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Jason同学的课程学习报告

IELTS口语Part 1、Part 2和Part 3连续练习:科学、网站、交通出行、安静地点、城市与城市设施

学员:Jason同学 老师:滕达老师 课型:正课 主题:IELTS口语:science、websites、parks/cars、quiet place、city and city facilities

课后复习模块

练过的材料

  • Do you like science?
  • What kind of websites do you use most often?
  • Do you prefer getting information from websites or books?
  • Did you like going to parks as a child?
  • Did you enjoy traveling by car?
  • Would you buy an expensive car in the future?

词汇和表达

  • science:科学
  • physics:物理
  • entertainment:娱乐
  • schoolwork:学校作业/学习任务
  • Of course I enjoy science because it can explain the world around us.
  • I find physics very interesting.

纠错重点

  • I.Science;I enjoy science.
  • I find interesting;I find physics very interesting.
  • I use entertainment website;I use entertainment websites.
  • more comfort comfortable;more comfortably
  • I first go there when I was in primary school;The first time I went there was in primary school.
  • I enjoy to visit;I enjoy visiting

可回读产出

  • 本节课口语段子改进版:{"topic": "Part 2 - Describe a quiet place you like to go to", "text": "A quiet place I like to go to is a library near my home. It is in the south of my home, and it is also close to a shopping street. The first time I went to this library was when I was in primary school. My mom took me there because I needed to buy some books for study. I have been going to this library for about eight years. I usually go there about once every two weeks, and each time I spend about two hours there. Sometimes I go there by myself, and sometimes I go there with my friends on weekends. We just sit there and read books quietly. The building is big, simple and very modern. There is also a school supply shop and a gift shop, where we can buy pens, pencils and small gifts. There is a little cafe too, so we can buy bubble tea, coffee, sweets and desserts. I like this place because it makes me feel relaxed and happy. It is a place I really enjoy going to."};{"topic": "Part 2 - Describe a city you enjoy visiting", "text": "There are many cities I enjoy visiting, and today I would like to talk about Hangzhou. I went to Hangzhou when I was very young, and now I study in a high school in Hangzhou. It is a very big city with a lot of beautiful scenery, and the buildings in Hangzhou are very modern. After school, I often walk around the city with my classmates. By the way, there is a very good library in Hangzhou. It is super big, and my classmates and I often buy books there. There is also a space for study, so I can get a lot of work done. In the library, we can also buy desserts and bubble tea. I would recommend my friends to visit Hangzhou because they can have a lot of fun there. They can visit the West Lake, which is a very famous place, and they can also visit Lingyin Temple. So I think Hangzhou is a city worth visiting."}

课后动作

  • 每天朗读课后改进版答案,像学唱歌一样熟悉句子节奏。
  • 重点复习quiet place和city两个Part 2答案。
  • Part 3练习用first, second, also, lastly来分类回答。

一、课堂推进时间轴

1

Science话题热身

课堂推进:课堂先从science(科学)相关问题开始,Jason练习说明自己是否喜欢科学,以及感兴趣的科学科目。

老师处理:老师引导Jason用完整句表达喜欢科学的原因,并把physics(物理)相关回答整理成更自然的句子。

学生原始输出:yes I.Science because it can explain um, because science can explain the world around us;oh am interested uh;physics;are interested in physics because i find interesting

老师示范 / 修改方向:Of course I enjoy science because it can explain the world around us. / I find physics very interesting.

复习抓手:science(科学)题可以用 explain the world around us(解释我们周围的世界)来展开;interested in + 科目:interested in physics(对物理感兴趣);I find physics very interesting. 是简单自然的口语表达

2

口语学习方法说明

课堂推进:老师提醒Jason,口语练习不要每句话都先想语法,要像学唱歌一样多读改进版答案,形成自然表达。

老师处理:老师解释课上会先看题、整理想法,再生成符合Jason想法的正确答案;课后要多朗读。

学生原始输出:我感觉我语法有一个问题

老师示范 / 修改方向:口语像学歌一样;上完课以后口语正确页面里面都有一个改进版答案,那个读一读每天多读它。

复习抓手:口语表达先追求自然说出来,再逐步修正语法;课后朗读改进版答案可以帮助形成语感;课堂目标是把自己的想法整理成正确、可复用的答案

3

Websites话题

课堂推进:Jason练习回答最常使用的网站类型,并区分entertainment(娱乐)、schoolwork(学校作业/学习)和shopping(购物)等用途。

老师处理:老师先让Jason用中文想分类,再带他把娱乐、学习、购物网站转成英文表达。

学生原始输出:那些娱乐的;一些学术的东西;I use entertainment website the most often

老师示范 / 修改方向:There are many kinds of websites I use very often. Some are for entertainment, some are for schoolwork or studying, and some are for shopping. I use entertainment websites the most often.

