandnew不是 brand新"}
  • {"rawOrIssue": "划算的是", "correctedOrAdvice": "It's a good deal.", "reasonOrMemoryTip": "good deal 可以表达“划算、省钱的交易”。", "sourceEvidence": "划算的是 It's a good deal"}
  • {"rawOrIssue": "买东西的人", "correctedOrAdvice": "seller", "reasonOrMemoryTip": "这里风险来自卖家,所以应说 seller(卖家),不是 buyer(买家)。", "sourceEvidence": "买东西的人怎么说?Seller"}
  • {"rawOrIssue": "I contacted with...", "correctedOrAdvice": "I contacted him / I got in contact with him.", "reasonOrMemoryTip": "contact 作动词时通常直接接人;如果用 with,可改为 get in contact with。", "sourceEvidence": "I got contact... I contacted with and I contacted with"}
  • {"rawOrIssue": "is three years ago", "correctedOrAdvice": "was three years ago", "reasonOrMemoryTip": "三年前发生的事用过去时 was。", "sourceEvidence": "First time I used it to buy the second-hand item and is three years ago"}
  • {"rawOrIssue": "necessary be introduced", "correctedOrAdvice": "is necessary / should be introduced", "reasonOrMemoryTip": "necessary 后面不要直接接 be introduced;可拆成 it is necessary 或 a law should be introduced。", "sourceEvidence": "a law for protecting our pets is necessary be introduced"}

可回读产出

  • 本节课口语段子改进版:{"part": "Part 2", "question": "Describe a second-hand app or website that helped you.", "cueCardId": "cue-second-hand-app", "answer": "The most helpful second-hand app I have used is Xianyu. It is probably the most popular second-hand goods website in China, and it is part of Taobao. I have used it to buy all kinds of things, but the last item I bought there was a second-hand digital camera.\n\nI wanted a CCD camera because this type of old digital camera has become trendy again. It uses an old technology, and many people like the special atmosphere in the photos. The pictures are not too sharp or too perfect, so they look a bit old-fashioned and natural.\n\nThe model I wanted was no longer produced, so I could not buy it in a normal shop. I searched for it on Xianyu and found a seller in my area. The camera looked good, so I contacted him and bargained with him a little bit. In the end, I saved one hundred yuan.\n\nWhen I got the camera, it was in great condition, so I think I made a good deal. I was really happy with this purchase because I got something I wanted at a better price.", "pairedWithCueCardId": ""};{"part": "Part 3", "question": "Why do people buy second-hand things?", "answer": "I think people buy second-hand things because sometimes brand-new items are not necessary. If people only need something temporarily, or they only use it once or twice, it is better to find a good deal on second-hand websites. Also, some old technologies and old items are trending again, like CDs, vinyl records, cassette tapes and old digital cameras. Since many of them are no longer made, people have to buy them second-hand.", "pairedWithCueCardId": "cue-second-hand-app"}

课后动作

  • 课后复看老师整理的文字,重点记住 vinyl record、good deal、landfill、stray cats and stray dogs、loophole 等表达。
  • 把本节课 Part 2 的两个长答案各朗读一遍:闲鱼买 CCD、动物保护法。
  • 复习 Part 3 的短答结构:观点 + 原因 + 例子/补充解释。

一、课堂推进时间轴

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Part 2:描述一个有帮助的二手应用

课堂推进:学生先用自己的语言讲述闲鱼和购买 CCD 相机的经历,老师随后帮助补全更自然的表达。

老师处理:老师追问闲鱼和淘宝的关系,并示范如何介绍二手平台、CCD 热潮、讲价和购买结果。

学生原始输出:I have used a lot of um second hand apps. But the most help for one I think is 闲鱼... the first time I used it to buy the second-hand item and is three years ago... I really want a CCD... this version has been stopped producing seven years ago... I found a person who sold an his old CCD... I contacted with...

老师示范 / 修改方向:The most popular second-hand goods website in China is called 闲鱼. It's part of Taobao. I used to buy all kinds of things. The last item I bought on 闲鱼 was a second-hand digital camera. I bargained with him a little bit and I saved one hundred yuan.

复习抓手:second-hand goods website(二手商品网站);trendy item(流行物品);bargain(讲价);make a good deal(买得划算);in great condition(状态很好)

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Part 3:为什么人们买二手物品

课堂推进:学生回答二手物品更划算,老师引导补充临时使用、收藏复古物品和旧技术重新流行等原因。

老师处理:老师纠正 brand new、good deal 等表达,并提供 vinyl record、cassette tapes、rare 等补充词汇。

学生原始输出:Think sometimes brand new items is not so necessary. People may use the it just for one or two time. So maybe second hand will be a 划算的是...

