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托福写作句子整合:定语从句、疑问词名词性从句与地道搭配

学员:春骥同学 老师:未知老师 课型:正课 主题:托福写作:句子整合与从句嵌套专项练习(下半场)

课后复习模块

练过的材料

  • 句子整合与从句嵌套练习题
  • 课堂即时纠错笔记

词汇和表达

  • 顺便经过、停留
  • 有库存、有存货
  • 觉得某物……,如 find the exhibit inspiring(觉得展览令人受启发)
  • 尝起来比……更好
  • the dinner that opened last week(上周新开的这家餐厅)
  • the shop (that) I visited(我去过的那家店)

纠错重点

  • 学生混淆了 stop by(顺便经过)和 have something in stock(有库存)两个搭配。
  • where 问句要先回答地点,再用后置定语补充说明。
  • find something + 形容词 表示“觉得某物……”,不是 exhibited + 名词。
  • 现在完成时的否定形式用 have not + 过去分词。

可回读产出

  • 本节课写作文章改进版:1. 名词 + that 定语从句:the dinner that opened last week(上周新开的这家餐厅);2. 顺便经过与库存:I stopped by the bookstore yesterday. The bookstore had the novel in stock.(我昨天顺便去了书店。书店里有这本小说。)

课后动作

  • 复习本节课 11 个改进句型,每天朗读两遍。
  • 用课堂学过的 5 种从句结构各仿写 2 句。
  • 整理 stop by / have something in stock / taste better than 等搭配,写入个人词汇本。
  • 重点加练省略 that 的后置定语从句。

一、课堂推进时间轴

1

定语从句复习:餐厅描述

课堂推进:复习用 that 引导的定语从句修饰名词,先确定主干再添修饰。

老师处理:带学生回顾上一题,确认名词后接 that 从句的结构。

学生原始输出:delicious interest... dinner... entrees... the dinner

老师示范 / 修改方向:the dinner that opened last week

复习抓手:名词后可接 that 引导的定语从句;先定主干,再添修饰

2

书店场景:stop by + in stock

课堂推进:练习用定语从句描述书店,学习 stop by 和 have something in stock 两个地道搭配。

老师处理:纠正学生连续介词错误,讲解 stop by 与 have something in stock 的含义。

学生原始输出:The bookstore had stopped. had stopped stocking the stocking uh, stocked the novel, novel on on on in on in buy.

老师示范 / 修改方向:I stopped by the bookstore yesterday. The bookstore had the novel in stock.

复习抓手:stop by 表示“顺便经过、停留”;have something in stock 表示“有库存”;定语从句中的 that 作宾语时可省略

3

后置定语:地点先行

课堂推进:学习回答 where 问句时先把地点放在句首,再用后置定语补充说明。

老师处理:解释 where 问句要先回答地点,并把 I visited the shop 倒装为 the shop I visited。

学生原始输出:I visited the the shop

老师示范 / 修改方向:the shop I visited

复习抓手:where 问句先直接回答地点;I visited the shop 可倒为 the shop (that) I visited,作后置定语

4

时间定语从句:when 用法

课堂推进:练习用 when 引导时间定语从句,先回答 why 问句的核心内容再补充细节。

老师处理:引导学生完成 It was moved to a time when everyone could attend。

学生原始输出:it was moved to a time when everyone could attend

老师示范 / 修改方向:It was moved to a time when everyone could attend.

复习抓手:when 可引导时间定语从句修饰 time;回答提问时先给出直接答案

5

地点定语从句:where 用法

课堂推进:学习用 where 引导地点定语从句,修饰 the one / the coffee shop。

老师处理:纠正翻译问题,确认 where 引导的定语从句结构。

学生原始输出:Is that the one where you can watch football matches on screen?

老师示范 / 修改方向:Is that the one where you can watch football matches on screen?

复习抓手:where 引导地点定语从句修饰 one / place

6

疑问词 where 作宾语:find out + wh- clause

课堂推进:学习在 find out 后用 where 引导完整句子作宾语。

老师处理:解释 find out 后接疑问词 + 完整主谓结构,构成名词性从句。

学生原始输出:Some colleagues wanted to find out about nobody... The conference... where they can... register

老师示范 / 修改方向:Some colleagues wanted to find out where they can register for the conference.

复习抓手:find out 后可接疑问词引导的完整句子;疑问词 + 主语 + 谓语构成名词性从句

7

if 宾语从句 + find something + 形容词

课堂推进:学习用 if 引导宾语从句,并掌握 find something + 形容词结构。

老师处理:纠正 exhibited inspiration 的表达,解释 find something + 形容词。

学生原始输出:She was wondering if I found the exhibited inspiration

老师示范 / 修改方向:She was wondering if I found the exhibit inspiring.

复习抓手:if / whether 可引导宾语从句;find something + 形容词 表示“觉得某物……”

8

节奏调整与鼓励

课堂推进:老师调整节奏,鼓励学生完成剩余练习。

老师处理:指出学生对这些句型尚不熟练,安排继续完成剩余五句练习。

学生原始输出:太累了

9

疑问词 how 作宾语:Could you tell me...

课堂推进:学习在 Could you tell me 后用 how 引导完整句子作宾语。

老师处理:解释 Could you tell me 后接疑问词 + 完整句子,强调主谓完整。

学生原始输出:Could you tell me... how you are feeling about it

老师示范 / 修改方向:Could you tell me how you are feeling about it?

