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雅萱同学的课程学习报告

雅思口语 Part 1 快问快答 + Part 2 听读速记转述

学员:雅萱同学 老师:滕达老师 课型:雅思口语 主题:Part 1 八大话题快问快答 + Part 2 听读速记转述(有用的书 / 童年玩具 / 手机 App)

课后复习模块

练过的材料

  • Part 1 八大话题问答卡(Reading / Typing / Sharing / Friends / Elderly / Work or Study / Mirror / Food)(口语问答)
  • Part 2 语料一:A useful book(经济学教科书)(听读速记转述)
  • Part 2 语料二:A childhood toy(泰迪熊)(听读速记转述)
  • Part 2 语料三:A mobile app(WeChat)(听读速记转述)

词汇和表达

  • crucial:关键的、重要的;It's a crucial part of my studies.
  • electronic devices:电子设备;We are on our electronic devices all the time.
  • type up:敲字完成;We need to type up our school reports and essays.
  • bring us closer:拉近彼此距离;Sharing can bring us closer to each other.
  • Yes, I like reading very much. I think reading is fun. It brings me happiness.
  • We are on our electronic devices all the time. We need to type to chat with friends and type up our school reports and essays.

纠错重点

  • {"issue": "the book I most like is textbook", "correction": "The book I like most is my textbook / my economics textbook."}
  • {"issue": "the paper books are too heavy to take it", "correction": "Paper books are too heavy to carry around."}
  • {"issue": "we are use our electronic devices", "correction": "We use our electronic devices all the time / We are always using our electronic devices."}
  • {"issue": "writing is steps", "correction": "We type to chat with friends and type up our school reports and essays."}
  • {"issue": "it is important to sharing with others", "correction": "It is important to share with others."}
  • {"issue": "we can share happiness and problems with them(主语 we)", "correction": "We can share happiness and problems with each other."}

可回读产出

  • 本节课口语段子改进版:[Part 2 段子一:A useful book] Today I'd like to talk about a useful book. There are many useful books I like to read, such as novels and textbooks. But my favorite one is my economics textbook. I read it in my second year of university. It is really well written and easy to understand. There are lots of interesting examples in it that explain economic principles and theories clearly. It is written by my professor, so whenever I have a problem, I can go to him for help. Our course and exams are based on this book, so it is a crucial part of my studies. I read it after school to review class content, and before exams to memorize and recall important information. Also, it is written in English, so it is an important part of my English study. I have learned many vocabularies, phrases, expressions, and sentences from it. I have not only learned about economics, but also improved my English skills. I keep it with me all the time, and it is super important to me.;[Part 2 段子二:A childhood toy] Today I'd like to talk about a childhood toy. The toy I would like to tell you about is my teddy bear. This teddy bear was a birthday gift, and I have had it for many years. It is pink and fluffy, and it is super cute. My parents gave it to me, and it is absolutely my favorite toy. I kept it with me all the time, especially when I was a kid. Sometimes when I got lonely, I would talk to it. Although I know it is a toy and it doesn't talk, I feel like it listens to me, rather than interrupting me. It was my childhood best friend. Because it is soft and fluffy, I like holding it when I go to sleep. It puts me at ease and makes me feel comfortable, and gives me a sense of safety. Nowadays, I don't play with it that much, but I still keep it in my home. I put it on my couch so I can look at it from time to time. Overall, this is one of the most important objects in my life.
  • 口语段子集:本节课没有写作最终稿,产出为三个 Part 2 口语段子。改进版已整理在 publicStudentParent.improvedOutput 中,标题为“本节课口语段子改进版”。

课后动作

  • 课后背诵本节课三个 Part 2 口语段子:A useful book、A childhood toy、A mobile app。
  • 对着镜子或用手机录音,逐段朗读并回放,重点听时态和第三人称单数。
  • 练习 Part 2 记笔记:用自己能瞬间反应的词,比如中文“表”代表 expression,sth. 代表 something。
  • Part 1 遇到简单问题时,先正面回答,再补充一句原因或例子,不必死磕标准答案。

一、课堂推进时间轴

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开课说明与 Part 1 答题格式

课堂推进:老师说明本节课先不做笔录,采用一问一答形式;每个答案一到两句,先正面回答再补充例子或原因。

老师处理:讲解课堂形式与 Part 1 答题结构:正面回答 + 补充例子/原因。

学生原始输出:(学生确认形式)

老师示范 / 修改方向:Yes, I like reading very much. I think reading is fun. It brings me happiness.