老师示范 / 修改方向:Sometimes people need things temporarily. If you just use it once or twice, maybe it's better to find a good deal on second-hand websites. Some old technologies or old stuff are coming back. They're trending again, like CDs, vinyl records, cassette tapes, old digital cameras.

复习抓手:brand new(全新的);a good deal(划算的交易);temporarily(暂时地);on a regular basis(经常地);vinyl record(黑胶唱片);rare(稀有的)

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Part 3:二手商品是否环保

课堂推进:学生尝试表达重复利用可以减少浪费和消费,老师帮助扩展到耐用品、电子垃圾和 landfill(垃圾填埋场)。

老师处理:老师引导学生用 One person's trash can be another person's treasure,并补充 reduce waste、reduce consumption、landfill 等表达。

学生原始输出:Once rubbish is one's ah trash this will be another's treasure... these items can be recycled reused... will reduce the waste... reduce the cost... reduces consumption of new items production.

老师示范 / 修改方向:A lot of products are very durable and they can be used for many years. When people buy these things, we don't have to make new purchases; therefore, we can reduce waste, especially for electronic devices. If you don't use them and throw them away, they end up in the landfill.

复习抓手:One person's trash can be another person's treasure(一个人的垃圾可能是另一个人的宝贝);durable(耐用的);reduce waste(减少浪费);reduce consumption(减少消费);landfill(垃圾填埋场)

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Part 3:使用二手 App 的风险

课堂推进:学生提出 scam(诈骗)和商品可能有问题,老师补充卖家诈骗、商品真伪和赃物风险。

老师处理:老师纠正 seller(卖家),并示范 legit(合法/真品)和 stolen(被偷的)等风险表达。

学生原始输出:Scam... Maybe scammed by the 买东西的人... second hand things may have some problems.

老师示范 / 修改方向:They can be scammed by the seller. It is also really hard to tell if the item you are buying is legit or not, because sometimes people might end up buying something that is stolen.

复习抓手:scam(诈骗);seller(卖家);legit(合法的/真的);stolen(被偷的);get into trouble(惹上麻烦)

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Part 2:描述一个应该被引入的新法律

课堂推进:学生选择动物保护法作为 Part 2 话题,说明宠物被遗弃、流浪、甚至被卖到餐馆的问题,老师帮助整理成完整答案。

老师处理:老师确认学生思路,并示范 animal protection law、stray cats and stray dogs、strict laws、application to own a dog or cat、punished severely 等表达。

学生原始输出:I think a law for protecting our pets is necessary be introduced... more and more people are interested in feeding a pet, but some of them have not the patience... most of them will be abandoned and become homeless on the street... sold to restaurant and became dishes... it is unfair for these pets because they also have their right for surviving.

老师示范 / 修改方向:I would like to see a new animal protection law or regulation. A lot of young kids get excited in pet shops and buy a cat or dog. Later, when they can't take care of the pet, they just abandon them. People should also be punished severely for abusing animals.

复习抓手:animal protection law(动物保护法);regulation(规定);stray cats and stray dogs(流浪猫和流浪狗);abandon(遗弃);punish severely(严厉惩罚);abuse animals(虐待动物)

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Part 3:为什么要保护动物

课堂推进:学生指出动物是生命、有权利,老师帮助扩展到社会是否尊重生命这一层。

老师处理:老师把回答整理为保护动物本身和保护人类社会两层原因。

学生原始输出:They are live... they had their rights.

老师示范 / 修改方向:One thing is to protect the animals themselves. Another thing is to protect us, because a society that hurts animals will have no respect for any kind of life, including animal life and human life.

复习抓手:right to live(生存权);respect for life(尊重生命);including animal life and human life(包括动物生命和人类生命)

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Part 3:为什么法律重要

课堂推进:学生回答法律可以规范人的行为、保护社会安全,老师进一步解释法律维持秩序的作用。

老师处理:老师引导学生从 human are selfish、order、safety、primal animals 等角度展开。

学生原始输出:Laws can regulate humans behavior... it can keep our society safe and regular and it can also protect us from suffering the consequences.

老师示范 / 修改方向:The first reason is humans are selfish. If everybody just does things in their own interest, then there will be no order. If there is no order and safety, everybody suffers.