复习抓手:entertainment websites(娱乐网站);schoolwork / studying(学校作业/学习);shopping websites(购物网站);回答分类题可以用 some are for... some are for...

4

Books vs websites获取信息

课堂推进:Jason练习说明自己更喜欢从书本获取信息,因为书页更大,也可以在页面上写写画画。

老师处理:老师帮助Jason把books have larger pages和write and draw on the page整理成完整理由,并纠正comfortable的副词形式comfortably。

学生原始输出:I prefer get information from books因为books have a larger um page sure yes so I can uh, i can research that information more comfort comfortable

老师示范 / 修改方向:I prefer to get information from books because the pages are bigger, and I can use a pen to write and draw on the page. I can write something more comfortably on the page.

复习抓手:prefer to get information from books(更喜欢从书里获取信息);page(页面)可以作为书本优势展开;comfortable是形容词,comfortably是副词

5

Parks童年经历

课堂推进:Jason练习回答小时候是否喜欢去公园,提到可以和朋友玩,也能在公园里看到不同的人和事。

老师处理:老师把过去经历题引导到When I was young开头,并帮助Jason补充play with friends等活动。

学生原始输出:When I was young.I enjoy going to parks.I can view ah ,I can have a lot of form in the park;play with friends;i i play with my friends

老师示范 / 修改方向:When I was young, I enjoyed going to parks. I could play with my friends in the park.

复习抓手:过去经历题要注意过去时:enjoyed;play with my friends(和朋友玩)是公园题常用活动;in the park(在公园里)注意介词

6

Car trips家庭出行

课堂推进:Jason练习描述自己是否喜欢坐车旅行,课堂中整理出可以和家人聊天、玩游戏、唱歌,累了还能在车上小睡。

老师处理:老师根据Jason的回答补充car trips(开车旅行)中的家庭互动和take a nap(小睡)表达。

学生原始输出:I really enjoyed going on car trips with my family because we can play game and we can ah talk with each other have a chat;if im tired嗯,I can have a nap

老师示范 / 修改方向:I really enjoyed going on car trips with my family because we could play games and talk with each other. If I'm tired, I can take a nap in the car.

复习抓手:go on car trips with my family(和家人开车旅行);have a chat(聊天);take a nap(小睡);comfortable than the train 可以改成 more comfortable than taking the train

7

Expensive car未来买车

课堂推进:Jason练习回答未来是否会买昂贵的车。他的观点是车不一定要贵,舒服实用就好,钱可以留给更重要的事情,比如房子。

老师处理:老师肯定Jason的思路,并把回答整理成更自然的英文结构。

学生原始输出:Future no I think um,I will by a car considered to the weather is is comfortable to drive it and uh, i think I can save some money but rather then buy expensive car

老师示范 / 修改方向:I don't need a super expensive car. I can buy a cheap car which is still comfortable. I'll save money for more important things, such as buying a house or a bigger apartment.

复习抓手:I don't need a super expensive car.(我不需要特别贵的车);comfortable to drive(开起来舒服);save money for more important things(把钱省下来用于更重要的事)

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Part 2安静地点:思路搭建

课堂推进:进入Part 2后,老师带Jason复习用时间、地点、人物、事件、感受来组织一段较长答案,并以quiet place(安静的地方)为例练习。

老师处理:老师要求先选一个普通、好说的地点,再按距离、大小、第一次去的时间、频率、停留时长、同行人物、活动和感受展开。

学生原始输出:place I like to the quiet place I like to uh I like to go is a library at South direction good.For my home yes and it is near, ah shopping street

老师示范 / 修改方向:可以按:where it is, what it is like, when you first went there, how often you go there, who you go with, what you do there, and how you feel.