复习抓手:Part 1 回答结构:正面回答 + 例子/原因;答案控制在一到两句

2

Reading 话题快问快答

课堂推进:完成 Reading 话题四个问题:是否喜欢阅读、读得仔细还是快、纸质书还是电子书、喜欢什么书。

老师处理:提问并补充词汇 crucial(重要的)。

学生原始输出:yes, I like reading... the book I most like is textbook; I read very quickly because I'm a student...; I prefer e-books because the e-book is very convenient. The paper books are too heavy, so it's too heavy to take it.; I like to read the textbooks because it's very useful for my study.

老师示范 / 修改方向:可用 crucial 替换 very important:There are crucial parts for my studies.

复习抓手:用 fun / happiness 表达喜欢阅读的原因;crucial 表示“关键的、重要的”

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Typing 话题快问快答与数字时代框架

课堂推进:完成 Typing 话题四个问题,重点练习“打字在当今是否重要”的宏观答法。

老师处理:引导学生用数字时代大环境搭建答案,并提供 type up 等表达。

学生原始输出:I often type on my phone because I need to study and communicate with my friends.; I prefer typing because the typing is very convenient and I need to type when I'm writing my essay online.; I learned to type since I was in primary school and I think it was interesting.; I think typing is very important nowadays because we are use our electronic devices. And typing, we can type to chat with friends and writing is steps. We need to type up our school reports and essays.

老师示范 / 修改方向:We are on our electronic devices all the time. We need to type to chat with friends and type up our school reports and essays.

复习抓手:用 digital age / electronic devices 搭建时代背景;type up 表示“敲字完成”

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Sharing 话题快问快答

课堂推进:完成 Sharing 话题四个问题,重点积累“分享能拉近关系”的表达。

老师处理:提供 bring us closer 与 maintain a close personal relationship 表达。

学生原始输出:Yes, I like sharing things with others.; I usually share delicious food and interesting things with others.; Yes, my parents taught me to share with others because they think it's a good quality that I should have.; I think it is important to sharing with others because through sharing we can maintain a close personal relationship with others.

老师示范 / 修改方向:Sharing can bring us closer to each other. When you share with others, you can maintain a close personal relationship.

复习抓手:bring us closer 拉近彼此距离;maintain a close personal relationship 维持亲密的私人关系

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Friends 话题快问快答

课堂推进:完成 Friends 话题四个问题,重点区分“质量”与“数量”并纠正时间介词搭配。

老师处理:引入 quality is more important than quantity,纠正 we/I 与介词搭配。

学生原始输出:I think friends are very important because we can share happiness and problems with them.; I prefer a few close friends because we can have deep talk with each other.; I often meet with friends once or twice when it at the weekend.; we usually hang out and have dinner or watch a movie together.

老师示范 / 修改方向:I prefer having a few close ones because we can have deep talk and I think quality is more important than quantity. If 'we', use 'with each other'; if 'I', use 'with them'. I meet my friends usually on weekends.

复习抓手:quality is more important than quantity 质量比数量重要;once a week / on weekends 时间表达

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Elderly 话题快问快答

课堂推进:完成 Elderly 话题四个问题,补充老人相关品质素材:经验、耐心、智慧。

老师处理:建议用“没工作过但陪祖父母”思路,补充 life experience / patience / wisdom / deal with difficulties。

学生原始输出:I use used to worked with old people such as my teacher.; I enjoy spending time with older people because I think they are friendly and they all with encourage me to do what I want.; They can learn methods to solve the problems and a good personality they have.; I usually visit my grandparents once or twice a week.

老师示范 / 修改方向:I haven't worked with old people, but I often spend time with my grandparents. They have a lot of life experience, patience and wisdom, so they can teach me how to deal with difficulties.

复习抓手:用 life experience / patience / wisdom 描述老人;deal with difficulties 应对困难

7

Work/Study、Mirror、Food 话题快问快答

课堂推进:快速完成 Work/Study、Mirror、Food 三个话题,巩固专业表达、日常表达与时态/比较级。

老师处理:提问并纠正时态、比较级与搭配。

学生原始输出:my major is Statistics management.; Yes, I like my current major because I think it was interesting and challenging.; I because I think it's very very fun.; I don't like to look in the mirror because I think it's awkward.; I usually look in the mirror every morning because I need to wash my face.; I have one mirror in the restroom of my home.; I like many food when I was young, and the food I like the most is a chocolate.; when I grow up, I start to adapt to some taste of food that I dislike when I was a child.; I like to eat the fresh vegetables that grow up in the current seasons.; I prefer home cooked food because I think it's more healthy.

