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口语 · 2026-06-26

Jason同学的课程学习报告

IELTS口语素材构思与答案整理,重点训练Part 2长答案展开和可迁移表达

学员:Jason同学 老师:滕达老师 课型:正课 主题:IELTS口语Part 2/Part 3素材构思与答案整理:城市、节日食物、解决问题、电影、语言学习者、常用App

课后复习模块

练过的材料

  • Describe a city you have been to that left a good impression on you(Part 2 cue card):用于构思青岛旅行答案
  • Describe some kind of food you have on special occasions(Part 2 cue card):用于构思端午节粽子答案
  • Describe a clever way to solve a problem(Part 2 cue card):用于构思早起困难和互相藏手机闹钟方案
  • Describe a time you had to use your imagination(Part 2 cue card):老师提到可与解决问题题合并迁移,略作修改
  • Describe a movie you like / your favorite movie(Part 2 cue card):用于构思Avatar电影答案
  • Describe a person who is good at learning languages(Part 2 cue card):用于构思朋友Tom的语言学习方法

词汇和表达

  • coastal city:沿海城市
  • beautiful scenery:美丽的风景
  • car trip:自驾旅行
  • crystal clear:像水晶一样清澈
  • Part 2开头引入话题;今天我想讲……
  • 描述旅行亮点;这次旅行最棒的部分是……

纠错重点

  • {"rawOrIssue": "That left an good impression on you", "correctedOrAdvice": "that left a good impression on you", "reasonOrMemoryTip": "good 前面应使用 a,不用 an。", "sourceEvidence": "“That left an good impression on you”"}
  • {"rawOrIssue": "青海 / 青岛混淆", "correctedOrAdvice": "Qingdao is in Shandong Province; Qinghai is a different province.", "reasonOrMemoryTip": "城市和省份要分清,青岛是山东的沿海城市。", "sourceEvidence": "“山东省青海省别不不是沿海的一个…青岛”"}
  • {"rawOrIssue": "在海底游泳", "correctedOrAdvice": "swimming in the ocean / spending time on the beach", "reasonOrMemoryTip": "这里实际要表达“在海里游泳”,不是“海底”。", "sourceEvidence": "“在海海底游泳…The best part of the trip was spending time on the beach and swim in the ocean”"}
  • {"rawOrIssue": "We made a tent", "correctedOrAdvice": "We set up a tent.", "reasonOrMemoryTip": "搭帐篷用 set up a tent。", "sourceEvidence": "“We made a tent ah we set up a tent on the beach”"}
  • {"rawOrIssue": "swim in ocean", "correctedOrAdvice": "swim in the ocean", "reasonOrMemoryTip": "ocean 前一般加 the。", "sourceEvidence": "“We set up a tent swim in ocean”"}
  • {"rawOrIssue": "There are sweet zones and salty zones.", "correctedOrAdvice": "There are sweet zongzi and salty zongzi.", "reasonOrMemoryTip": "课堂中 zones 是口误,表达粽子应说 zongzi。", "sourceEvidence": "“there are sweet zones and salty zones”"}