复习抓手:Could you tell me 后接疑问词 + 完整句子;how 可引导名词性从句作宾语

10

疑问词名词结构作宾语

课堂推进:理解疑问词引导的名词结构可以出现在宾语位置。

老师处理:讲解 I really enjoyed the documentary we watched yesterday 语境下,疑问词名词结构作宾语的用法。

学生原始输出:How you...

老师示范 / 修改方向:疑问词引导的名词结构放在宾语位置

复习抓手:疑问词可引导名词结构作宾语

11

疑问词 why 作宾语

课堂推进:练习用 why 引导宾语从句,注意现在完成时 have not tried。

老师处理:引导学生补全 why we have not tried the new coffee。

学生原始输出:why we why we uh why why we... have no tried the new coffee

老师示范 / 修改方向:She wanted to know why we have not tried the new coffee.

复习抓手:why 可引导宾语从句;现在完成时用 have not tried

12

疑问词 + to do 结构

课堂推进:学习用 when to do 结构作 know 的宾语。

老师处理:给出 when to start planting some flowers 的正确形式。

学生原始输出:She wanted to know when to start planting some flowers.

老师示范 / 修改方向:She wanted to know when to start planting some flowers.

复习抓手:疑问词 + to do 可构成名词性结构

13

原因表达与比较级

课堂推进:练习回答 why 问句,用 because / 原因从句 + taste better than 表达偏好。

老师处理:引导学生补全原因,纠正 better than 搭配。

学生原始输出:Why do you prefer? ... Better... olive... taste better than all of the other brands I've tried

老师示范 / 修改方向:The coffee tastes better than all of the other brands I've tried.

复习抓手:taste better than... 表示“尝起来比……好”;回答 why 要给出原因

二、本节课亮点表现

本节课围绕句子整合练习,重点训练定语从句(that / when / where)和疑问词名词性从句(where / how / why / if / whether)。

学习了 stop by(顺便经过)和 have something in stock(有库存)等地道搭配。

强调“先定主干,再添修饰”,以及回答提问时“先直接回答,再补充从句”。

区分了学生原始输出与老师示范/纠错版本,便于课后对照复习。

三、本节课用了哪些材料

四、学生课堂输出

课堂内容

delicious interest... dinner... entrees... the dinner

课堂内容

The bookstore had stopped. had stopped stocking the stocking uh, stocked the novel, novel on on on in on in buy.

课堂内容

I visited the the shop

课堂内容

it was moved to a time when everyone could attend

课堂内容

Is that the one where you can watch football matches on screen?

课堂内容

Some colleagues wanted to find out about nobody... The conference... where they can... register

课堂内容

She was wondering if I found the exhibited inspiration

课堂内容

Could you tell me... how you are feeling about it

课堂内容

How you...

课堂内容

why we why we uh why why we... have no tried the new coffee

课堂内容

She wanted to know when to start planting some flowers.

课堂内容

Why do you prefer? ... Better... olive... taste better than all of the other brands I've tried

五、本节课写作文章改进版

本节课为句子整合与从句嵌套专项练习,课堂未产出完整独立文章。以下为按课堂已讲方向整理的课后复习改进版,集中呈现本节课涉及的各类从句用法,供春骥同学课后朗读和仿写。

1. 名词 + that 定语从句:the dinner that opened last week(上周新开的这家餐厅)

2. 顺便经过与库存:I stopped by the bookstore yesterday. The bookstore had the novel in stock.(我昨天顺便去了书店。书店里有这本小说。)

3. 地点先行 + 后置定语:The shop I visited sells these shoes.(我去过的那家店卖这双鞋。)

4. 时间定语从句:The meeting was moved to a time when everyone could attend.(会议改到了大家都能参加的时间。)

5. where 地点定语从句:Is that the new coffee shop where you can watch football matches on screen?(那就是那家可以在屏幕上看足球赛的新咖啡店吗?)

6. 疑问词 where 作宾语:Some colleagues wanted to find out where they can register for the conference.(一些同事想知道他们可以在哪里报名参加会议。)

7. if 宾语从句 + find something + 形容词:The museum attendant was wondering if I found the exhibit inspiring.(博物馆工作人员想知道我是否觉得这个展览令人受启发。)

8. how 引导宾语从句:Could you tell me how you are feeling about the interview tomorrow?(你能告诉我你对明天的面试感觉如何吗?)

9. why 引导宾语从句:She wanted to know why we have not tried the new coffee.(她想知道我们为什么还没尝过新咖啡。)

10. 疑问词 + to do:She wanted to know when to start planting some flowers.(她想知道什么时候开始种花。)

11. 原因表达 + 比较级:This brand of coffee tastes better than all of the other brands I've tried.(这个牌子的咖啡比我尝过的其他牌子都好喝。)

六、本节课纠错

原句问题推荐表达记忆方法
学生混淆了 stop by(顺便经过)和 have something in stock(有库存)两个搭配。
where 问句要先回答地点,再用后置定语补充说明。
find something + 形容词 表示“觉得某物……”,不是 exhibited + 名词。
现在完成时的否定形式用 have not + 过去分词。

七、定稿作文 / 改写方向

句子整合与从句专项练习 课堂未形成完整独立文章,以上为按课堂已讲方向整理的课后复习改进版

没有足够证据生成完整定稿时,先保留待确认状态。

八、课后任务

九、方法和词汇

方法总结

  • 句子整合即时练习
  • 定语从句与名词性从句对比讲解
  • 学生原始输出保留 + 老师示范纠错
  • 地道搭配(collocation)点讲

补充词汇

  • stop by:顺便经过、停留
  • have something in stock:有某物的库存
  • the shop (that) I visited:后置定语:我去过的那家店
  • find something + adjective:觉得某物……
  • taste better than:尝起来比……更好