老师示范 / 修改方向:Use 'it is' not 'it was'. Healthier, not more healthy. It combines science with practical skills. Career perspective / future. Grow in certain seasons, no 'up'.

复习抓手:专业描述:combine science with practical skills;比较级 healthier;career perspective 职业前景

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Part 1 小结:不死背参考答案

课堂推进:老师总结 Part 1:简单问题想不起来时不必死磕标准答案,可以自己直接说。

老师处理:小结答题策略,鼓励学生自然表达。

学生原始输出:(学生听讲)

老师示范 / 修改方向:不一定非要去背那个参考答案...你完全可以自己直接说。

复习抓手:Part 1 重在自然表达,不死磕标准答案

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Part 2 听读速记转述说明

课堂推进:进入 Part 2:老师朗读语料,学生记笔记后转述;第一遍熟悉,第二遍记要点。

老师处理:说明听读速记转述流程。

学生原始输出:(学生确认昨天做过类似练习)

老师示范 / 修改方向:第一遍正常语速熟悉,第二遍稍慢用于记笔记。

复习抓手:听读速记转述流程:听 → 记 → 说

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Part 2 语料一:A useful book

课堂推进:语料一“一本有用的书”(经济学教科书):老师读两遍,学生转述两遍,反馈笔记技巧。

老师处理:朗读范文两遍,指出记缩写“e x”容易想不起来,建议写中文“表”或完整词。

学生原始输出:There are so many useful books in my life, such as novel and textbook, and today I'd like to talk about my economics textbook. I read read it since in ah since I was in the second year of my college. It was written and easy to understand. And there are so many examples and principles. Uh, examples that can explain the principles in the life. I usually reveal this reveal this textbook. And look, uh, and look, looking, look the context. Before exams, I need to ah read it to memorize. Ah, what I study, and this book was is written in English, so it's also important. Format English study. There are so many uh good vocabulary experience phrases and sentence.

老师示范 / 修改方向:Model: my economics textbook... well written... explain economic principles and theories... crucial part of my studies... written in English... vocabularies, phrases, expressions, and sentences. Note: 写 e x 可能想不起来,可写“表”或完整 expression。

复习抓手:经济类话题词汇:textbook, principles, theories, crucial;笔记要记能立即反应的词

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Part 2 语料二:A childhood toy

课堂推进:语料二“童年玩具”(泰迪熊):老师快读、慢读、复习读三遍,学生逐遍转述,并选定为本节课最顺段子。

老师处理:朗读三遍,挑选最顺语料重点复习。

学生原始输出:I have many toys in my childhood, and the toy I like the most is was a teddy bear. It was my birthday gift that my parents gave me. Since I was four four years old, the teddy bear is pink, is fluffy and cute. I always take it. When I was kid and I feel lonely, I talk to it, even though even I know this was a toy. It is a toy and it can speak. But it can listen and it won't interrupt me. When it's fluffy, so I like to hold it. When I was sleeping, it puts me at ease and makes me feel safety and comfortable. When I grow up, I still put it on the couch and I on the couch at my home.

老师示范 / 修改方向:Model: pink and fluffy... parents gave it to me... when I was a kid... listen to me rather than interrupt me... sense of safety... look at it from time to time.

复习抓手:描述物品:fluffy, soft, cute;情感表达:puts me at ease, a sense of safety;from time to time 时不时地

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Part 2 语料三:A mobile app(WeChat)

课堂推进:语料三“手机 App”(WeChat):老师朗读后学生转述,讲解 taxi ride 含义。

老师处理:朗读范文,解释 taxi ride 与 everything app。

学生原始输出:Today I'd like to talk about a mobile app that we often use, WeChat. It is important to our Chinese people, and we use it all the time. I started to use it since I was ten years old, and it is something we can live without. It is a communication tool. I use it to send text messages to my friends. And have and I make video call or voice call. And I often send clips and emojis to others. It almost an everything app, which means that you can use it to buy everything. You can use it to pay for a taxi ride. And pay for restaurant bill, and buying concert tickets. Sometimes I enjoy short videos on WeChat. When I feel tired, I open the WeChat shorts and look for a bit. It brings me laughter and relaxation.