复习抓手:regulate behavior(规范行为);keep society safe(维护社会安全);order(秩序);consequence(后果);selfish(自私的)

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Part 3:引入新法律是否困难

课堂推进:课堂围绕自卫、法律漏洞和法律与道德的关系展开讨论,老师强调这是复杂话题。

老师处理:老师用 stand your ground、自卫和 loophole(法律漏洞)的例子帮助学生理解法律制定的复杂性。

学生原始输出:If I try to protect myself from others attacks maybe I will kill others or hurt others accidentally... I think the laws is not very fair... if you do not protect yourself then you may die.

老师示范 / 修改方向:Someone could use it as a loophole. The point of the law is not to protect the innocent; it's to maintain an order. It's a complex topic.

复习抓手:self-defense(自卫);loophole(法律漏洞);maintain order(维持秩序);complex topic(复杂话题)

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Part 3:学校或家长是否应该控制孩子使用手机

课堂推进:学生先说明中国学校通常禁止带电子设备,随后老师帮助整理支持适度管理手机使用的理由。

老师处理:老师提供 harmful content、adult content、fake information、scams、time and place for everything、supervision 等表达,并补充不要过度严格。

学生原始输出:Most of the schools has the regulations that students cannot bring their electronic devices into a campus... In general, I think schools and parents should control the kids' use of their phone and electronic devices.

老师示范 / 修改方向:There is a lot of harmful content online: violent content, adult content, fake information and scams. There is a time and place for everything. However, they shouldn't be too strict. Kids can use their phones in some situations, with supervision, after class or when they finish their homework.

复习抓手:electronic devices(电子设备);harmful content(有害内容);adult content(成人内容);fake information(虚假信息);scams(诈骗);supervision(监督)

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课堂状态观察

课堂推进:本节课学生能持续围绕问题给出观点,并能在老师提示下扩展理由和词汇。

老师处理:老师多次用追问、示范句和中文解释帮助学生把零散观点整理成雅思口语答案。

学生原始输出:学生多次先用中英混合表达观点,再跟随老师补充英文表达。

老师示范 / 修改方向:老师用可朗读答案形式示范 Part 2 和 Part 3 的展开方式。

复习抓手:先回答观点,再补充原因和例子;遇到不会说的词可以先用中文定位,再换成英文表达;Part 3 要把生活例子上升到社会层面

二、本节课亮点表现

能用自己的经历讲出闲鱼购买 CCD 相机的故事,并在老师帮助下补成完整 Part 2 答案。

Part 3 能围绕二手物品的省钱、环保、风险展开讨论。

动物保护法话题选题清楚,能讲出遗弃宠物、流浪动物和保护生命的理由。

手机管理话题能结合中国学校规则和数字时代儿童成长环境进行讨论。

三、本节课用了哪些材料

四、学生课堂输出

Part 2 二手 App

I have used a lot of um second hand apps. But the most help for one I think is 闲鱼... the first time I use it. First time I used it to buy the second-hand item and is three years ago.

Part 2 二手 App

I really want a CCD... this version has had had had been oh have been stopped too uh stopped stop has been stopped producing seven years ago.

Part 3 买二手物品原因

Think sometimes brand new items is not so necessary. People may use the it just for one or two time. So maybe second hand will be a 划算的是...

Part 3 二手物品环保

Once rubbish is one's ah trash this will be another's treasure... these items can be recycled reused... will reduce the waste... reduce the cost... reduces consumption of new items production.

Part 3 二手 App 风险

Scam... Maybe scammed by the 买东西的人... second hand things may have some problems.

Part 2 新法律

I think a law for protecting our pets is necessary be introduced... some of them have not the patience... most of them will be abandoned... become homeless on the street... sold to restaurant and became dishes.

Part 3 法律重要性

Laws can regulate humans behavior... it can keep our society safe and regular and it can also protect us from suffering the consequences.

Part 3 手机使用

Most of the schools has the regulations that students cannot bring their electronic devices into a campus... In general, I think schools and parents should control the kids' use of their phone and electronic devices.

五、本节课口语段子改进版

以下为按课堂已讲方向整理的课后复习改进版,内容只使用本节课逐字稿中出现过的观点、例子和老师示范。

Describe a second-hand app or website that helped you.