复习抓手:Part 2可以用时间、地点、人物、事件、感受来组织;选择普通、熟悉、好展开的地点更容易说满;quiet place(安静的地方)可以选择library(图书馆)

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Part 2安静地点:Jason原始表达

课堂推进:Jason尝试描述自己喜欢去的图书馆:它在家的南边,靠近购物街,第一次去是在小学时期,妈妈带他去买学习用书,后来大约每两周去一次。

老师处理:老师追问第一次去图书馆的时间、已经去了多久、每次停留多久,并帮助Jason修正时态和句型。

学生原始输出:I first go there when I was in primary school;my mom um took me there;i go there about twice once one two weeks;i go there for reading books;sometimes I will go there with my friends;we just sit there and read book quietly;I feel relaxed and happy

老师示范 / 修改方向:The first time I went to this library was in primary school. / I have been going to this library for eight years. / Every time I go to this library, I spend about two hours there.

复习抓手:The first time I went to... was...(我第一次去……是在……);I have been going there for eight years.(我已经去了那里八年);spend about two hours there(在那里待大约两个小时);read books quietly(安静地看书)

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Part 2安静地点:细节扩展

课堂推进:老师继续带Jason扩展图书馆外观和设施:建筑很大、简洁现代,里面有文具店、礼品店和小咖啡店,可以买饮料和甜点。

老师处理:老师示范如何描述building(建筑)、school supply shop(文具店)、gift shop(礼品店)和cafe(咖啡店)。

学生原始输出:it is big;There are many uh walls;有一些可以卖文具或者买文具;还有喝的

老师示范 / 修改方向:The building looks simple and very modern. There is a school supply shop and a gift shop where we can buy pens, pencils and small gifts. There is a little cafe where you can buy bubble tea, coffee, sweets and desserts.

复习抓手:simple and modern(简洁又现代);school supply shop(文具店);gift shop(礼品店);bubble tea(奶茶);desserts(甜点)

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Part 3家庭噪音

课堂推进:Jason练习回答为什么现在家里比过去更吵。他先提到街上的车和人会带来噪音,老师又补充了家用设备和家庭成员说话的声音。

老师处理:老师把outside traffic(外部交通)、devices(设备)和people talking(人说话)整理成多个原因。

学生原始输出:I think it is because嗯the noisy from outside of the home;Are there more cars and um people on the street soit will make more noise

老师示范 / 修改方向:There is a lot of noise from the traffic outside, and we can hear it in our room. Also, we have more devices that make sounds, like TVs, computers, washing machines, dishwashers and vacuum machines.

复习抓手:traffic noise(交通噪音);devices(设备);washing machine(洗衣机);dishwasher(洗碗机);vacuum machine(吸尘器)

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Part 3老年人为什么喜欢安静地方

课堂推进:Jason练习说明老年人喜欢安静地方的原因:他们精力没有那么多,生活节奏更慢,需要更多休息,也更适合安静的爱好。

老师处理:老师帮助Jason把中文想法转成英文,并补充slow life pace(慢生活节奏)、quiet hobbies(安静的爱好)和crowded places(拥挤的地方)的安全问题。

学生原始输出:他们可能可能会更加更加呃,喜欢也就没有非常多的活力;可能需要更多的休息所以找一个更安静的环境

老师示范 / 修改方向:Old people are not that energetic. They prefer a slower life pace, so they need quiet places to rest. They may have quiet hobbies like painting, drawing or fishing.

复习抓手:not that energetic(没有那么有精力);a slower life pace(更慢的生活节奏);quiet hobbies(安静的爱好);crowded(拥挤的);tourist attractions(旅游景点)

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Part 2城市话题:Hangzhou

课堂推进:Jason练习描述自己喜欢去的城市杭州。他提到杭州很大,有美丽风景和现代建筑,自己现在在杭州读高中,经常课后和同学在城市里走走,也会去图书馆买书、学习、买甜点和奶茶。

老师处理:老师让Jason按Part 2结构讲describe a city you enjoy visiting,并追问是否会推荐朋友去杭州。

学生原始输出:there are many cities I enjoy to visit and uh today I'd like to talk about the Hangzhou.And I visited Chengdu Hangzhou when I was very young and ah it um It is a very big city with a lot of beautiful scenerys and also the build buildings in Hangzhou are very modern;now I study in the high school in Hangzhou;I always walk around hmm this city with my classmate outside after school

老师示范 / 修改方向:There is also a space for study where I can get a lot of work done. / I would recommend Hangzhou because people can visit the West Lake and Lingyin Temple.