老师示范 / 修改方向:Model: mobile app... can't live without... communication tool... send text messages and make video calls or voice calls... everything app... paying for my taxi ride... buying concert tickets... browsing short videos... brings me laughter and relaxation. taxi ride = 坐出租车的这一段旅程。

复习抓手:everything app 万能应用;taxi ride 出租车行程;browse short videos 刷短视频

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课堂收尾:选定段子、笔记技巧与背诵作业

课堂推进:选定童年玩具为最需要熟练的段子再练一遍;检查笔记,教授缩写 sth. 与 concert 拼写;布置课后背诵三个口语段子。

老师处理:再读再练泰迪熊段子,检查笔记,布置课后背诵。

学生原始输出:Today I'd like to talk about my teddy bear. It's my birthday gift that I have many have been many years. It's pink, it's fluffy and cute. My parents give it to me, so it's one of my favorite toy. When I was a child, I keep it especially when I feel lonely. I talk to it. Although I know it's a toy and it can talk, I still feel like it listening rather than interrupt me. It's fluffy and soft, so I usually hold it when I was sleeping. It put me at ease and brings me sense of comfort and safety. When I grow up, I don't play with often, but I still keep it in my home at the couch on. And I can look at it from time to time. It is one of the most important object to my life.

老师示范 / 修改方向:笔记可用 sth. 代表 something;concert 拼写 c-o-n-c-e-r-t;选择最顺的段子再加深印象。

复习抓手:用 sth. 缩写节省时间;concert 拼写;课后背诵三个口语段子

二、本节课亮点表现

本节课按“Part 1 八大话题快问快答 → Part 2 三个语料听读速记转述”的自然顺序推进。

Part 1 强调:先正面回答,再用 1-2 句话补充例子或原因,不必死背参考答案。

积累了 crucial、electronic devices、bring us closer、quality over quantity、life experience、patience、wisdom 等表达。

Part 2 练习了三段口语段子:一本有用的书、童年玩具、手机 App WeChat。

老师提醒记笔记时不要只写缩写“e x”,要写自己反应最快的词(如中文“表”或完整词)。

三、本节课用了哪些材料

四、学生课堂输出

Reading

yes, I like reading... the book I most like is textbook; I read very quickly because I'm a student. I don't and I don't have much time to read. And if the book is really interesting, I want to find out what's going on.; I prefer e-books because the e-book is very convenient. The paper books are too heavy, so it's too heavy to take it.; I like to read the textbooks because it's very useful for my study.

Typing

I often type on my phone because I need to study and communicate with my friends.; I prefer typing because the typing is very convenient and I can. I need to type when I'm writing my essay online.; I learned to type since I was in primary school and I think it was interesting.; I think typing is very important nowadays because we are use our electronic devices. And typing, we can type to chat with friends and writing is steps. We need to type up our school reports and essays.

Sharing

Yes, I like sharing things with others.; I usually share delicious food and interesting things with others.; Yes, my parents taught me to share with others because they think it's a good quality that I should have.; I think it is important to sharing with others because through sharing we can maintain a close personal relationship with others.

Friends

I think friends are very important because we can share happiness and problems with them.; I prefer a few close friends because we can have deep talk with each other.; I often meet with friends once or twice when it at the weekend.; we usually hang out and have dinner or watch a movie together.

Elderly

I use used to worked with old people such as my teacher.; I enjoy spending time with older people because I think they are friendly and they all with encourage me to do what I want.; They can learn methods to solve the problems and a good personality they have.; I usually visit my grandparents once or twice a week.

Work/Study, Mirror, Food

my major is Statistics management.; Yes, I like my current major because I think it was interesting and challenging.; I because I think it's very very fun.; I don't like to look in the mirror because I think it's awkward.; I usually look in the mirror every morning because I need to wash my face.; I like many food when I was young, and the food I like the most is a chocolate.; I prefer home cooked food because I think it's more healthy.

Part 2 语料一 A useful book(第二遍转述)

There are so many books. A useful books that I have, I often read, like the novel and the textbooks. And one of the most important textbook that I like is my economics textbook. I read it since I was in the second year of my university. It's well written and easy to understand. And there are many fun examples. They can well explain the principle and theories in economic. This book is written by my professor, so if I have any problems, I can ask him for help. Additionally, our school and exam are based on this book, so it's crucial to my study. I always read it after class to review the context and before the exam to memorize and recall important information. And this book is written in English, so it's important to my English study. A important part to my English study, and I learned a lot of vocabularies, phrases and sentences. It improved a lot, not only to my economy but also to my English. So I keep it all the time, and it's really important to me.

Part 2 语料二 A childhood toy(课堂最终版)

Today I'd like to talk about my teddy bear. It's my birthday gift that I have many have been many years. It's pink, it's fluffy and cute. My parents give it to me, so it's one of my favorite toy. When I was a child, I keep it especially when I feel lonely. I talk to it. Although I know it's a toy and it can talk, I still feel like it listening rather than interrupt me. It's fluffy and soft, so I usually hold it when I was sleeping. It put me at ease and brings me sense of comfort and safety. When I grow up, I don't play with often, but I still keep it in my home at the couch on. And I can look at it from time to time. It is one of the most important object to my life.