可回读产出

  • 本节课口语段子改进版:{"part": "Part 2", "question": "Describe a city you have been to that left a good impression on you.", "answer": "Today I want to talk about a city I visited. It is in Shandong Province, and it is called Qingdao. Qingdao is a coastal city, which means it is by the ocean.\n\nI went there last summer holiday with my parents, my sister, and my cousin's family. We stayed there for about a week, and we had a car trip. My dad and my mom took turns driving, and during the trip we listened to music, talked to each other, and sometimes took a nap in the car.\n\nThe best part of the trip was spending time on the beach and swimming in the ocean. We spent a whole afternoon there. We set up a tent on the beach, put on our swimming suits, and went into the water. The beach was warm because of the sun, but the water was actually quite cold at first. However, after a few minutes, I got used to it, and it felt very comfortable. The water was crystal clear, and I could even see what was under my feet. We also had a swimming competition in the water, and my dad was the fastest.\n\nAnother thing that left an impression on me was the relaxing feeling of the city. The houses in Qingdao were more spread apart. They were not all clustered together like in many big cities, so life there felt more comfortable and less crowded. We also tried some local food. It was delicious, although some of it was a bit salty and spicy for my taste.\n\nOverall, Qingdao gave me a really good impression. If I get the chance, I would love to go back and visit it again.", "pairedWithCueCardId": "", "cueCardId": "cue_city_qingdao"};{"part": "Part 2", "question": "Describe some kind of food you have on special occasions.", "answer": "Today I want to talk about zongzi, which is a special food people usually eat during the Dragon Boat Festival in China.\n\nThe Dragon Boat Festival usually falls in May or June, around the beginning of summer. It is a day when Chinese people remember a great poet called Qu Yuan. Many people also watch dragon boat races during this festival.\n\nThe most special food on this day is zongzi. It is made of sticky rice and wrapped in leaves, so it smells very fresh. Zongzi comes in many different flavors. Some are sweet, and some are salty. Some taste like dessert, while others have meat inside. Personally, I prefer the meat ones, especially pork zongzi.\n\nUsually, people steam zongzi before eating it. If it is freshly made, you can steam it for about twenty minutes, and then it tastes really good. Some people also like cold zongzi. They leave it in the fridge for a few hours, take it out, and dip it in sugar. That can taste refreshing too.\n\nHowever, you should not eat too much zongzi because sticky rice is hard to digest. I eat zongzi almost every year, but I have never made one myself. If I had the chance, I would love to learn how to make zongzi one day.", "pairedWithCueCardId": "", "cueCardId": "cue_food_zongzi"}

课后动作

  • 课后每天晚上朗读老师整理好的口语问题和答案。

一、课堂推进时间轴

1

进入城市类Part 2题目

课堂推进:老师先让Jason从去过的城市开始构思,选定青岛作为一个留下好印象的城市。

老师处理:老师追问城市名称、去的时间、同行人、停留时长,并帮助学生把素材按城市整体印象和旅行亮点展开。

学生原始输出:青岛;去年的暑假;跟我整个家和我表弟全家一起去的;一个星期;风景十分的好;温度比较凉快。

老师示范 / 修改方向:老师把“海边城市、风景好、天气凉快”整理成 coastal city, beautiful scenery, ocean, beach, blue sky, beautiful clouds 等表达。

复习抓手:Part 2城市题先确定城市、时间、同行人和停留时间;整体印象可以从风景、天气、海边特色展开;coastal city 表示“沿海城市”

2

扩展青岛旅行亮点:自驾游与海边活动

课堂推进:Jason补充青岛之行是自驾游,最开心的部分是在海边和海里游泳。

老师处理:老师引导学生说清楚 car trip 的细节,包括车上听歌、聊天、休息,以及海边搭帐篷、换泳衣、游泳、海水很凉但逐渐适应。

学生原始输出:我们是自驾游;我爸开车;他会和我妈轮换;听歌;在海底游泳;在海边待了一个下午;水很清;下面可以看到海底;在水里比谁游得快;我爸最快。

老师示范 / 修改方向:The best part of the trip was spending time on the beach and swimming in the ocean. / We set up a tent on the beach and put on our swimming suits. / The water is crystal clear.

复习抓手:car trip 表示“自驾旅行”;crystal clear 表示“非常清澈”;get used to it 表示“适应它”;Part 2可以用一个具体下午作为高光时刻

3

整理青岛城市题完整示范答案

课堂推进:老师把青岛素材连成一段完整Part 2口语答案,包含地点、同行人、海边体验、城市氛围和再次想去的原因。

老师处理:老师现场示范了一版可朗读的英文答案,并提醒学生按这个方向课后读熟。

学生原始输出:我还挺想再去;房子都是比较散散的;感觉没有那种城市的房子挨在一起;比较好,很舒适。

老师示范 / 修改方向:Qingdao is a coastal city… The beach is super clean, the water is crystal clear… The houses in Qingdao are more spread apart… life can be very relaxing there.