复习抓手:beautiful scenery(美丽风景);modern buildings(现代建筑);walk around the city(在城市里走走);West Lake(西湖);Lingyin Temple(灵隐寺)

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Part 3大城市设施

课堂推进:Jason练习回答大城市有哪些facilities(设施)。老师引导他按类别回答:交通、公共服务、医疗、教育和娱乐。

老师处理:老师把设施题拆成transport(交通)、services(服务)、health(医疗)、education(教育)和entertainment(娱乐)等类别,并让Jason用first, second, lastly组织答案。

学生原始输出:There are many kind of facilities in big city the first is the transport um there are many convenient transportation public transports in this city like a underground ah railway yep and The Public bus;For people's health we have Big Hospital;We have Many schools uh Like呃幼儿园是什么?

老师示范 / 修改方向:There are many kinds of facilities in big cities. First, there are public transport facilities, like underground railways and public buses. For health, we have big hospitals. For education, we have kindergartens, primary schools, middle schools, high schools and universities. For entertainment, there are parks, libraries, shopping malls and tourist attractions.

复习抓手:facilities(设施);public transport(公共交通);underground railway(地铁);kindergarten(幼儿园);tourist attractions(旅游景点)

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Part 3现代城市 vs 历史城市

课堂推进:Jason练习说明自己更喜欢现代城市,因为现代城市有更好的服务,生活更舒适,也有更多就业和学习机会。

老师处理:老师帮助Jason扩展modern services(现代服务)、modern apartments(现代公寓)、gyms(健身房)、swimming pools(游泳池)和job opportunities(工作机会)。

学生原始输出:I'd prefer to i prefer more modern cities because they're uh They will have more Modern services in modern cities, and We can have a comfortable life.

老师示范 / 修改方向:It is more comfortable to live in modern cities because people can live in modern apartments and houses. Modern apartments may come with gyms, swimming pools, tennis courts and party rooms. There are also more opportunities because young people go there to study and look for jobs.

复习抓手:modern services(现代服务);comfortable life(舒适的生活);modern apartments(现代公寓);opportunities(机会);look for jobs(找工作)

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Part 3旅游城市考虑因素

课堂推进:最后,Jason练习回答人们去一个城市旅游时会考虑什么因素。他提到景点和酒店,老师补充了城市是否干净、安全,以及去自然景点时不能太偏远。

老师处理:老师引导Jason把attractions(景点)、hotels(酒店)、clean(干净)、safe(安全)和not too remote(不要太偏远)整理为完整答案。

学生原始输出:one factor is嗯呃 well there is Um A attraction ah scenery that attracts people visit;就像,就是嗯居住的这个。啊!酒酒店?

老师示范 / 修改方向:People consider attractions, comfortable and modern hotels, cleanliness and safety. They want to visit a clean city, because dirty places may make them sick. They also want to visit a safe city where their phones or wallets will not get stolen.

复习抓手:attractions(景点);comfortable hotels(舒适的酒店);clean and safe(干净又安全);get robbed(被抢);get stolen(被偷);remote(偏远的)

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教师内部观察

老师处理:老师在课堂中多次根据Jason的原始内容即时追问和扩展,并明确指出城市话题比前一个安静地点话题说得更好。

复习抓手:Jason在城市Part 2题中能较自然调用已有素材,如杭州、图书馆、西湖、灵隐寺等;仍需要继续练习单复数、时态、冠词和句子完整性;Part 3需要继续建立分类回答意识

二、本节课亮点表现

Jason能围绕science(科学)、websites(网站)、car trips(开车旅行)和city(城市)等话题给出自己的真实想法。

Part 2重点练习了用时间、地点、人物、事件、感受来组织长答案。

杭州城市话题表达明显更顺,能说出学习、同学、图书馆、西湖和灵隐寺等具体内容。

Part 3开始练习分类答题,例如把城市设施分成交通、医疗、教育、娱乐等类别。

三、本节课用了哪些材料

四、学生课堂输出

Science

yes I.Science because it can explain um, because science can explain the world around us

Physics

are interested in physics because i find interesting

Websites

I use entertainment website the most often

Books

I prefer get information from books因为books have a larger um page sure yes so I can uh, i can research that information more comfort comfortable

Quiet place

place I like to the quiet place I like to uh I like to go is a library at South direction good.For my home yes and it is near, ah shopping street

Hangzhou

there are many cities I enjoy to visit and uh today I'd like to talk about the Hangzhou.And I visited Chengdu Hangzhou when I was very young and ah it um It is a very big city with a lot of beautiful scenerys