Part 2 语料三 A mobile app(最终版)

Today I'd like to talk about a mobile app that we often use, WeChat. It is important to our Chinese people, and we use it all the time. I started to use it since I was ten years old, and it is something we can live without. It is a communication tool. I use it to send text messages to my friends. And I make video call or voice call. And I often send clips and emojis to others. It almost an everything app, which means that you can use it to buy everything. You can use it to pay for a taxi ride. And pay for restaurant bill, and buying concert tickets. Sometimes I enjoy short videos on WeChat. When I feel tired, I open the WeChat shorts and look for a bit. It brings me laughter and relaxation.

五、本节课口语段子改进版

以下三个段子按课堂老师示范整理,供课后朗读、TTS 跟读与背诵使用。Part 1 的改进答法见“teacherDemoAndVocabulary”与“corrections”。

[Part 2 段子一:A useful book] Today I'd like to talk about a useful book. There are many useful books I like to read, such as novels and textbooks. But my favorite one is my economics textbook. I read it in my second year of university. It is really well written and easy to understand. There are lots of interesting examples in it that explain economic principles and theories clearly. It is written by my professor, so whenever I have a problem, I can go to him for help. Our course and exams are based on this book, so it is a crucial part of my studies. I read it after school to review class content, and before exams to memorize and recall important information. Also, it is written in English, so it is an important part of my English study. I have learned many vocabularies, phrases, expressions, and sentences from it. I have not only learned about economics, but also improved my English skills. I keep it with me all the time, and it is super important to me.

[Part 2 段子二:A childhood toy] Today I'd like to talk about a childhood toy. The toy I would like to tell you about is my teddy bear. This teddy bear was a birthday gift, and I have had it for many years. It is pink and fluffy, and it is super cute. My parents gave it to me, and it is absolutely my favorite toy. I kept it with me all the time, especially when I was a kid. Sometimes when I got lonely, I would talk to it. Although I know it is a toy and it doesn't talk, I feel like it listens to me, rather than interrupting me. It was my childhood best friend. Because it is soft and fluffy, I like holding it when I go to sleep. It puts me at ease and makes me feel comfortable, and gives me a sense of safety. Nowadays, I don't play with it that much, but I still keep it in my home. I put it on my couch so I can look at it from time to time. Overall, this is one of the most important objects in my life.

[Part 2 段子三:A mobile app] Today I'd like to talk about a mobile app that I use very often, which is WeChat. As you know, WeChat is a very important app for Chinese people. We use it all the time. I started using WeChat when I was about ten years old. Now it is something we can't live without. I do many things on WeChat. First, it is a very important communication tool. I use it to send text messages and make video or voice calls. I also enjoy sending funny video clips and emojis to my friends. Second, WeChat is like an everything app, which means it does everything for you. I use it to pay for my taxi ride, pay for my restaurant bill, and buy concert tickets. Lastly, I enjoy browsing short videos on WeChat. Especially when I get tired from my studies, I open up WeChat shorts and look at them for a bit. It brings me laughter and relaxation.

六、本节课纠错

原句问题推荐表达记忆方法

七、定稿作文 / 改写方向

口语段子集 课后复习改进版

本节课没有写作最终稿,产出为三个 Part 2 口语段子。改进版已整理在 publicStudentParent.improvedOutput 中,标题为“本节课口语段子改进版”。

八、课后任务

九、方法和词汇

方法总结

  • 一问一答式 Part 1 口语操练
  • 老师示范 + 学生跟说 + 即时纠正
  • 听读速记转述(第一遍熟悉,第二遍记笔记,学生复述)
  • 话题素材扩展:用数字时代、quality/quantity、life experience/patience/wisdom 等框架帮助组织答案
  • 笔记策略指导:用缩写或第一反应词,避免只写易混淆的字母缩写

补充词汇

  • crucial:关键的、重要的
  • electronic devices:电子设备
  • type up:敲字完成
  • bring us closer:拉近彼此距离
  • maintain a close personal relationship:维持亲密的私人关系
  • quality over quantity:质量胜过数量
  • life experience:人生经验
  • patience:耐心
  • wisdom:智慧
  • deal with difficulties:应对困难
  • career perspective:职业前景
  • taxi ride:出租车行程
  • fluffy:毛茸茸的
  • put me at ease:让我感到安心
  • a sense of safety:安全感
  • from time to time:时不时地