复习抓手:城市题可以用“自然环境 + 具体活动 + 城市氛围 + 是否想再去”组织;spread apart 表示“分散开”;clustered together 表示“挤在一起”

4

节日食物题:端午节和粽子

课堂推进:老师带Jason构思特殊场合吃的食物,选定端午节的粽子。

老师处理:老师追问节日背景、纪念人物、时间、食物原料、包法、口味和吃法。

学生原始输出:在节日;吃粽子;端午节;纪念屈原;龙舟;糯米;叶子;甜的和咸;肉粽。

老师示范 / 修改方向:It is made of sticky rice. / It is wrapped in leaves. / There are sweet zongzi and salty zongzi. / You steam it for about twenty minutes.

复习抓手:sticky rice 表示“糯米”;wrapped in leaves 表示“用叶子包起来”;Dragon Boat Festival 表示“端午节”;hard to digest 表示“不太好消化”

5

解决问题题:起床困难与创意闹钟方案

课堂推进:老师把“来北京备考期间早起困难”改造成一个解决问题的Part 2素材。

老师处理:老师提供了互相藏手机、设置间隔闹钟、把音量调到最大的解决方案,并示范如何说出为什么有效。

学生原始输出:起床可能会有一些意外;早点睡;闹钟。

老师示范 / 修改方向:We each set an alarm clock and gave our phone to the other person. The other person would hide the phone someplace in the hotel room. We set two alarms five minutes apart and turned the volume to the max.

复习抓手:come up with a creative solution 表示“想出一个有创意的解决办法”;turn the volume to the max 表示“把音量调到最大”;get out of bed and look for it 表示“起床去找它”

6

电影题:Avatar

课堂推进:老师引导Jason用Avatar作为电影题素材,从类型、情节、3D视觉、声音、音乐、导演和续集期待展开。

老师处理:老师讲解 science fiction, plot, cinematography, computer-generated, 3D, powerful sound 等表达,并补充导演James Cameron的代表作。

学生原始输出:阿凡达;科幻;在电影院;3D;声音大;音乐行;主要是我爸对它评价比较高。

老师示范 / 修改方向:It is a science fiction movie. / What I like best about it is the cinematography. / Everything is computer-generated. / The sound is loud and powerful, and the music is very memorable.

复习抓手:science fiction 表示“科幻”;plot 表示“情节”;cinematography 表示“电影摄影/画面呈现”;computer-generated 表示“电脑生成的”;memorable 表示“让人印象深刻的”

7

语言学习者题:朋友Tom

课堂推进:老师帮助Jason构思一个擅长学语言的人,并按听说读写四项拆开。

老师处理:老师把朋友Tom的学习习惯整理成听英语电影/歌曲、不看中文字幕、主动和外教交流、读英文教材和小说、写英文日记和用AI改写作。

学生原始输出:之前有一个朋友;在金华的一个机构;学了很久;初二还初三时候就可以考6.5;Tom。

老师示范 / 修改方向:Let me break it down into four parts: listening, speaking, reading and writing.

复习抓手:talented when it comes to language 表示“在语言方面有天赋”;subtitle 表示“字幕”;start a conversation 表示“主动开始对话”;personal journal 表示“个人日记”

8

常用App题:WeChat

课堂推进:老师和Jason构思常用软件题,选择微信,从沟通、点餐、支付、朋友圈、短视频和小游戏展开。

老师处理:老师示范了WeChat答案结构,并提醒它既有用也容易让人花太多时间。

学生原始输出:微信;聊天;text message;Voice Message;图片;视频;小程序;美团;支付;朋友圈;短视频;games。

老师示范 / 修改方向:WeChat is the most popular app in China. We depend on it on a daily basis. It is useful and addictive, so we have to be careful.