答案朗读 1

The most helpful second-hand app I have used is Xianyu. It is probably the most popular second-hand goods website in China, and it is part of Taobao. I have used it to buy all kinds of things, but the last item I bought there was a second-hand digital camera. I wanted a CCD camera because this type of old digital camera has become trendy again. It uses an old technology, and many people like the special atmosphere in the photos. The pictures are not too sharp or too perfect, so they look a bit old-fashioned and natural. The model I wanted was no longer produced, so I could not buy it in a normal shop. I searched for it on Xianyu and found a seller in my area. The camera looked good, so I contacted him and bargained with him a little bit. In the end, I saved one hundred yuan. When I got the camera, it was in great condition, so I think I made a good deal. I was really happy with this purchase because I got something I wanted at a better price.

Why do people buy second-hand things?

答案朗读 2

I think people buy second-hand things because sometimes brand-new items are not necessary. If people only need something temporarily, or they only use it once or twice, it is better to find a good deal on second-hand websites. Also, some old technologies and old items are trending again, like CDs, vinyl records, cassette tapes and old digital cameras. Since many of them are no longer made, people have to buy them second-hand.

Is buying second-hand goods good for the environment?

答案朗读 3

Yes, I think it is good for the environment. One person's trash can be another person's treasure. Many products are very durable, so even if one person stops using them, it does not mean they are useless. If people buy second-hand goods, we do not have to make as many new purchases, and this can reduce waste and consumption. This is especially important for electronic devices, because if people throw them away, they may end up in landfills.

What risks may people face when they use second-hand app?

答案朗读 4

People may face several risks. First, they can be scammed by the seller. Second, second-hand things may have some problems, and it is not always easy to tell before buying them. Also, it can be hard to know if the item is legit or not. For example, some people may end up buying something that was stolen, such as a stolen bike, and then they may get into trouble when the original owner finds it.

Describe a new law you think should be introduced in your country.

答案朗读 5

I would like to see a new animal protection law or regulation in my country. Nowadays, more and more people are interested in keeping pets, especially cats and dogs. However, keeping a pet is a great responsibility, because an animal may live for ten or fifteen years. Some young people get excited in a pet shop and just buy a cat or a dog. Later, when they cannot take care of the pet anymore, they may abandon it. This is one reason why we see many stray cats and stray dogs on the street. I think this is unfair to animals because they are living creatures and they have the right to live. Some stray animals may also be caught and even end up in restaurants, which is horrible. It is not good for the animals, and it is not good for people either, because these animals are not properly taken care of. So I think we need stricter laws. Maybe people should have to apply before they can own a dog or a cat, because a pet is a life, not something people can just buy and throw away. People who abuse animals should also be punished severely.

Why should we protect animals?

答案朗读 6

We should protect animals because they are living creatures and they have their own right to live. Another reason is that protecting animals is also protecting ourselves. If a society hurts animals and has no respect for animal life, it may also lose respect for human life. So animal protection is not only about animals; it is also about what kind of society we want to live in.

Why are laws important?

答案朗读 7

Laws are important because they regulate people's behavior and keep society safe and orderly. Humans can be selfish, and if everyone only does things in their own interest, there will be no order. When there is no order or safety, everybody suffers. So laws help people control their behavior and protect people from serious consequences.

Is it hard to introduce a new law?

答案朗读 8

Yes, I think it is hard to introduce a new law because many legal issues are complicated. For example, self-defense sounds simple, but some people may use it as a loophole. If the law is too loose, people may hurt others and then say they were just protecting themselves. But if the law is too strict, innocent people may not be protected enough. So lawmakers have to think about order, fairness and possible loopholes at the same time.

Should schools or parents control the use of phones?

答案朗读 9

Yes, I think schools and parents should control children's use of phones and electronic devices, but they should not be too strict. The first reason is that there is a lot of harmful content online, such as violent content, adult content, fake information and scams. Even adults sometimes have trouble telling what is real, so children need guidance. Also, there is a time and place for everything. When students go to school, ideally they are there to study, so it makes sense for schools to limit phone use. However, children can still use their phones in some situations, for example after class or after finishing homework, with some supervision. The goal is not to ban phones completely, but to help children control themselves.

六、本节课纠错

原句问题推荐表达记忆方法

七、课后任务

八、方法和词汇

方法总结

  • Part 2 可以按“背景问题 + 具体经历 + 结果感受”组织
  • Part 3 回答先给直接观点,再补原因和例子
  • 不会的词先用中文定位,再换成英文固定表达
  • 法律类话题可从个人、社会秩序、漏洞和公平性展开

补充词汇

  • second-hand goods:二手商品;Xianyu is a second-hand goods website.
  • old-fashioned:老式的、复古的;CCD cameras can create an old-fashioned feeling.
  • application:申请;People may need an application to own a dog or cat.
  • digital age:数字时代;Children today are born in a digital age.