五、本节课口语段子改进版

按课堂已讲方向整理的课后复习改进版,保留Jason课堂中的杭州、图书馆、西湖、灵隐寺、城市设施等内容。

Part 2 - Describe a quiet place you like to go to

答案朗读 1

A quiet place I like to go to is a library near my home. It is in the south of my home, and it is also close to a shopping street. The first time I went to this library was when I was in primary school. My mom took me there because I needed to buy some books for study. I have been going to this library for about eight years. I usually go there about once every two weeks, and each time I spend about two hours there. Sometimes I go there by myself, and sometimes I go there with my friends on weekends. We just sit there and read books quietly. The building is big, simple and very modern. There is also a school supply shop and a gift shop, where we can buy pens, pencils and small gifts. There is a little cafe too, so we can buy bubble tea, coffee, sweets and desserts. I like this place because it makes me feel relaxed and happy. It is a place I really enjoy going to.

Part 2 - Describe a city you enjoy visiting

答案朗读 2

There are many cities I enjoy visiting, and today I would like to talk about Hangzhou. I went to Hangzhou when I was very young, and now I study in a high school in Hangzhou. It is a very big city with a lot of beautiful scenery, and the buildings in Hangzhou are very modern. After school, I often walk around the city with my classmates. By the way, there is a very good library in Hangzhou. It is super big, and my classmates and I often buy books there. There is also a space for study, so I can get a lot of work done. In the library, we can also buy desserts and bubble tea. I would recommend my friends to visit Hangzhou because they can have a lot of fun there. They can visit the West Lake, which is a very famous place, and they can also visit Lingyin Temple. So I think Hangzhou is a city worth visiting.

Part 3 - What kinds of facilities do big cities have?

答案朗读 3

There are many kinds of facilities in big cities. First, there are public transport facilities, like underground railways and public buses. They make people's life more convenient. Second, there are facilities for people's health, such as big hospitals. Third, there are many schools for education, such as kindergartens, primary schools, middle schools, high schools and universities. Also, big cities have many facilities for entertainment, like parks, libraries, shopping malls and tourist attractions. These facilities help people live a more comfortable life.

Part 3 - Do you prefer modern cities or historical cities?

答案朗读 4

I prefer modern cities because they have more modern services, and people can have a more comfortable life there. It is more comfortable to live in modern cities because people can live in modern apartments and modern houses. Some modern apartments also have gyms, swimming pools, tennis courts and party rooms, so people can do sports and spend time with friends. Also, there are more opportunities in modern cities. Many young people go there to study and look for jobs. After they graduate, they may stay there and start working. So I think modern cities are more suitable for me.

Part 3 - What factors do people consider when visiting a city?

答案朗读 5

When people visit a city, they consider several factors. First, they think about attractions. For example, they may want to visit famous places, beautiful scenery or natural parks. Second, they consider hotels. They want to find comfortable and modern hotels, so they can have a good rest during the trip. Also, cleanliness and safety are very important. People want to visit a clean city because dirty places may make them sick. They also want to visit a safe city where they will not get robbed, and their phones or wallets will not get stolen. If they visit natural places, they may also avoid places that are too remote, because it can be hard to get help if they get lost.

六、本节课纠错

原句问题推荐表达记忆方法
I.ScienceI enjoy science.
I find interestingI find physics very interesting.
I use entertainment websiteI use entertainment websites.
more comfort comfortablemore comfortably
I first go there when I was in primary schoolThe first time I went there was in primary school.
I enjoy to visitI enjoy visiting
beautiful scenerysbeautiful scenery
There are many kind of facilitiesThere are many kinds of facilities.

七、课后任务

八、方法和词汇

方法总结

  • Part 2用时间、地点、人物、事件、感受组织答案。
  • Part 3先分大类,再给具体例子。
  • 先保留自己的真实想法,再把句子改成正确自然的英文。

补充词汇

  • explain the world around us(解释我们周围的世界)
  • get information from books(从书本获取信息)
  • write and draw on the page(在页面上写写画画)
  • go on car trips(开车旅行)
  • save money for more important things(把钱省下来用于更重要的事情)
  • slow life pace(慢生活节奏)
  • lose one's temper(发脾气)
  • public transport(公共交通)
  • job opportunities(工作机会)
  • get stolen(被偷)