复习抓手:text message 表示“文字消息”;voice message 表示“语音消息”;WeChat Moments 表示“朋友圈”;addictive 表示“容易上瘾的”;depend on it on a daily basis 表示“每天都依赖它”

9

课后动作安排

课堂推进:老师说明今天主要做构思,会把内容整理出来,让Jason回课前每天晚上读一读。

老师处理:老师要求学生后续每天晚上朗读整理好的材料。

老师示范 / 修改方向:到时候我给你整理好了问题…每天晚上读读。

复习抓手:课后重点是把课堂构思整理成可朗读答案并每天复习

二、本节课亮点表现

本节课围绕多道近期口语题做素材构思,包括去过的城市、特殊场合食物、解决问题、电影、擅长语言学习的人和常用App。

Jason能够提供个人经历素材,例如青岛旅行、端午节粽子、Avatar、微信使用场景等。

老师重点把零散中文素材整理成英文口语答案,并补充了可直接复用的表达。

三、本节课用了哪些材料

四、学生课堂输出

青岛城市题

青岛;去年的暑假;跟我整个家和我表弟全家一起去的;一个星期;风景十分的好;温度比较凉快。

青岛旅行亮点

我们是自驾游;我爸开车;他会和我妈轮换;听歌;在海底游泳;在海边待了一个下午;水很清;在水里比谁游得快;我爸最快。

端午节食物题

在节日;吃粽子;端午节;纪念屈原;龙舟;糯米;叶子;甜的和咸;肉粽。

解决问题题

起床可能会有一些意外;早点睡;闹钟。

电影题

阿凡达;科幻;在电影院;3D;声音大;音乐行;主要是我爸对他评价比较高。

语言学习者题

之前有一个朋友;在金华的一个机构;学了很久;初二还初三时候就可以考6.5;Tom。

常用App题

微信;聊天;text message;Voice Message;图片;视频;小程序;美团;支付;朋友圈;短视频;games。

五、本节课口语段子改进版

以下为按课堂已讲方向整理的课后复习改进版;本次逐字稿主要训练Part 2构思,未出现可恢复的Part 1短问短答和Part 3讨论追问完整答案。

Describe a city you have been to that left a good impression on you.

答案朗读 1

Today I want to talk about a city I visited. It is in Shandong Province, and it is called Qingdao. Qingdao is a coastal city, which means it is by the ocean. I went there last summer holiday with my parents, my sister, and my cousin's family. We stayed there for about a week, and we had a car trip. My dad and my mom took turns driving, and during the trip we listened to music, talked to each other, and sometimes took a nap in the car. The best part of the trip was spending time on the beach and swimming in the ocean. We spent a whole afternoon there. We set up a tent on the beach, put on our swimming suits, and went into the water. The beach was warm because of the sun, but the water was actually quite cold at first. However, after a few minutes, I got used to it, and it felt very comfortable. The water was crystal clear, and I could even see what was under my feet. We also had a swimming competition in the water, and my dad was the fastest. Another thing that left an impression on me was the relaxing feeling of the city. The houses in Qingdao were more spread apart. They were not all clustered together like in many big cities, so life there felt more comfortable and less crowded. We also tried some local food. It was delicious, although some of it was a bit salty and spicy for my taste. Overall, Qingdao gave me a really good impression. If I get the chance, I would love to go back and visit it again.

Describe some kind of food you have on special occasions.

答案朗读 2

Today I want to talk about zongzi, which is a special food people usually eat during the Dragon Boat Festival in China. The Dragon Boat Festival usually falls in May or June, around the beginning of summer. It is a day when Chinese people remember a great poet called Qu Yuan. Many people also watch dragon boat races during this festival. The most special food on this day is zongzi. It is made of sticky rice and wrapped in leaves, so it smells very fresh. Zongzi comes in many different flavors. Some are sweet, and some are salty. Some taste like dessert, while others have meat inside. Personally, I prefer the meat ones, especially pork zongzi. Usually, people steam zongzi before eating it. If it is freshly made, you can steam it for about twenty minutes, and then it tastes really good. Some people also like cold zongzi. They leave it in the fridge for a few hours, take it out, and dip it in sugar. That can taste refreshing too. However, you should not eat too much zongzi because sticky rice is hard to digest. I eat zongzi almost every year, but I have never made one myself. If I had the chance, I would love to learn how to make zongzi one day.

Describe a clever way to solve a problem.

答案朗读 3

Today I want to talk about a clever way to solve a problem. Recently, I came to Beijing to study and prepare for an exam, and I stayed in a hotel. One problem I had was waking up in the morning. I tried different ways to solve it. I set an alarm clock, and I also asked the hotel front desk to give us a wake-up call in the morning. However, one day they did not call us, so I overslept. To solve this problem, my roommate and I came up with a creative solution. We each set an alarm on our phone, and then we gave our phone to the other person. The other person would hide the phone somewhere in the hotel room. We also set the two alarms five minutes apart and turned the volume to the max. This worked well for two reasons. First, the alarm was loud enough for us to hear in the morning. Second, because we did not know where our own phone was, we could not just reach it and shut it off. We had to get out of bed and look for it. While looking for the phone, we naturally woke up. The next morning, the method worked really well. It was a simple idea, but I think it was quite smart because it solved the problem in a practical way.

Describe a movie you like.

答案朗读 4

Today I want to talk about Avatar, which is one of the most impressive movies I have watched. It is a science fiction movie. I like this movie for several reasons. First, the story is interesting, and the plot is easy to follow. More importantly, the visual effects are amazing. What I like best about it is the cinematography. Everything is computer-generated, and the movie shows an entire planet that people have never seen before. I watched the movie in 3D in the cinema. It felt like I could reach out and touch the things in the movie. Some scenes looked so real that it almost felt like the water could get on my face. The sound was also loud, powerful, and shocking, and the music was very memorable. Another reason I remember this movie is that my dad likes it very much. He once told me that the first Avatar movie was his all-time favorite movie. In his mind, it was one of the best movies ever. The director, James Cameron, is also very famous. He also made movies like Titanic and Terminator. There is another Avatar movie coming out, and I can't wait to see it. Overall, I like Avatar because it has a strong story, amazing visual effects, powerful sound, and a very special world.

Describe a person who is good at learning languages.

答案朗读 5

Today I want to talk about my friend Tom, who is really talented when it comes to learning languages. He can speak very good English, and I think there are many things he does that help him improve. Let me break it down into four parts: listening, speaking, reading, and writing. To improve his listening, he listens to English a lot. He watches English movies and TV shows, and he also listens to English songs. When he watches these programs, he does not always use Chinese subtitles. Sometimes he does not use subtitles at all, and he just guesses what people in the movie are saying. This helps him train his listening skills. When it comes to speaking, he is not shy. Since we go to an international school, we have chances to talk to foreign teachers. A lot of students are shy, but Tom starts conversations as often as possible. I think this is a great way to practise because he actually has to say something in English. For reading, he reads a lot of English textbooks in class. After class, he also reads English novels and English newspapers. Even when he uses social media, he sometimes gets on English social media. For writing, he writes English essays and keeps a personal journal in English. Sometimes he gives his writing to AI and asks for suggestions to improve it. I think these habits are the reason why his English is strong.

Describe an app, software or website you often use.

答案朗读 6

Today I want to talk about WeChat, which is the most popular app in China. I think many people cannot really live without it because we depend on it on a daily basis. The first important use of WeChat is communication. People send each other text messages, voice messages, photos, and videos. We can also make voice calls and video calls. At school, teachers also use WeChat to send homework documents to us, so it is very important. Another thing I use WeChat for is ordering food and paying for things. I am currently staying in Beijing for about a month, and I often use WeChat mini programs to order food. After that, I can use WeChat to pay for it. Nowadays, many people do not use cash anymore. We just use WeChat as a wallet. WeChat is also used for entertainment. There are WeChat Moments, where people post interesting pictures, thoughts, or jokes. There are also short video clips, and people can browse through lots of funny videos. In addition, there are WeChat games, so you can play a quick game just to relax. Overall, WeChat is very useful, but it can also be addictive. If you are not careful, you can spend hours and hours on it. So I think we should use it wisely.

六、本节课纠错

原句问题推荐表达记忆方法

七、课后任务

八、方法和词汇

方法总结

  • Part 2先搭框架:时间、地点、人物、经历、感受
  • 用一个具体高光时刻展开细节
  • 同一素材迁移到相近题目
  • 复杂人物题按四项拆开
  • App题按功能分类展开

补充词汇

  • wake-up call:酒店叫醒电话
  • front desk:酒店前台
  • voice call:语音通话
  • video call:视频通话
  • short video clips:短视频